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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 11:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by roberoi

I am numb hence speechless or rather wordless!


 
Sangy Hug thanks a lot for commenting...SmileSmileSmile
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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Vedo

Haunting this is Kavi! Cry
 
Aww Vedo Hug  yes it is... But thanks for commentingSmileSmile
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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ritzi12

Clapas a writer u did tremendous job  now i also feel like doing writing something about cause 
 earlier i wrote about nature only and humans 

but this is so awesome so plainly written yet power ful


as a reader  ur ending was traumatic Cry
 
Thankyou so much RitzuHug   Yeah me too got inspired by other writers to writeLOL  tujhe rulane k liye sorry chotu...  Vo kya he na I'm not good at humourLOL and if someday I could then I'll defo share it with you allBig smileBig smile

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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 11:39pm | IP Logged
Kavs...this left me numb!
 
very painful and heartwrenching! Its gonna haunt me for sure.
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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 12:15am | IP Logged
The writings which touch me most often are the ones which carry the scent of spontaneity and emotions. The right words being thought out for hours often kill the spirit of the piece. This one had the spontaneity and emotion from someone who wrote that with feeling for the character. Nice.

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 2:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by AryaS

Kavs...this left me numb!
 
very painful and heartwrenching! Its gonna haunt me for sure.
 
Thankyou AryaHug I know its painful...but then thats what I intended to convey through it...

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RichardAnderson

The writings which touch me most often are the ones which carry the scent of spontaneity and emotions. The right words being thought out for hours often kill the spirit of the piece. This one had the spontaneity and emotion from someone who wrote that with feeling for the character. Nice.
 
ThankyouSmileSmile You are right...this was like a rough draft that I felt like posting...I didn't have the energy to revise and edit it..
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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 7:32am | IP Logged
Kavi I am speechless Clap
 
It's superb ClapClapClapClapClapClapClap
 
WOW yaar mujhe nahi pata tha ki meri dost Kavita sach mein kavita likh sakti hai Embarrassed
 
So you proved your name is true and perfect for you Big smile

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