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Edited by abhiyakreya - 29 January 2013 at 2:36am

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"Kriya come on... please..." I called sweetly making her come to beach at five.

"No rey I have some work." she replied back.

"What is it more important than me?" urh!!! I was soo damn irritated!

"Someone very very very close to me is coming to Mumbai... so I gotta see that person" oh so there is someone more special than me for her.

"Fine just don't call me back!" I just hang up the call.

It ringed the very next second flashing her name on the screen.

"I told something." I replied playing with her.

"I didn't heard that" oh nice so she is playing with me now.!

"Tomorrow at 5 till whenever you desire. Bye"

I heard her say that and she hung up the call.

I was literally grinning like a fool.

Uh- this girl had messed up with me big time!

But I surely do love this girl man!

Thinking for sometime I decided to plan a date for us! That would be just perfect... Chalo bhai rey baccha... buck up!

I was sitting in the FE when someone walked in frustrated of course!

I turned back to see her! Damn are making me go madly in love with you!

But oh wait! I already am madly in love with you.

Arh!! Rey get a grip guy!

"Heyii kriya..." I spoke out.

She didn't turned...she didn't even once looked at me!

What on the earth is she doing over here then.

That's it for the first part

Sorry hell busy due to practicals.

Will update soon :)



Edited by abhiyakreya - 29 January 2013 at 2:54am

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sorry for such a late unres..Ouch

First to comment...Yay!!!!!!!!dhinkchika dhinkchika...Dancing Dancing Dancing

itss Intersting...Smile

Nice start...Big smileBig smile

Reyaansh will arranga a date...Day Dreaming Blushing

waitng for it...Tongue

cont sooonn...pleaj...Embarrassed

And love u soo argue ...BandarWink

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Posted: 29 January 2013 at 3:44am | IP Logged
loved the start...update soon...all the best 4 ur practicals...

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loved it. update soon n pm me




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loved it..
loved d start.. pm me d next part..




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concept good... continue soon wait early...SmileSmileSmileSmileSmile




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