VirIka &VirMan - U MAKE ME PERFECT Part 11 updated (Page 2)

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 11:19am | IP Logged

loved the character sketches!! awsome start!!

plz continue soon n do pm me!!

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Interesting continue soon

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Already love it the concept is amazing love it plz continue soon

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loved it and plz pm me

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Thnkzz a lot for ur lovely comments..i m updating d first part..

Priya Gupta :- she flirts alot wid Viren bcoz he z rich

Raj Singh :- he likes jeevika...

PART-1

All d awesome foursome study in royal academy. Dey were besties from 5th class..Virat &Jeevika reached d clg n were waiting for Viren & Manvi

Virat :- i tell u jeev's dese both r always late

jeevika :- totally agree wid u Virat n today we Mr.Bhatia;s class dat 2 in d first period.

Virat "- yep... i dont know when dey will understand

jeevika :- lo shaitan ka naam liya aur shaitan hazir

Viren :- hi guys..

Manvi :- Guys y do u come so early..i mean u cme so early 2 d clg but u will go d class late because of us..so dnt waste ur time

Virat :- its not funny..u knw mr.bhatis's class now...

viren was lost in jeevika's beauty but he came back 2 his senses when heard bhatia's name..

Jeevika :-guys no detention dis time

Viren :- we will try

All d four go 2 der classroom ..dey sit in d same row first virat followed by jeevika,viren,manvi bcoz manvi wants 2 hide herself in bhatia's class..Mr.Bhatia was very strict..n does who dont concentrate will be sent out n will be punished n those who buncked d class will be in princi's office..

Professor :- Mr.Viren Vadhera n Miss.Manvi choudary out..

Viren &manvi :- sir

Professor :- i said out..

Jeevika & Virat gave dem a angry look..d bell rang n bhatia came out followed by jeevika & virat

bhatia :- detention for u both...

jeevika :- guys i told u

manvi :- Leave it

Viren :- sorry

Virat :- we r not going 2 stay wid u for detention

Manvi :- no chance mr .master mind u have 2..otherwise i m nt gng 2 talk 2 u ..not only me viren also

Jeevika :- lets stay..

Virat :- hmm

Manvi :- huged her thnk u jeevs

All d classes were completed time for detention...n Priya came 2 meet Viren n Manvi hated her not only her but evryone but never expressed

Priya : o Viren u have detention today

Viren :- yes darling

Manvi :- feeling bad ..den y dnt u join us

Priya :- kk byee viren c u later..

All d four laughed.. went 2 d classroom

Manvi :- Lets play a game

Viren :- k but which game..

Manvi :- Rapid fire..

Viren ,Virat ,Jeevika :- k

Manvi :- lets start wid Virat

Virat :- k

m:- girl

v- girl

M-love

V-family

m-shy

V-jeevika

m-naughty

v-manvi

m-brother

v-viren

M- k u very really gud lets see others n will cme bck 2 u

V- k bandariyan

M- she gave him a angry look n now its jeevika

M- start jeevs

j- yaa

M-money

j-busines

M-caring

J-papa

M-bestie

J-Virat

M-Flirty

J-Viren

Viren:- he was angry..dont know y but he was hurt..dat one word made him hurt..many ppl called him flirty but jeevika never called him like dat..he didnt know y but was feeling vry sad n embarrassed .. he wants 2 hear his name when manvi asked bestie but he heard it for something else..he hit d bench in anger

Everyone was shocked ..n jeevika was very shocked..she came 2 know d reason for his anger

Jeevika :- Viren listen ..i m sorry..i really didnt mean dat

manvi :- yr stop it.. she didnt mean dat...

Viren :- detention z over i m leaving

But when he was leaving he saw jeavs in tears..he was feeling bad but left Virat followed him n he assured jeevs dat everything will be fine

Manvi n Jevika also left...

Hope u liked it...will update d next part after 2day's epi add me for pm's

Love sravya Smile

Edited by rocksravya11 - 21 January 2013 at 6:52am

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Lovely update.

Waiting to read more and for the story to unfold.

Loving virika's characters

Edited by ktloversera - 21 January 2013 at 6:53am

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Interesting...! Do continue..!~

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Old couples with a fresh start,

looks so cool,

am in!

pm me!

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