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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 7:03am | IP Logged
Very nice update Veena. looking forward to the next one.

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 7:15am | IP Logged
Lovely updates dear.Bahot majja aaya...Heart  
Waiting for the next update .

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 9:19am | IP Logged
hey...dii...aap bhut strong ho...aapki jgh koi aur hota to sayd kabhi bhi post nhi krpata...aap dusro ko kush kr rhe ho...pr aap kitne sad ho...as always nice update diii

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
@Veenaji, tussi sach me kamaal ke ho, am loving this, Priya ke attitude aur gussa bada achha lag raha hain, aur upar se Dadi ka tadka, its RaYalicious, continue ASAP

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 11:04pm | IP Logged
wow veena kya likti ho, perfect hindi writing
jaldi update karo yaar, aage kya hua mein sochna nahi chahti tum ho tho accha hi hua hoga
 

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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 12:10am | IP Logged
fantastic writing veena ji...love it...aap is situation me v likh rahi hoo ei hamare liye kafi hai...Clap tha a lot 

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 4:24am | IP Logged
that so sweet of u all...i am really glad that u all like it...love u all HeartHeartHugHug

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 4:25am | IP Logged

Priya ram ko phir bhi ghurti hi jati h...


Ram...kya h yar..tum aise kyun dekhti ho mujhe...mne kuchh nhi kiya h...lekin m dekhta hu na kya hua h...abhi sahi ho jayegi...


Ram hadbadhahat me car se utrta h aur seedha car ka bonat kholta h..car se dhuan nikal rha hota h...priya bhi bahar aake khadi ho jati h...


Ram...ufff..ye to dhuan nikal rha h...lagta h kuchh jyada hi garam ho gyi h...


Priya ram ko dekhti h


ram...car...mera mtlb h car garam ho gyi h...m dekhta hu


ram jaise hi engien ko touch krta h uska hath jal jata h...priya bhag k uske pas aati h aur hath pakad leti h...


Priya...kya hua??? Jal gya kyaa???


Ram...ha thoda sa


priya...thoda sa???...ye thoda sa h to jyada kya hoga???...mr.kapoor aap apna deemag nhi chala sakte h to km se km dusro se hi rai le liya kijiye..btaiye kya jarurat thi khud car theek krne ki..mobile kya sirf pihu ko gift krne k liye hota h..aur ram kapoor ka nam mujhe dhamaki dene k liye...ab car koi priya to h nhi ki ram kapoor k nam se theek ho jayegi..mobile ko use krk machanic ko nhi bula sakte the...ab to dr.ko bhi bulana padega...


Ram...sshh..ssshhh...bs chup karooo...kuchh nhi hua h jaban kholne se pehle ankhe bhi khol leti to dikhta na...mera hath nhi jala h bs dil jal rha h...


Priya ram ko gusse dekhti h phir uske hath ko dekhti h waqai hath nhi jala rhta h ram natak kr rha tha...pr priya ki ankho me ansu tha...isiliye wo dekh nhi payi...rambabu ye soch k khush the ki priya k andar abhi bhi feelings h ram k liye..bs use aur kuchh nhi chahiye...aur gusse ko to wo gayab kr hi dega..pyar k aage kb tak gussa tikega...khair gussa jb khtm hoga tb hoga abhi to badh gya h...to priya ram ka hath jhatak k chali jati h dusri taraf...dil me gussa aur ankho me ansu rhte hain...khair ab itne lectur k bad to rambabu defently car theek krne ka try bhi nhi marne wale h..waise bhi unhe gaadiya chalane ka shaukh h bnane ka nhi...to wo machanic ko bulate h wo aake car theek kr deta h...dono ekbaar phir khamoshi se pura rasta tay krte h aur finally dono venue pahonch jate hain... Sabhi unhe dekh kar bht khush hote hain..tabhi neha aati h aur ram se isharo me puchhti h...kuchh hua???..aur ram bechara..whi jawab...kuchh nhi.


Scene 3...


Dadi aa ke sabko bolti hain ki... Rasmo ko shuru karne ka time ho chala h..lekin usse pehle aurate jo h ki apna fvrt kam...i mean kapdo aur gehno ki shopping kr le...dadi ne dukan walo ko yhi bula liya tha...priya ka to mann nhi tha par dadi k aage chalti kiski h...sabhi kapde dekhne lagte hain h...tabhi ram bhi aa jata h...priya jaise hi ek saadi ko hath lagati h ram bolta h...


Ram...are ye to bht hi achhi saadi h...iska color combination bhi achha h..bht mast lag rhi h


priya...hhuhh ..bhaiya kaisi saadiya dikha rhe hain ..ye to bilkul achhi nhi h koi dhang ki dikhaiye na


shopkeepr dusri saadi dikhate hue bolta h...ye dekhiye madm ye bilkul prfect h apke liye...ekdm apke status ko suit karega


ram..are kya suit karega ye bhi koi saadi h isse achha cllction to chhoti ka h


nuts...wow bhai apne mere cllection ki tareef ki...i love u bhai


ram...ofcourse chhoti m to hamesha hi teri tareef krta hu..aap ye hataiye bht bekar h ye...


Priya...kyun hataiye???..bhaiya rhne dijiye


ram...are par ye achhi nhi h


priya...ye bht achhi h


ram...pr mujhe pasand nhi h


priya...pehnni apko nhi h


ram...dekhni to h


priya...mne sabke dekhne ka theka nhi liya h..mujhe yhi chahiye


ram..ye nhi chahiye ..hatao ise


priya...nhi hategi ap kaun hote h ordr dene wale


ram...tumhara pati


priya...oh...


