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Simply superb Avi 
just loved it
had tears while reading
Actually today I'm running short of words
can think of any
fantastic 
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Wow Avi... You write so beautifully...Clap
 
It left me speechless for  a moment... I just didn't know how & in what way or in what form should I express the emotions I felt while reading it.
 
This one I could relate moreso as I was just compiling the wedding Liturgy for a church wedding for one of my friends in the coming days... & right about sometime before I read your OS I was just going through the wedding vows, & that is what was there & so beautifully yet strongly brought forward in this OS ... "  to have and to hold from this day forward; for better, for worse, for richer, for poorer, in sickness and in health, to love and to cherish, till death us do part". So true, both the man & woman you wrote about here were both suffering, yet it pained them more for the hurt that was present in their partner's eyes. The longing to be in your lovers embrace to have the most soothing & peacful sleep; or the need & want to be the one to reach out & seal & renew your sentiments to the one you love by a kiss or graze on the cheek was so amazingly & simply put forth yet it was so impactful that it brought tears & left gossebumps all over.
 
 
Also the whole hospital banter.. with the naming or labelling the person's name as patient no. 508, is something very insensitive yet always overlooked... I can tell you that cause somewhere its not the hospital personnel's on purpose deed showing their insensitive , indifferent side but in a way to not fell the deep sense of loss & inability to treat & serve unobjectively so as to not form an emotional bond.. even then there is a attachment there by labelling & seeing the undying bond between the couple fighting through it. The whole environment described by you was too good, it leaves you there with a hope for better ... yet strengthen your faith & belief in power of love & bonding
 
 
All in all just loved it so much that putting it in any form of words will be unjustified...Clap
 
 

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Oh wow that was beautiful
Every world I could feel deep inside
Filled with emotion I can so feel their love their longing to be happy together
Very sweet very romantic very painful
But t pain is motivating types
It lingers there some where
Still t love is so beautifully depicted
Awesome

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Though I feel heavy Ouch

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