Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


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Virika OS: Still water runs deep! Pg 12 (Page 4)

..Amrita.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 11:09am | IP Logged
will be waiting for the part

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Part 2

Jeevika was upset with viren.It wasnt that she doubted on his love for her.It was just that she was really hurt.She knew viren loved badi maa,more then anything,but she was his wife,if not him then who would understand her?

Jeevika lay on the bed,tears forming in her hazel eyes,smudging the kaajal.
Viren entered the room.with a tray of food.He placed it on the table.
"Jeevika,u didnt come for dinner,so I brought your food in the room."
Jeevika didn't reply him,but it was not on purpose,she didnt listen to him.
"Jeevika!! "
Jeevika sat up on the bed with a jerk.
"U called me?"
"No..I didn't! I was talking to the walls."
"Viren ji,stop it,what's the problem,now?"
"Nothing...eat Ur food."
"I m not hungry."
"Will u please stop with the drama? U know,u would fall weak if u don't eat,n u haven't eaten properly from more then two days."
"As if u care.."
"Yeah right,I give u damn about u and your health."
"As expected..."
Jeevika just walked up to the bathroom and banged the door.
Viren sat on the couch,he ran his fingers through the hair and remembered the moment me spent with jeevika just three days from now.
"Viren ji,this was like the best picnic I had in my life.It was so much fun!"
"With u,all my life is fun!"
"Viren ji,I love u!"
"Jeevika,may I ask u something?"
"Go ahead.."jeevika said as she lay her head on his chest and tightened her arms around his waist.
"R u..like by any chance pregnant?"
Jeevika widened her eyes and withdrew from the hug,a confused expression on her face.
"Viren ji,what are u saying? "
"Yah,with all these mood swings of yours,I thought u know.."
"I hate u...Can't I be a little romantic with u? Why always u?"
"Oh control...calm down my wifey!! So someone wants to romance,huh?"
Jeevika was about to go but viren caught hold of her wrist!
"I won't let Ur mood change this time,Mrs Vadera."
With this.he picked her up and directed her to the bed.As he lay her down,he comforted himself on top of her.Silence filled in the room.All they could hear was,each other's heart beat,that increased every second as the distance between them shortened.
Viren slowly sealed her lips with his own.His hands roamed around her body,removing the cloth draped around her slender figure and undoing the knots of the blouse.
Jeevika responded to each touch of his with qual desire.
She felt butterflies in her stomach,as his lips made their way towards her forehead,the eyes,the checks.He nuzzled her neck,kissed her bare shoulders.He carressed the soft stomach!
The night passed n they made love!
Viren came back to reality.He realized so much had changed from then to now.He had changed,jeevika had changed.However,he didnt want their love to change.He couldn't take it anymore.He had to talk to jeevika and clear things out.He loved her,more then anything in this world.
Just then he saw jeevika coming out of the bathroom,she wiped her face with the towel and looked drained.Viren could tell she wasnt well.He walked up to her and held her by the shoulder.
"Viren ji!"
"I feel tired,can u please pick me till the bed."
"Jeevika,what happened,r u fine? U look ill? Is anything wrong?"
"No viren ji,just a lil tired,I m fine,if u have a problem in helping me out I will do that by myself."
"Don't be silly,come here."
Viren lifted her up and made her sit on the bed.
"Wait here,I will bring your food."
"No,I m not hungry."
"Jeevika plz..."
Just then his phone started to ring,he went to receive the call and returned within 5 minutes.Jeevika had already slept.
Viren went near her n looked at her.She was the best thing god had created.She was an angel.
Sorry jeevika,because of me u slept without eating anything.I m really sory for all the pain I have given u,for all the tears.. I m really sorry! I don't deserve u! But I promise I will make everything fine by tomorrow,this bitter phase will soon pass.Everything wil be like before,perfect!
He kissed her good bye and lay beside her,cursing himself for everything.

I hope this update made sense.I have no idea what rubbish I wrote and why.I m sorry for totally ruining the SS with the crap update.
Anyways,I still hope u guys find it satisfactory enough to leave one comment and hit the like button.
I know I m being unreasonable,but plz understand.Plz if u want me to continue am write more stories on virika in future,so plz like and comment.
I won't update till I get decent amount of likes and comments.
Sorry for this,but so it is.

Edited by kinha_4_ever - 27 January 2013 at 6:59am

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-Haju- IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 3:45am | IP Logged

First one to comment wohoo :P


U call this rubbish like seriously.

This is marvelous

I wish it could even happen in the serial.

The update was superb.

Good work and keep it up

Will be waiting for the next part.

And please update ur other stories as well. :)  

Edited by Virika11 - 24 January 2013 at 4:29am
surbhi1994 Goldie

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 5:19am | IP Logged
damn good!!!
continue soon
Syed695 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Nice update...! hope they show some sense even in the show..done with sacrifices...Thnks for the PM:)
karankrysle Senior Member

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 5:53am | IP Logged
pm wen cont! Clap
--Ayesha-- IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 5:54am | IP Logged
U cald it rubbish ahhh nt at all.
It was awesome,suprb.
I think jeevs is pregnant,btw we will find out in next update.
Continue soon n thanx 4 d pm.
Update urs other story aswell
Nishtha.Relan Goldie

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 6:25am | IP Logged
its is superbb update thanks for the PM continue soon

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