Dono ladne me saadi ki litrlly band baja chuke hain shopkeepr bechara sochta h ki bas ye dono meri saadi chhod de to m leke bhag jau...phir kabhi nhi aunga..


Nuts...aaahhh..bsss karooo apdono...koi saadi lene ki jarurat nhi h ..main hu na i handle it...bhaiii...ho gya basss..& priyaa u also relax..mne tumhare liye shaadi ki saadi taiyar krwa di h to tum whi pehnne wali ho jo m kahungi to bekar me jhagda mt karo...aur bhaiya aap dusre logo ko saadi dikhaiye..


Shopkeepr...ji..ji..bht bht dhanywad..bacha liya aapne mujhe bhi aur meri saadiyo ko bhi..


Ram...kya kaha isne???


Natasha...kuch nhi kuch nhi..aap chaliye mere sath


dono wha se uthkr chale jate h...dusri trf jake ram natasha se kehta h


ram...chhoti..thank u sooo much


nuts...are .aap thank u kyu bol rhe hain


ram..no seriously priya ko kisi bat k liye cnvence krna bht mushkil h pr tune kar liya..


Nuts ...cmon bhai aap itne pyar se saadi laye h priya k liye..to kya m apka sath dene k liye itna bhi nhi kr sakti..bhai mne to sirf use apna nam diya h pasand to wo apki hi h..


Ram...ha qki agr m deta to priya leti nhi


nuts...are bhai aap tension mt lijiye...priya jarur man jayegi


ram...jarur manegi are hum punjabi log hain aise thode hi na chhodenge..


Nuts ...ye hui na bat ..chalooo ab..dulha dulhan ko haldi bhi lagni h aur uske bad mehndi aur sangit bhi h


ram..han han chalo chalo


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haldi...


Sabhi ko dadi haldi k liye bulati hain aur rampriya neha vikram ko samjhati hain rasmo k bare me


dadi...golu puttr aur priya puttr tum dono idhar aao


rampriya...ji dadi


dadi...aisa h ki neha vikram ki shaadi ki jimmedari humne uthayi h to hume hi unke liye sb krna hoga..unki har rasm nibhani hogi..kanyadan ki bhi aur kanyadan krne k liye to pati patni dono ka hona jaruri h to tum dono ko hi ye krna hoga


rampriya...kya???..humdono...are pr humdono kaise???


Ram...are dadi hum charo to dost h ye kam to bade bujurgo ka kam hota h na


priya ram ki taraf dekhti h aur kehti h..are dadi inka mtlb h ki aap k hote hue hum kaise ye kr sakte hain


dadi...are chinta mt kro aram se kr sakte ho waise bhi kanyadan krna puny ka kam hota h to tumlog hi karoge...aur ab se hr rasm tumlog sath me nibhaoge...mere liye tumdono ko ye krna hi hoga...n

m marne se pehle ek bar to tum dono ko ek sath dekhna chahti hu...


Priya...are dadi aap aisa kyun bol rhi hain..hum hain to yhi..aap jo kahengi..jaise kahengi..waise hoga


dadi..jeeti rh puttr...chalo chalo sb haldi ki rasm shuru krte haim...haldi ki rasm hoti h priya haldi laga kr uthti h to ram uske peechhe hi khada rhta h priya dekhti nhi h aur haldi wala hath ram se takrake waqt uske kurte pr laga deti h...


Rampriya...ohhh shittt...


Priya...i am sorry ...i ...i really ...vry sorry..mne janbujhkr nhi kiya ...please...glti se ho gya


ram...its ok


priya...nhi...nhi m abhi saaf kar deti hu...


Ram...priyaaa...stop it...tum saf kr rhi ho ya ganda


priya..oh i am sooo sorry


ram..its ok ..its ok m theek hu


sab hasne lagte hain..uff ajkl rambabu ko to gussa hi nhi ata..kamal h ..do do biwiya hone ka ek fayeda to pta chal gya insan bardasht krna seekh jata h..lol..


Anyways haldi k baad bari aati h mehndi ki...sabhi ko mehndi lagti rhti h...tabhi dadi ka ek aur bauncer..lol


dadi..are suno ladkiyo..hamare yha ek rasm hoti h..dusre ki shaadi me hamare ghr k sabhi mard apni biwiyo ko mehndi lagakr shuruat krte hain


ram...heyn dadi ye rasm kab aayi???


Nuts..are dadi pr meri shaadi me to aisi koi rsm nhi thi..


Neha..ha mne bhi nhi suna


dadi..chup karo tum sb ... Bada kaun h??


Sabhi kehte h...aap dadi


dadi...to pta kise hoga???


Sab kehte hain..apko dadi


dadi...aur manega kaun???


Sab kehte h..hum sab dadi


dadi..to chupchap jaisa kh rhi hu waisa karo...


Dadi sabhi ko bulati h...neha vikram ram priya...sabhi ko...


Dadi...ab sare pati apni patni k hath pr apna naam likhkar shagun karenge..chalo shuru ho jao...


Neha vikram to jbrdst excited rhte hain..akhir wo bhi to pati patni hi h...dadi ki jid ki wajah se priya ko bhi ram k samne baithna padta h..uska man bilkul bhi nhi tha pr uske pas option nhi tha...aur ram uski majburi aur apne gudluck pr bht itra rha tha...lol


ram...apna hath do


to b continue

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