Dil kya karein???Part 20(last part)Pg 26 - Page 7

Posted: 17 years ago
hey reshmi plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.
Posted: 17 years ago
wow reshmi awesum part 👏
puh-leez cont soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
wowww reshmi this part was awusumm..it was toaalyy rocking man.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon.
Posted: 17 years ago
                                                       PART 9




All were waiting for Tia and Suraj in the dining hall . Ranveer was in a very depressed mood . He came for dinner only because Yuvi and Sid insisted him to .Then Tia and Suraj came and joined them . Ranveer was fuming with jealousy on seeing Suraj continuously speaking to Tia . He felt like lifting Suraj up and throwing him into the sea.

After dinner Tia was strolling in the garden . As usual our hero also comes there and stands behind her.

Ranveer --- Tia
Tia --- ( without turning around coz she could not meet his eyes) Haan Ranveer …bolo..
Ranveer --- Tia hum aapse kuch puchna chahte hain.
Tia --- (knowing that he is going to ask about Suraj) Ranveer Tia ko neend aa rahi hain , isliye hum baad mein baat karte hain.
Ranveer --- (holding Tia's hand when she was about to go ) Tia kya aap Suraj se pyaar karti hain.
Tia --- Ranveer yeh Tia ka personal matter hain , iska answer dena Tia jaroori nahi samajthi.
Ranveer --- ( pulling her towards him and holding her close) Tia aap aaj bhi humse pyaar karti ho , phir…………. phir Suraj se kyon shaadi kar rahi ho…..
Tia --- Ranveer Tia ko jaane do
Ranveer --- (now holding her even more closer) Nahi Tia……. Hum aapko jawab diye bagair nahi jaane denge

Since they were very close to each other , they got lost in each other's eyes. And then Ranveer moved his lips closer to Tia 's to kiss her but before he could do so she ran away.

She goes straight to Suraj's room and tells him that they will leave for Mumbai tomorrow since an important work has come up . And the next morning they leave without informing anyone except Pri and Meher.

And later when Ranveer came to know about this he also returns to Mumbai totally heartbroken.

Ranveer was not able to cope with the fact that Tia is with someone else . He had nightmares about Tia being very close to Suraj .

On the other hand Suraj noticed that Tia was very unhappy and was hiding something from him . Suraj always knew that Tia didn't love him but he was sure that she will have feelings for him one day . But now he was feeling doubtful about it -----he didn't know why …….
And Tia realized that she could never get over Ranveer and decided to tell Suraj the truth.

Tia --- Suraj Tia tumse kuch kehna chahti hain
Suraj --- Ha gorgeous …..bolo na…… entire week tumne mujhse thik se baat bhi nahi ki …..Mein tumse baat karne ke liye taras gaya hoon .
Tia --- Suraj …..Who ….Tia ne tumhe apne first love ke barein mein bataya tha na….
Suraj --- Haan ……..Tumhara usse break –up ho gaya tha….aur Tia maine tumse pehle bhi kaha tha ki mujhe tumhare past ke barein mein kuch nahi jaanna
Tia --- Par agar past present mein aa jaaye toh
Suraj --- Matlab

And Tia tells him everything about Ranveer

Tia --- Suraj Tia tumhe cheat nahi karna chahti thi . Tia ne aaj tak tumse kuch nahi chupaya.. Tumne Tia ke good aur bad times mein Tia ko support kiya , Tia yeh kabhi nahi bhool sakti .Isliye Tia ne tumhe saara truth bata diya . Ab tum jo bhi decide karoge Tia usse accept karegi .

Ranveer was restless as usual . The fear of losing Tia was gripping him . Aashi , Yuvi and Sid were upset about not being able to do anything for him this time . And The next day Suraj called him

Suraj --- Hi Ranveer .
Ranveer --- ( not in a very courteous tone) Haan ……..Boliye Suraj
Suraj --- Ranveer kal Tia ne mujhe tum dono ke barein mein sab kuch bataya .
Ranveer --- (elated) Sachh ……………………….
Suraj --- Haan -----aur isliye maine decide kiya hain ki mein ab aur wait karke risk nahi le sakta ., hum aaj hi shaadi kar rahe hain , half an hour baad .
Ranveer --- (sadly) Kya !!!!!………….(and after gathering courage in a determined tone ) hum aisa nahi hone denge.

Suraj --- Ranveer ……tum kuch nahi kar sakte.

And saying this he keept the phone . After the call Ranveer did not waste time to call Pri and found out about the venue . He drove very fast . He could not let this happen again , he could not be late this time . His life would be barren without Tia.

When he reached the venue he found no one there and the very moment he realized that he was late , the marriage is over , he has lost his Tia forever……………
Edited by honey_13 - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nooooooooooooooooooo shit abb kya hoga did he rel\aly loose his tia 😭
i wish not
but plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz tu jaldi cont kar warna main tera bhurta bana dungi
plzzzzzzzzzz yaaar reshmi jaldi likh na
and haan this part was realy awzsoem 👏
Posted: 17 years ago
awesome part 👏
but puhleese dont let tia nd ranveer break- apart,pls. 😭
nd,will be waiting eagerly,so,pls cont fast. 😃 😳
Posted: 17 years ago
thanx a lot reshmi to cont ur fic..and it was awesum,mind blowing.👏
Posted: 17 years ago
plzzzzzzzzzzz jaldi post akr reshmi 😳
Posted: 17 years ago
oh noooooooooooooooooooooooooo. 😭 😭 😭
ye kya ho gaya.plz plz plz tia ranveer ko alag maat karo.
and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon asap.
Posted: 17 years ago
plz cont soon......im desperate 2 know wats goin 2 happen next

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