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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 1:30am | IP Logged
Evil Smile HOLA PEOPLE Tani attacks again Evil Smile

this tym 1 very different n Crazy idea which came. 

Yesterday Annika on our forum posted an idea how will Jr rawte, Jr Rathore, Jr Shree, Jr Chotu ...would have handled ETF.

i mixed my idea wid Annika's idea...n here s a crazy post at ur service...

PEOPLE ALL D BEST ...because this is actually very weird

Do tell if it was successful in bringing a smile on ur faces...

if yes, den my mission is fulfilled...


can ny 1 suggest a gud name to it i cudnt think of appropriate name yet

Warning : prepare urself for sumthing really crazy


part 1: scroll downward
part2: want more craziness go n chek page 12
part3: aur bhi chahiye ...okay chek page 18LOL
Part4: page 24

Edited by _TaNi_ - 27 May 2013 at 2:18pm

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Lemme Introduce characters First 

1. Kushal Rathore : Sameer n Ankita rathore k kushal son LOLLOL

2. Purva Rawte : (finally i gave a character to myself ..) yayyy i will b Arjun n Ria ki daughter Dancing

3. Aniket : Shreekant sen k Not so techy Son ...he s a fan of arjun rawte 

4. Mohan : Chotu ka chotu sa son ...very cute n Smart

I m Actually ROFLing ROFL while writing d CS

Edited by tani23 - 20 January 2013 at 1:34am

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It was a Sunday morning, 8 AM, ria came in the room n found arjun getting ready. Ria hugged him from back n asked:"Aaj jaana compulsory hain ''.kya" Arjun:"Arrey jaan, dun worry 1 din ka hi kaam hain delhi ka '.n den y do u worry rathore is also going wid me" Ria:"hmm wo to hian..par I will get bored na '.aapke bina kuch bhi acha nahi lagta " Arjun had a smile on his face, after hearing Ria's heart out. Arjun shifted towards her n hugged her. He kissed her on her forehead, "y do u worry jaan ''.1 day will pass very easily 'wo hain na 'humari shaitaan no 1 '." Ria:"Usi ka to sabse jyada darr hain'.no 1 shaitan n u have pampered her a lot'..abhi sirf 4 years ki hain '.but completely Jr Rawte hain'.Akdu no 1. Meri koi baat hi nahi maanti "

 Arjun:"Waise hian kahan madam '..u know na usko dekhe bina I never start my day" Ria:"arrey wo ETF office gayi hain madam'.unhein papa ka office dekhna tha'..dun worry I m also going abhi'all d kids r dere''shree hain abhi wahan '.Aap aur rathore sir nhi ho na '.so all kids will cum wid me after dere party at ETF office. " Arjun:"ria madam ..apka to enjoyment khoob hone waala hain'..all 4 kids yahan par..hungama hoga aaj to ...Ankita ko bhi bula lo" Ria:"Shayad u have no idea but ankita bhi tumhare aur Rathore sir k saath ja rhi hain'..usne bola tha ki koi to hone chahiye aap dono ki care karne waala 'madam ko sameer sir k besides koi nahi dikhta'aur shree n chotu ko bhi case se related work hain'.so I m wid all 4 kids whole day'."

Arjun (tried controlling his smile):"Ria all d very best!!!"   Ria:"Thank u I really needed it"

Arjun dropped Ria at ETF office n den headed for airport after hugging his 'second love' Purva. Ria was in her cabin while all 4 kids were in d conference hall. Ria was unaware of what children were doing.

In conference hall,

Kushal (Rathore n ankita's son):"Team '.we have a case."

Aniket( shree's son):"Inspector Aniket reporting sir'yeh sabhi mumma papa ne hum sweet kids ko pareshan kar rakha hain 'we need to do sumthing"

Mohan,(Chotu 's son)"yes sir 'yeh mere papa always busy in either his wrestling practice or ETF office'I asked him to take us on picnic par no"

Purva,"we need to fight for justice'yeh meri mummy ..pareshan karke rakha hain '.din bhar files ke saath work ,'n besides dis if I ask her to gve me Maggi den she say No its not gud for health..n mere papa'."

Aniket (interrupts):"Chup kar pagal '..tere papa kitne mast hian '.Arjun uncle is d best '.wo hum sabko chocolate bhi dete hain'."

Kushal:"No fighting team '.Waise purva teri mummy k chakar mein meri mom bhi mujhe Maggi nahi deti"

Aniket :"n mere papa ..din bhar wo stupid laptop mein kuch kuch karte hain'..i cudnt even differentiate ki mere papa kaun hian n laptop kaunsa hain"

Purva:"Haan yaar'tere papa 'to computer hi dikhte hain'.sabse cute to chotu uncle hian'

Mohan"koi cute nahi hain'bahut scold karte hian '.."

Kushal:"Then it is decided 'enough is enough 'I have a plan" 

purva :"Bol Bol"

Here Ria thot of checking d kids, so she came in the conference room. Before she wud have opened d gate, she heard kushal sayin,"I have a plan" Ria (in her mind )"Kaun se plan ki baat kar rhe hain'yeh 4 badmaash'.zara sunti hun..phir sabko batati hun'"

Inside conference room,

Kushal gets up n checks for sumthing in his school bag. He takes out d packet, n shows it every1.  Aniket,"Yeh kya hain" Mohan,"tujhe din mein bhi dikhta nahi hian kya ' s rat poison" Kushal,"Maine na mom ko yeh use karte tym dekha hain''."

