ARJUN FF:Zindagi...Ek dard,Ek tadap

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Posted: 11 years ago
Hiii friends
I'm new in this forum, joined a few
days ago.I  have read various ffs based
on different characters but I like the arjun's character most so I am starting
a new ff which is based on arjun.
All characters are same except the
lead female character.
I've choosen shalini chandran to play
the lead role opposite arjun.You can imagine whoever u want opposite arjun.Here
is an image of shalini I've posted below.you can have a look.Hope you would like it.

 

Other characters will be introduced as story progresses.
AUTHORS NOTE:
In this ff shalini's characters name
is pratha. My story takes place after the death of riya.This ff is written in
hindi.I will use simple hindi so that all can easily understand.Please do
comment wheather u liked it or not.
Zindagi….Ek dard,Ek tadap
Zindgi..ek dard hi to hai.Hum sabhi ki
jindgi me kahi na kahi koi na koi dard ya tadap chupi hoti hai.Kisi ki zindagi
puri tarah khushhal nahi hoti.Agar hum dhoondne niklenge toh shayad hi aisa koi
insane payenge jise apni zindagi se koi shikayat nahi ,jiski zindgi mein koi
dard nahi..koi aisa hai toh wo to fir bhagwan hi hai….
Meri yeh kahani bhi kuch isi tarah ke
dard ko bayan karti hai.Arjun aur Pratha ke dard ko…do aise insaan jinhe kismet
ne sirf dard hi dard diye.Kismat ne inhe ek aise mod par laake khada kar diya
jaha in dono ka milna inke liye majboori ban gayi lekin jab dono mile to zindgi
ke sare gam or dard iss tarah mit gaye jaise kabhi unka koi astitva hi na ho…
Part-1 (After few
days of riya's death)
Rat ko kareeb 10:30  baje ek sunsaan sadak par arjun roshni ki
yaado me  khoya hua thake se kadamo se
chala ja raha hai.Baal bikhre hue hain,shirt ke upar ke buttons khule hain or
dono haath pockets me hai.hawa zoro se chal rahi hai shayad barish hone wali hai.
Aj kai dino baad roshni ki yaado ne fir uske
dilo dimag ko iss kadar ghera hai ki uski ankho ke samne rah-rahkar roshni ka
wo muskan bhara chehra hat hi nahi raha hai.Aj roshni ko mare hue pure ek saal
ho gaye hain or aj uski barsi thi.ETF me koi case na hone ki vajah se usne ek
din ki chutti li  thi..
Wahi kuch door 3-4 tapori type ke gunde ek
ladki ko ghere hue khade hain.Unme se ek ne ladki ki kalai ko kas ke pakda hua
hai or baki sab nashe me dhutt ladki ki taraf badh rahe hain.Ladki apna hath
chudane ki koshish kar rahi hai.
Ladki: plz muje chod do.. muje jaane do..
Man1:jaaneman itni bhi jaldi kya hai..
Ladki gidgidate hue:plz muje jaane do.
Man2:are to hum kaha rok rahe hain chali jana
Tabhi peeche se ek aawaz ati hai….chodo ladki
ko…Sabhi us awaaz ki taraf mudkar dekhte
hain.Ladki bhi shocked hoker uski taraf dekhti hai.Saamne arjun khada hai.
Man1 jisne ladki ka haath pakda hua hai bolta
hai "kyu be teri bahen lagti hai kya"
Arjun:Meri bahen to nahi lagti par ab se teri
jaroor lagegi..
Itna kahkar arjun apna jordar punch uss admi
ke muh par marta hai.uss admi ke muh or naak se khun nikalne lagta hai.admi ke
hath se ladki ka hath chut jata hai or ladki paas me hi pade ek pathar se takra
kar behosh ho jati hai uske sar pe chot lagne ki vajah se khun nikalne lagta
hai.apne saathi ki yeh haalat dekhkar sabhi gunde ghabrakar bhaag jate hain or
wo admi bhi uthkar ladkhadate hue waha se nikal leta hai.
Arjun ladki ke paas jata hai.ladki behosh hai
or sar se khun nikal raha hai,chehra baalo se Dhaka hua hai or achanak bearish hone
lagti hai.
Aas pas koi hospital bhi nahi hai jaha ladki
ko le ja sake.lekin Arjun ka ghar pas me hi hai.puri sadak sunsaan hai dur dur
tak koi auto ya bus nazar nahi aa rahi hai.arjun ladki ko apni god me utha kar
apne ghar lata hai badi mushkil se ghar ka darwaaza khol wo ladki ko apne kamre
me bed pe sula deta hai.arjun ka karma puri tarah roshni or uski pics se bhara
hua hai.arjun doctor ko call karta hai.
Kuch der baad-
Doctor:ghabrane ki koi baat nahi hai..halki
si kharoch aayi hai,ek do din me thik ho jaayegi..abhi behosh hain kuch ghanto
me hosh aa jayega.Maine injection de diya hai.ap jald se jald inke kapde change
kar dijiyega.jyada der inhi kapdo me rahi to sardi lag jayegi or tabiyat kharab
ho sakti hai.
Arjun: ji doctor..doctor ke jaane ke baad arjun soch mein pad
jaata hai k akhir kare to kya kare..


