VirIka &VirMan - U MAKE ME PERFECT Note on pg 43 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
loved it and plz pm me 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thnkzz a lot for ur lovely comments..i m updating d first part..

Priya Gupta :- she flirts  alot wid Viren bcoz he z rich
Raj Singh :- he likes jeevika...

                                                             PART-1

All d awesome foursome study in royal academy. Dey were besties from 5th class..Virat &Jeevika reached d clg n were waiting for Viren & Manvi

Virat :- i tell u jeev's dese both r always late
jeevika :- totally agree wid u Virat n today we Mr.Bhatia;s class dat 2 in d first period.
Virat "- yep... i dont know when dey will understand
jeevika :- lo shaitan ka naam liya aur shaitan hazir
Viren :- hi guys..
Manvi :- Guys y do u come so early..i mean u cme so early 2 d clg but u will go d class late because of us..so dnt waste ur time
Virat :- its not funny..u knw mr.bhatis's class now...
viren was lost in jeevika's beauty but he came back 2 his senses when heard bhatia's name..
Jeevika :-guys no detention dis time
Viren :- we will try

All d four go 2 der classroom ..dey sit in  d same row first virat followed by jeevika,viren,manvi bcoz manvi wants 2 hide herself in bhatia's class..Mr.Bhatia was very strict..n does who dont concentrate will be sent out n will be punished n those who buncked  d class will be in princi's office..

Professor :- Mr.Viren Vadhera n  Miss.Manvi choudary out..
Viren &manvi :- sir
Professor :- i said out..
Jeevika & Virat gave dem a angry look..d bell rang n bhatia came out followed by jeevika & virat
bhatia :- detention for u both...
jeevika :- guys i told u
manvi :- Leave it
Viren :- sorry
Virat :- we r not going 2 stay wid u for detention
Manvi :- no chance mr .master mind u have 2..otherwise i m nt gng 2 talk 2 u ..not only me viren also
Jeevika :- lets stay..
Virat :- hmm
Manvi :- huged her thnk u jeevs

All d classes were completed time for detention...n Priya came 2 meet Viren n Manvi hated her not only her but evryone but never expressed
Priya : o Viren u have  detention today
Viren :- yes darling
Manvi :- feeling bad ..den y dnt u join us
Priya :- kk byee viren c u later..
 
All d four laughed.. went 2 d classroom

Manvi :- Lets play a game
Viren :- k but which game..
Manvi :- Rapid fire..
Viren ,Virat ,Jeevika :- k
Manvi :- lets start wid Virat
Virat :- k 
m:- girl 
v- girl
M-love
V-family
m-shy
V-jeevika
m-naughty
v-manvi
m-brother
v-viren
M- k u very really gud lets see others n will cme bck 2 u
V- k bandariyan
M- she gave him a angry look n now its jeevika
M- start jeevs
j- yaa
M-money
j-busines
M-caring
J-papa
M-bestie
J-Virat
M-Flirty
J-Viren
Viren:-  he was angry..dont know y but he was hurt..dat one word made him hurt..many ppl called him flirty but jeevika never called him like dat..he didnt know y but was feeling vry sad n embarrassed .. he wants 2 hear his name when manvi asked bestie but he heard it for something else..he hit d bench in anger
Everyone was shocked ..n jeevika was very shocked..she came 2 know d reason for his anger
Jeevika :- Viren listen ..i m sorry..i really didnt mean dat
manvi :- yr stop it.. she didnt mean dat...
Viren :- detention z over i m leaving
 But when he was leaving he saw jeavs in tears..he was feeling bad but left Virat followed him n he assured jeevs dat everything will be fine
Manvi n Jevika also left...



Hope u liked it...will update d next part after 2day's epi add me for pm's

Love sravya😊


Edited by rocksravya11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update.
Waiting to read more and for the story to unfold.
Loving virika's characters😃
Edited by ktloversera - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting...! Do continue..!~
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Posted: 11 years ago
Old couples with a fresh start,
looks so cool,
am in!⭐️
pm me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb update
thanks for pm me
cont soon
SJ6... thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
wooow y dosent he just confess atlleast theres gonna ne a couple from them two loo. 
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
man lz update soon im luving the concept
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update...loving it
so interesting
thanx for pm..continue soon!!