Heya deary... The 25th chapter was amazing... Yeap i loved it to the core...lol i know many will be shocked to read my comment iam not anti manveer😆 but this track of yours is interesting as a writer i know little changes are necessary to keep up the spice in the story... You do get bore by reading lovey dovey updates over and over again...
I just love the way you have progressed the story... Flashbacks and present at the same time writing is difficult but you have done great job!
Well i think manyata would have aborted their baby due to some complications but probably she haven't told n e one... Its just a guess but iam excited for next chapter :D
Sha i just read your ff in one go. It was just so awesume that i'm finding it hard to expess my feelings wid words now. U r a great writer hats off to u. No doubt u did a great job. But but but how could u do that? I mean could u be so cruel wid your dear readers? After reading chappy 25 my head is spinning. I'm hell confused now. Pls update the next chappy soon nd get me out of my misery.
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