Purva:"To tum iske saath kya Karne waala hian"

Kushal:"Duffer'.tu pagal hain kya'..suno'sabse pehle prepare a list of all those mummy ' papa '.jo humko pareshan karte hian"

Aniket:"Mere Computal waale papa"

Kushal :"Meri mummy Ankita"

Purva:"Ria Mommy,'..unka name sabse pehle likh"

Mohan:"Aur mere papa'.mummy k saath I can adjust "

Kushal:"den it s decided'hum sab k mummy papa ko hum kabhi ETF office mein laakar ..unke food mein yeh mila denge n humari problem solve"

Purva:"par 1 baat bata'..mummy papa nahi honge '..hum sab rahenge kahan'ETF office mein"

Aniket:"arrey idiot'Arjun uncle ko aur sameer uncle rahenge na "

Here ria outside was shocked. Ria:"I always thot ki yeh no 1 badmaash hian'.par humare bache criminals kab se ban gaye'..r dey mad kaise planning kar rhe hain''..i need to do sumthing." She thot she was dreaming, so she pinched her self, "Ouch..yaar dis s Truth..i m not dreaming '.Yeh mere bacho ko kya ho gaya '.Kya karun ??"

She was about to step inside n scold dem all, but den she stopped as purva'her princess start speaking again.

Purva:"Phir to we can do sumthing aaj hi'meri mummy hian na '..yahann par"

Aniket:"Idea to acha hian'par  unko yeh kaise de??...Socho Socho TEAM'think"

Mohan:"1 kaam karte hian'.unko water mein milakar de dete hian"

Kushal:"arrey nahi '.iski mummy ko coffee achi lagti hain'usmein dete hian"

Outside ria ,"OMG 'God save me '.in bacho ko ho kya gaya hain'I need to talk to sumbody," She picks up her phone, n checks d caller book. She thinks of calling Arjun but he must b on flight. Ria:"Shree ko cal karti hun" Ria calls on his number, but it was out of coverage. She den tries calling Chotu, but all in vain.

She turns backward n see Purva n Aniket standing dere. Purva:"Coffee le lo." Aniket :"Yes Maasi '..yummy coffee hain" Ria:"No beta'I dun want to drink"

Purva:"mumma please have it '." Kushal n mohan also joins :"please maasi le lo coffee'.hum sab ne milkar aapke liye banayi hain"

Ria was sweating with AC on. Ria (in her mind;):"tum sabne banayi hian ..isi ka to dar hain.."

All 4 kids coming towards her wid coffee in d hand n ria turning backwards. She s moving backwards n  kids coming towards her. Their voices which were requesting her to drink dat coffee were echoing all around. Finally Aniket holds her hand n made her sit ''wid purva forcefully making her drink coffee.

Ria shouts :"NAHIII"'''''''''

Arjun :"Ria kya hua '.y r u shouting'.koi bad dream dekha"

Ria came in her senses n thanked god dat her children are all normal n it was just a dream. Ria :"Purva kahan hain" Arjun:"bahar kushal,aniket n mohan  k saath khel rahi hain"  Ria then noticed arjun getting ready , she asked whether he s going sumwhere.

Arjun:"Yes jaan'me n rathore r going to delhi for a case''all 4 kids aaj humare yahan hi rahenge '.tumhara day to mast pass hoga"

Ria again got reminded of her dream, n she again shouted,"Nahi "

PS: I m ready for all d comments...sahi sahi batana ...kaisa tha yeh JHATKA ...

n please suggest a name na ...

Edited by tani23 - 20 January 2013 at 1:43am

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Kuchh kehne ke layak toh chhora hota...ShockedShockedShocked
That was hillarious!
gawwd! They planned to poison them... Dream mein hi sahiii...ROFLROFLROFLTheir talks are so like their parents...ROFL Computer konsa hai and papa kaun samajh nii aata...ROFLMommy Maggi nii detii...ROFL
Mohan ne kaha papa ko include karo and he can manage with mummy!ROFLArjun ko naii marenge coz he gives chockiesROFLAnd They made list...ROFL they mixed is Rhea's coffee, coz she likes coffee...ROFLOMG!! Naii main aur nii hans sakti!ROFL
P.S :: Well done Taanii, itna bada sacrifice! Aap Archu ki beti bann gayiii...
Ab mujhe phirse hansne do...ROFLROFLROFL

Edited by Love_Arnie - 21 January 2013 at 12:07am

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Purva what is dis OMG I asked my cousin dat i am reading structure of plumule n stealthily started reading os as soon as i read it i burst out laughing he caught me
awesome n brilliant
i was laughing all along.
These children my God

Edited by samiya.059 - 21 January 2013 at 12:07am

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Purva i am smiling even b4 reading

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ROFL sorry i cant stop myself,they are planning to kill their mamma papaShocked  OMG ye bacche hai ya kuch aur!!!ShockedShocked i am sure ajke baad riya kabhi bhi coffee nehi piyegiLOLLOL aur then the dream is coming true alsoROFLROFL

kushal toh pakka ETF chief ka hi beta lag raha tha,kya mast case present kiyaLOLLOL sachme they are  victims of a major crimeLOL aniket ka dialogue cracked me up "woh khud ek computer lagta hai"ROFLROFL

tera jawab nehi my purviClapClap kya dimaag payi hai. great job i love it a lotThumbs Up

love you sister for such a funniest OS everHugHug

p.s. hey "junior ETFians back in action" kaisa rahega??

Edited by -sree13- - 20 January 2013 at 2:32am

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