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Hello..beautiful girls. Yes. Its me again Lina. Thank you so much who commented and liked my previous OS. Here I m posting my second OS. Hope you all like this too...Lina.


Part 1

Manvi was in her car driving through the busy roads of Mumbai as fast as she could.

" God..why you are punishing me all the time. What did I do to deserve all this. As far as I remember I never troubled you  like all the other girls for a PrinceCharming. So it's time for you to show some mercy and save me from him. Consider this as my last wish for this month " whispered manvi herself.

She parked her car in parking lot of a big shopping mall and started to walk towards the mall.

"Manvi ..manvi ..please stop..I want to talk to you" I heard his voice who is following me from my home.

Ishik.. he is doing the same thing from past 4 months. I told him hundred times that I don't love him. I don't know  , How difficult  for him to understand this small thing . He is a nice guy but I hate him. I don't know why. Sometimes we don't need reason to hate a person.

Perfect. We were at the entrance and everyone was staring at me which humiliated me to the core. But this Ishik , arghh  I hate him. Finally I have decided to stop and clear this thing once and for all. So I stopped and turned around to face him.

I prepared a speech which I m going to tell him. "Ishik.." I started but he interrupted my flow and started his usual speech.

"Manvi .. you already know that I m in love with you. But the new thing which I figured out is you are also in love with me but you are not realizing it" and..he continued his speech but I only heard this part.

Great . Now I need some supporting actors to realize my love like tellywood / bollywood heroine.

"Manvi .. Please listen to me once and say you love me. I will never hurt you . I always " he continued and I ignored him.

 I really felt bad for him. But I can't do anything in this matter. I can't love him out of pity. i have to do something before he manipulates me.when I was thinking hardly I heard a husky voice  who was on the phone and talking to someone. Then I felt his presence near me. May be he was going somewhere. I don't know who he is and how he looks.

I quickly held his hand and pulled him towards me and in front of Ishik. I held his hand tightly for support but I didn't look at him once. I looked at Ishik and started

" Ishik..mmm'I want to tell you something from long time ". I again interrupted by Ishik.

"who is this manvi " ? he asked worriedly.

" He is my fianc. We are getting married soon " . I blurted out the news which was created by me before a minute.

Yes. I made that stranger my fake fianc which surprised me . I shivered lightly at this thought but composed soon.

I felt my fake fianc's gaze at me. Oh god.. He was looking at me , I was looking at Ishik and Ishik was looking at him. We were in a triangle. One of the horrible incident of my life. At that time I only wished to disappear. There was a pin drop silence between three of us.

Finally Ishik broke the silence and asked  him " Is it true "?  I froze there for a second and left his hand to escape. But next second I felt his hand on my waist. At first I shivered but I composed myself to face the situation. He tightened his grip on my waist and said " Yes. We are getting married soon.  And I want you to'" he continued but I was not in my senses to listen any of his words. Then I finally looked at my fake fianc who is already looking at me with a smile on his face.

I must admit it. He is tall , handsome , classy and perfect like Prince Charming. He has  beautiful eyes.I didn't realize when Ishik left from there cause I was busy staring at MFF. He cleared his throat which brought me back from some unknown land.

" So when is our wedding. Winter would be better na" he asked me and still his hand on my waist . I freed myself from his grip and explained everything .

 " I am not going to believe you . Show me your ID / ADD proof " I saw his smirk but..wait..what did he say.

" What " I asked him confused but his next action surprised me. He took my purse and searching for something. I stared at him without any expression.

" yes. I got your address " his words brought me back from confused land. And I saw my Driving license in his hand. I took my purse and DL from him.

" What did you say " I asked him and continued without  waiting for his answer.

" see.. Whoever you are . Thank you so much for your help. I was in trouble and couldn't think any better plan. So I introduced you as my fianc. But it was not my mistake. When I said we are getting married I wasn't serious about it. I m really sorry If I offended you and thanks for your support " I apologized  and turned around to move feeling so much relief after that heavy drama session.

But he caught my wrist and i turned to face him again " I m not whoever. I m virat singh vadhera and i m in love with you at first sight and when I said we are getting married I was serious about it soon to be Mrs. Manvi virat singh vahera " he concluded and brushed his lips lightly on mine and left leaving me confused.

what did he say. is it a proposal. MFF said i love you to me.this is even more confusing.uff..

Be happy...




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Edited by helina - 09 November 2013 at 12:14am

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 7:33am | IP Logged
Hey it was lovely and a very nice concept but I didn't understand was their marriage already fixed or it was love at first sight

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it was love at first sight for virat.thanks for your feedback.i will try to edit.i guess it is confusing.

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 7:44am | IP Logged
hey helina..second os from u..this was awesome...i loved it...loved your concept.. funny one...u should write more..and take care...

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 8:10am | IP Logged

Wow gal u r born writer it was outstanding
Aww love at first sight
U should write more and more

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it was awesome

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awesome OS
loved it

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