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VirIka ff - i m sorry last part updated (Page 2)

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Good start i really like the story
do update soon 
and PM me please :D

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Thnkzz everyone for ur comments.. yep i will continue ..i.. but i was vey sad  2day's  bcoz of  maha episode  i dnt want any rift btwn  VirIka but aftr seeing d epi ..dats fr sure...CryCry kk i will now my blah blah ..updating d next part hope u will like it...

                                                                   Part -2

Manvi n Virat were in der room  n Viren was in study room .. he was studying a case n Jeevika was alone in d room n she was waiting fr Viren ..but Viren slept in d study room itself..n jeevika also feel a sleep waiting fr him..

IT was 4'o clock Jeevika got up n went fr shower
Jeevika :- mein ek baar Viren ji ko dekh kar aati hu..
In d study room she saw him sleeping
Jeevika :- ye tho yehi sogaye...mein chalthi hu Viren ji aapna khayal rakhiye..love u ..
Vanshikha :- beta itne subh bag lekar ja rahe ho
Jeevika :- mein aap ko batane a rahe thi mera train hey 6 'oclock is liye ja rahe hu ..aapna khayal rakhiye maa..
Vanshikha :- tum bhi beta..mein tum hey bahut miss karungi pata nahi viren tum hare bin ek din bhi rahe payega ya nahi LOL
Jeevika :- chalthi hu ma..takes her blessings n leaves

At 7:45 everyone was at d table.. Viren was waiting fr Jeevika  bcoz he was thinking dat she might be in d Kitchen ...
Virat :- ma bhabhi kaha hey ?? aabi bhi kitchen mein hey kya????
Manvi :- nahi tho di kitchen mein nahi hey ...
Virat :- tho bhabhi kah hey ??
Maanvi :- jeeju se pucho ..
Virat :- ma aap janthi hey
Vanshikha :- beta relax..tum hare bhabhi na  rishikesh gaye hey aapne beeji ke pass 
Virat :- kab aur kyu ??
Vanshikha :- aaj subha ..use uske beeji ki yaad a rahe thi isliye..
Manvi :- par di ne muje nahi bataya..
vanshikha :- kal raat use ne bataya
Viren :- usne aapko batay maa
Vanshikha :- ha beta o mujse puchkar hi gaye hey..kyu usne tum hey nahi batayShocked
Viren :-nahi maaConfused
Virat :- mera khaana ho gaya hey ..
Manvi :- mera bhi..
Viren :- tum ne kuch khaya hi nahi virat
Virat :- mera hogaya ..he goes giving viren an angry lookAngry
manvi :- maine dekh thi hu
Vanshikha :- sab tikh hey na beta
Viren :- ha ma.

In hrishikhesh ..she knocks d door ...dabbu opens d door

Dabbu :- jeevika di aap ..n hugs her 
Jeevika :- kaisa hey 
Dabbu :- tikh hu ..aap 
Jeevika:- mein bhi 
Beeji :- jeevika beta tum 
Jeevika :- kyun nahi askthi beeji ..hugs her very tightly 
beeji :- mera bacha ..tera ghar hey khabi bhi asakthi hey ..sab tikh hey na beta
Jeevika :- ha beeji ... bas aapki yaad arahi thi ..islie aagaye..
 
She hugs chachu n chachi also n goes 2 her room ...

In Chandigarh
VirMan's room
Virat :- Manvi .. lagta hey bhabhi bahut hurt huiye 
Manvi :_-ha Virat ..warna di kisi ko bin bataye ..muje bi bataye bina Shockedbeeji ke pass chali gaye
Virat :- tum kis baat par buri lag rahi hey ki bhabhi chali gaye ya tum hey bina bataya chali gaye
Manvi :- dono ..lets call her
Virat :- yep
AT dat time Viren will be passing fr VirMan room's but he stays der when he heard Manvi saying phone baj raha hey di..pick up..pick up
Manvi :- di phone kyu nhi uta rahe hey
Virat :- ek aur baar try karo
Manvi :- hello di
Jeevika :- bol mannu
Manavi :- mein kya bolungi di..
Virat :- speaker
Jeevika :- manu o muje waha mera maan nahi lag raha tha islie..yaha agaye...with teared eyes
Virat :- plzz bhabhi dnt cry...
Manvi :- aapne muje bhi nahi batay di
Jeevika :_ sry manu kal rath hi mein ne decide kiya islie
Manvi :- di aapne jeju ko 
Jeevika :- manu beeji bhula rahe hey ..baad mein baat karthe hu..byee virat tc..
Manvi :- par di call ended

In viren's room..

Viren :- Jeevika tum ne ye tikh nahi kiya..tum ne muje bina nahi bataya..aur jab maanvi tumse mere baar mein keh rahe thi tho tum ne topic change kar diye..kyun ??? agar tum hey meri parwa nahi hey tho muje bhi tum hare parwa nahi hey... mein bhi tum miss nahi kar raha hu..(actually he was talking 2 her photo ..which was beside his bed..)



Hope u will like it... i knw it was very boring...plz add me fr pm's

SRAVYA








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would love to read the FF in eng is possible. i dont undertsand hindi

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