I am so sorry Piu and Kiran for my late comments but I was able to read it just now and let me just say thank you.I was so happy to see the little prince Karthikeya alive and well.I was so afraid for him in the last chapter.He really made a place in my heart with his cute lisp and innocent questions in the FB and it made me very happy to see that he still retains that innocence and yet at the same time he is quite perceptive.He immediately understood how his jijaji feels about his Gulaal didi.awww he is cute.
Coming to Kesar.I am just loving him.He is so far my most fav version of Kesar in your stories.The love and respect he has for Gulaal has blown me away.He loves her a lot and he is hurting because of it yet he is willing to free her to make her happy.That is true love.I really hope Gulaal understands the depth of his love for her in the future and I do want to see her feel the same way that he feels.
Anshumali is getting restless and jealous.I can feel her possessiveness getting dangerous soon.Well lack of love can make a person go over the edge right.I loved the little moment where Gulaal covers up for the wound in her wrist.Kesar's little smile made the moment so special.Gulaal has started to feel a tiny little tug of war in her mind.She is getting confused by Kesar.On one hand she feels that he is responsible for all the misfortunes in her life yet she is being pulled towards him.It is very subtle right now and I loved how you portrayed this in the chapter.Devika and Anshumali's war of words was also enjoyable to read.I loved how comfortable Kesar was in his in-law's place.That was so sweet of him.I did not like Gulaal's mom's speech and it made me feel for Gulaal but it was the truth in those times na.Marriages in those days were mostly made for political reasons.A princess had no say but Gulaal is so lucky...she just doesn't know it yet.
oh I am waiting for the next chapter eagerly.Thanks a lot for this awesome chapter.This one is slowly turning out to be my fav among all your stories.
The posters are just great and add a lot to the beauty of the story.The actor you chose for Karthikeya is just perfect.
Edited by minizz - 27 January 2013 at 11:52pm