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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 11:44am | IP Logged
man i feel like a small baby.. to emotional.. to understand whats happening  around..!!

right now i am speechless..!! 

i literally have my jaws dropped..!! 

will comment later.. when back to senses.!

LOVE YOU AVI..!!

you are wonderful.

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 12:13pm | IP Logged

avi. 

for starters this piece was beauty of its kind.

i am not a writer of any kind' and have no such streak.. so i think i am too small to comment or give feedback on what you have written.. You were just marvelous' the pain the emotions you depicted' of both the patient' his wife' were so heart-drenching. I feel too emotional' you have an ability to stir emotions in any person with your writing!! Their emotions' longing to be together in each others arm' their standing strong not for themselves but for their better half. To know the disease, going through it, is difficult, is a misery' but that misery is reduced if you have someone by your side' standing firm for you' feeling your suffering more than you' it gives you the much needed force to pull yourself and come out as a winner may be not for yourself but for her'!!

 

And you leave me spell-bounded.! Take a bow Avi.!!

Hope to read more from you.!

 

 

 



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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by had2bu

 
 
 
Thank you Thank you Thank you!
 
I am glad you noticed the wedding vows I managed to sneak in there.  If only to contrast the pomp and glamour of weddings versus the the actuality of faithfully enacting the wedding vows, I wanted that in this.  It is a love story in a way but "alag che".
 
This piece is very very close to my heart so I am glad it has touched my friends to bring forth such a heartfelt response. 
 
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Very true... in recent time due to all of the hullabulaa, pomp, extravagance associated with a wedding somewhere down the line we miss out on the true essence of the bond a marriage forms between two individuals leading them to oneness not just physically but emotionally & spiritually too... The vows are actually so beautiful but the most difficult to be followed through life's circumstances yet is possible if reciprocated & nurtured with companionship, undersatnding, love, trust & hope for contentment in each others existence & happiness.
 
You write very beautifully... please do continue pening down such precious pieces... Smile
 
 


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Originally posted by had2bu

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Originally posted by had2bu

 
 
 
Thank you Thank you Thank you!
 
I am glad you noticed the wedding vows I managed to sneak in there.  If only to contrast the pomp and glamour of weddings versus the the actuality of faithfully enacting the wedding vows, I wanted that in this.  It is a love story in a way but "alag che".
 
This piece is very very close to my heart so I am glad it has touched my friends to bring forth such a heartfelt response. 
 
Hug
Very true... in recent time due to all of the hullabulaa, pomp, extravagance associated with a wedding somewhere down the line we miss out on the true essence of the bond a marriage forms between two individuals leading them to oneness not just physically but emotionally & spiritually too... The vows are actually so beautiful but the most difficult to be followed through life's circumstances yet is possible if reciprocated & nurtured with companionship, undersatnding, love, trust & hope for contentment in each others existence & happiness.
 
You write very beautifully... please do continue penning down such precious pieces... Smile
 
 
 
To quote our fav author in Ananthpura: "Love is like Santa Claus.  It only lasts as long as you believe in it = Lahari."  For this couple and so many like them, it does last. 
 
I am very new to sharing what I write because my pieces are a bit heavy.  I find beauty in empathy, compassion and actually in the worst circumstances I have found it too.  Should write for Readers Digest survival storiesLOL.  Still I will share as I get better at it.  Thanks again.
Oh yes .. Even I loved that line as well as the hope one carries inspite of the despair faced ...in that line of desert people... so touching & so much food for thought...Smile
 
Will wait for those times when you will feel it fitting to share them ...
 
 


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