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The.Patthaaka.

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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 12:46am | IP Logged
Hey peeps =) I sort of had this tiny little figment of this story in my mind for a while now,so scribbled on the keyboard a bit this morning.

The chapter is still very crude,but yeah,whatever.I was just really way too impatient to post it.

Im thinking about completing the story in a dozen chapters,so,views please? Embarrassed

 A heads up,im a sucker for dark,complex stories.So,there will rarely be sunshine in whatever i try to write :| 

There are many layers to this story.The first chapter,I have tried to keep it simple,not too many emotions all at once (there will BE too much of it soon! LOL)..its sort of the male protagonist's POV in the 1st chapter.

I have decided to name this story "Obscured Lives" whose meaning in simplest words can be deciphered as : Lives which cannot be easily understood.




Edited by disha15 - 18 January 2013 at 6:19am

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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 7:41am | IP Logged
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Ae ki kitta tu? Shocked

Ohh my sexy sig maker is also a sensational writer Blushing

I really liked it..what a beautiful flow! How beautifully the words are woven... fabulous!

Nobel prize in writing is not Far Dishy Blushing


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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 6:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shubhika124

DishyShocked
Ae ki kitta tu? Shocked

Ohh my sexy sig maker is also a sensational writer Blushing

I really liked it..what a beautiful flow! How beautifully the words are woven... fabulous!

Nobel prize in writing is not Far Dishy Blushing

shubhi Hug thank you so much,hun :*

p.s : zyaada jhoot mat bol,logon ko lagega,maine tereko paise diye hain ye sab bolne ke liye ROFL

kidding!thanks my bachcha!


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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 6:18am | IP Logged
@monu : read weneva u find the time :)

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 11:09pm | IP Logged
a brilliant start .. i have always loved wen writers describe a cold night.. and do every bit of justice to it with human emotions.. this was amazing ! 

i wud love to read the story further.. esp the mother son relationship.. it has left me with an urge to delve deeper..

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Posted: 24 January 2013 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by disha15

shubhi Hug thank you so much,hun :*

p.s : zyaada jhoot mat bol,logon ko lagega,maine tereko paise diye hain ye sab bolne ke liye ROFL

kidding!thanks my bachcha!



Matlab logon ko nahi batana ki you bribed me? Shocked
Oh sorry sorry Big smile

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