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latekate

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 12:31am | IP Logged
Hi Avi,
I have a lump in my throat and A Tear in the Eye

and yet... every tomorrow a vision of hope

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 4:00am | IP Logged
I too want to read your next in the series story... Waiting for it.   Day Dreaming

@ Krishna : I don't know whether dark chocolate does wonder or no per say but yes for me chocolate does wonders alongwith a hug. So here this one is for you dear...   Hug

@Avi : For you too for all that you wrote and will in future... Hug Wink

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 9:43am | IP Logged
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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by had2bu

Originally posted by aashluvsmaan

The last line..wherein she picks upp the scarf...was the best...

amidst adversities n darkness, she is trying to fill their life with colours

Beautifully written Avi

The dream part was CryCryCry

U had me there

but then life is seldom a bed of roses with happy endings Ouch
 
Thank you Aashu for giving me the encouragement and support to actually post something.  Tere bina kuch nahi hota yaha ya kahin aur...
 
Hug

Hug


aise kaise nahi hota Big smile

Of course hota

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honeygrape

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by had2bu

Originally posted by honeygrape

ohh Avi you made me cry...Cry feeling so bad...and vvery very beutifully penned down...Write more 
 
Sowwie!  Did not mean to make you cry!  Chal from now on I will not PM you.LOL
 
Thanks for reading it.

ooh noShocked i dint mean thatDisapprove

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by mayyo13

Originally posted by sweetkj

Originally posted by had2bu

Originally posted by mayyo13

Avi, after reading a few comments here, I'm cursing myself for being so late to join the forum that I couldn't read Reel! How I wish I could read what has all of you so mesmerised! Unhappy

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The story was awesome and the friendships and arguments on the threads has made me a lot of friends from that time. Devi had a phrase there "Enchanted Time" and I think it was for all of us who participated there. She used to update almost everyday M-F so it was an addiction like no other. One of the things about her writing is she does not use two words if one would do and so you can imagine how power packed it was. It is going to be published so hopefully you would be able to read it at some point. One of my three fav writers on IF for which I can say that I would stand in line to get a copy of their work and to clear it "I hate lines". I wish you could have read it too, your way of analysing things would really make it enjoyable.
She is writing as -publicenemy- now and currently we are in the obsession of Kalarikkal house. Take a peek, it is like nothing available here. Actually during her Ghost Orchid days I forced my sister to join IF so she could enjoy it too.LOL
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ye sab kya haiShocked

mujhe kuch naih mallum!!

mariummm!!Ouch

You haven't read Reel?

nooo! Ouch

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