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Posted: 11 years ago
tani it was too funny update yaar
riya be na kitana dar rahi ti🤣
she enjoyed full day with them
and shithan bacche alaga plan ke liye
ready ho gaye hai...
iss chakkar mai hi sahi riya ti enjoy ki na
i loved it
and tani dear sorry for the late comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
purva, arj ke beti...lol🤣
awesome
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lizadavidmm

purva, arj ke beti...lol🤣

awesome


itna mat hans Piya 😆

thanks for liking it 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
purva...write a next part to this na...I love it so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: samiya.059

purva...write a next part to this na...I love it so much...


iska next part ...

abhi tak not at all thot abt it 

kuch sochti hun den will write 😊

thanks sami for liking it
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hola all, 


main yaad hun na 

i wrote this work long back, 

and sum days back i was watching a show , 1 of my fav besides arjun, n an idea came from there.

So the idea is not exactly mine, but yeyy i added tani's touch to it.


posting d part for my JrETFians 


remember dere names??? nah ...den go n chek first page ...

else u wont remember dem at all


acha BTW dere would be 1 more part to d torture ...i have to rush for my class else wud have written it abhi...next part coming after the episode..
Love Tani
Edited by _TaNi_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Ria got up early at 6 AM n the most amazing site welcomed her. Arjun sleeping peacefully with his hands nicely kept on hers. She slowly shifted his hands to the side and got up to freshen up. After the morning routine, she came out of the room only to be welcomed by there darling daughter, (No marks for guessing) purva. Ria looking at her amused, asked, "gud morning princess….how come u r awake so early n dat too on a Sunday." Purva,"gud morning mumma…..mom wo I need to talk with u, isliye I sacri…sacrifi….arrey kya kehte hain…" Ria, understanding n spoke the unspoken," sacrificed??" Purva,"haan mom …wahi…sacrificed my sleep because of the work." Ria, picking her up in her arms, and walking towards the kitchen, said, "aww mera baby ….kya hua…" Purva,"mom ….pls neeche utaaro …I m not chota baby..i m  5 years old..okay" Ria,"acha meri princess…ab will u pls tell me ki kya hua ??" Purva,"dekha aapke k chakkar mein I forgot ….listen …as u know dad ki birthday is coming infact it is just a week left, so we were all thinking to plan a surprise party for papa….. " Ria,"aww…so cute …papa wud be very happy..main bhi aapki help kar sakti hun …" Purva(thot for a while),"okay..thik hain …aap bhi kya yaad rakhoge" saying so she giggled n ria quickly came n hold her in her arms n while tickling her said,"acha ji….mumma se badmaashi ……." The mother daughter shared a long hug, n purva parted by giving a light peck on ria's cheek n said,"acha mumma, I will go and inform kushal bhaiya, aniket n mohan. Love u mumma."

In her room,

She immediately made a conference call, and called d entire gang. Kushal," hello team ….welcome all.We had the case of Arjun uncle's birthday party, did ria masi gave d permission. " Purva," yes chief when I m there why to fear. Mom se permission mill gayi, n she is ready to help." Aniket, "yippee, means finally our birthday ka plan is on." Mohan, "now , we need to discuss about the theme first. Phir tasks divide kar lenge…"

After 2 days,

A meeting was held at kushal's place, since there were no chances of arjun being there. Ria, Chotu n shree along with the kids all reached on time. Ria hugged anki and they were chatting when the bacha party came. Kushal," lets start the discussion team." Purva,"okay, so as u all know ki papa's birthday is in just 2 days…so we have planned a surprise party for him. We have called dis mee…arrey kya kehte hian" Aniket," meeting …so that v can discuss the work" Mohan,"we have decided that theme of party should be christ…Christmas."

Ankita slowly whispering to ria,"haila ri …yeh waanar sena is exactly acting like ETFians…kya solid discussion kar rhe hain…I hope koi samjhe ya samjhayun na bol de…or may be Sam ka damn it" kushal saw anki n ri talking, so he said,"mumma, maasi….we are discussing our plans and aap dono masti kar rhe ho…Damn it." Ankita coughed and ria laughed hearing the damn it from him. Aniket,"maasi ma, pls be serious, samjhe ya…" Purva interrupted,"Samjhayun."Ria controlled her laughter n said,"acha yeh to bata do…ki hum sab kya banenge and who is handling decoration, dresses, food"

Purva,"mumma hold on…2 min ruko …we are telling everything."

Mohan,"so dresses ka kaam  would be done by papa" Chotu,"main kyun??" Kushal,"uncle do min ruko na ..let him complete." Mohan continued,"papa aap kar lo na ….even ur frend has the shop who sells clothes for fancy dress." Chotu ,"okay"

Shree was smiling smiling thinking he s safe n will not get any work, just when mohan started again,"Shree uncle aap saara lights,decoration and music department handle karna because u can handle technical things easily." Shree,"haila mujhe bhi kaam …"  Purva,"uncle kaam to karna hi padega"

Aniket continued,"Ankita maasi n uncle(rathore) aap dono will handle food department …."

Purva,"now comes most important work, papa ko party location lekar aana ….yeh kaam mumma will do. Mumma just take care ki papa doesn't reach d location before 12. Since ETF office se apna ghar is at a time interval of 30 minutes, so aap papa k saath 11:20 k around office se nikalna. Now u have to bring him here. " Ankita very softly to choree,"yeh bache bhi na ..love birds ko saath mein chodh diya,…ab to aa gaye yeh tym par." The trio shared a hi5, much to ria's glare and again a scolding from kushal.

Ria,"acha ab 1 baat batao…we did all the work…lights, decoration, food, costumes, sab ho gaya….now wat will u all will do."

Mohan,"sabse important kaam to humare paas hian"

Purva,"aap sabko manage karna….ab supervision k liye bhi to koi chahiye na, mumma"

Ria, while winking at anki ,"haan yeh to sabse mast kam hian"

Mohan,"acha ab yeh bata dijiye,….ki aap sab kaise dress up honge on birthday."

Ankita,"me and sameer would be angel princess and he s my master king."

Sameer,"wow anki..nice choice"

Anki,"wo to hian"

Ria,"how will I dress up, main to arjun k saath rahungi. "

Purva,"mom don't worry, aap aakar 10 min mein costume change kar lena."

Ria,"okay my little princess….."

Chotu,"main banunga santa"

Shree,"n I will b Christmas tree "

Ria,"waise aap sab kids kya banoge"

Kushal,"we will all be dressed in black suits n purva in a fairy dress."

Ria,"chalo den lets begin the preparation"


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while dey r preparing i m going to my classes..


raat ko milte hian with next part


tab tak do tell me how it was😉


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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres
party me first
pyara wala reader..
yay widout pm
dancing 🥳
Bhaiya ka bday yay
di ap bi na
sacrifice n meeting 🤣
Mujhe lga chotu fud :p
clothes nyc
samanki wow
ria grt
awesum
lov it di 🤗 Edited by Payal_156 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hey bhagwan ye kya hai

purva to actually like arjun yaar...

waise tum and tumhari team to kamal hai...iss duniya ka sab se difficult work dhunda hai

to keep eye on elders they are doing their work properly...hmmm 👍🏼

sab se bada mission hai arjun b'day yaar...

kuch bhi chutna nahi chahiye

waise mera invitation kaha hai mujhe nahi bheja na to yaad rakh

Edited by kaveriw2008 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow...3rd installment rocks!!!! purva is so cute...and dammit and SYS...lol..

raat ko milte hain...aur ariya ko bhej dena romance krne mat dena...

loved it