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Avi,

First,I want to say sorry for not coming here sooner. Actually I started reading it and then paused it. What should I say, real life experience, too close for comfort, hospitals in the last year, just made me pause. 

Today, I took a deep breath and decided I just had to finish reading what I started. 

You write so well. I wish you would write more. Though I will always ask for happier stories. So cheers for that.  


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this was SUCH a nice read!
i SO VERY LOVED it!

as i began reading and the part where the doctor;s wife was describing the park's environment i was just thinking of writing a OS on toronto and the life there and all...a blur had started to emerge in my mind lol

everything was described so wonderfully, with just the right amount of words, not crowded vocabulary nor missing details just  perfect. 

it was really nice to see how someone actually wrote a great piece without the intrusion of any celebs/actors/characters of any famous tv shows!

please do write more :) 

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Originally posted by had2bu

Originally posted by -Grace-

this was SUCH a nice read!
i SO VERY LOVED it!

as i began reading and the part where the doctor;s wife was describing the park's environment i was just thinking of writing a OS on toronto and the life there and all...a blur had started to emerge in my mind lol

everything was described so wonderfully, with just the right amount of words, not crowded vocabulary nor missing detailsjust perfect.

it was really nice to see how someone actually wrote a great piece without the intrusion of any celebs/actors/characters of any famous tv shows!

please do write more :)


Thank you so much for your kind words. I have only been to Toronto for office work so that was just my imagination. Glad you liked it. Hope your cousin gets well soon. My prayers are with her.

thank you for the prayers!
my uni is in toronto so the life that exists there is really something to write aboutLOL

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simple and heart touching..!! 

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