                                      END OF PART-1
If u r readin this fic then plz don't forget
to comment.if I find at least one comment I will continue otherwise I will drop
the idea.


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Posted: 11 years ago
 
Thanx..😊
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice start..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am really thankfull to all of you who have replied..I will try my best to updt soon..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey its nice yaar...esp the starting lines... do continue..
and also welcome...
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Posted: 11 years ago
soperb update
love the bigining
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
thats so good...and shalini is very pretty!!

please update soon and add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello everyone, I'm back with next
part.
I'm still stuck with my last
statement " if I get at least one cmnt I'll continue" so let me know if you are
interested or not bcoz there is no point in wasting time not only yours but
also mine and also you are free to suggest anything regarding this ff.I'll
appreciate it and will try to accomodate them as per requirement in my ff.You
can share anything with me..dont hesitate'Finally here comes the next part.


Part-2 (kashmakash)
Arjun
ko kuch samaj me nahi aa raha hai.Aj tak aisi kashmakash me nahi fansa.Ladki ka
naam tak nahi janta.naam to door kabhi use dekha tak nahi hai.Isi uljhan me
arjun ke hath achanak hi apne sar ke balo me chale jate hain.Kuch to karna hoga
ek ladki ko is tarah se marne ke liye nahi chod sakta.Kuch sochkar almari ki
taraf jata hai or ek patla sa blanket nikalkar ladki ki body ko puri tarah se
cover karta hai.Ladki puri tarah se behosh hai use kuch mehsoos nahi ho raha
hai.Arjun ab ladki ke upar hai,uske hath blanket ke andar kam kar rahe or wo
dheere-2 ek ek karke ladki ke kapde utar raha hai.Arjun ne apni ankhein band
kar li hain.Ladki ne simple salwar-kameez pahni hui hai.ladki ki kameez wo
utaar chukka hai ab inner baki hai.Bahut koshish kar raha hai lekin inner nahi utar pa raha.Ladki ki bra ka huk uske pendant se atak gaya hai.Arjun ko shayad apni ankhein kholni hi padengi ye sochkar arjun ne ek lambi saans li or dheere se apni ankhein kholi.Blanket thoda neche sarak gaya hai or ladki ke cleavage saaf nazar aa rahe hai.Halanki kamre ki lights off hain fir bhi barish khatam hone ke baad chand ek bar fir se nikal aaya hai or uski roshni pure kamre mein faili hui hai jisse na chahte hue bhi arjun ko sab kuch saaf dikhai de raha hai.Arjun ne apne apko control karte hue apna pura dhyan pendent ko suljhane me lagaya.  
 ladki ki body me kuch hulchul hoti hai.ladki behoshi
me kuch budbuda rahi hai.
Ladki:chodo muje plz jane do..or itne me hi ladki ki ankhein khul jati hai.
Arjun:dekho
ghabrao mat main kuch nahi karunga..main bas tumhare kapde utar raha hu warna
tumhe sardi lag jayegi..vishvaas karo mera..
Ladki
puri tarah se hosh me nahi hai fir bhi sab kuch sun or samaj sakti hai usme
itni takat nahi hai ki wo arjun ko apne upar se hata sake ya fir wo hatana hi
nahi chahti .ha uski ankho me arjun ke liye vishvaas dikh raha hai or ek bar
fir se uski ankhein band ho jati hai.
Arjun
ne aisi ankhein kabhi nahi dekhi.Un ankhon me dar hai lekin vishvaas bhi.
Akhirkar
sare kapde utarne ke bad arjun unhe sukahane ke liye pas hi chair par faila
deta hai.Dupatte ko failate waqt arjun ki kuch purani yadein fir se taza ho
jati hain.
Roshni:
Arjun chodo na..!
Arjun:
kya..??!!!
Roshni:mera
dupatta or kya..
Arjun:pakda
kaha hai!!
Roshni
halke gusse se peeche mudti hai or dekhti hai sach me dupatta arjun ne nahi pakda
hua wo to arjun ki shirt ke button me uljha hua tha.
Roshni:wo
mera dupatta tumhare button me fansa hai
Arjun
dupatte ko nikalte hue:ha pata hai..muje to ye samaj nahi ata tum ladkiya itne
complicated kapde pehnti kyu ho..
Uski
garden neeche jhuki hui hai.dupatta nikalne ki vajay or ulajhta jar aha
hai.Arjun ke irritated look ko dekhkar roshni ke chehre par ek smile aa jati
hai or wo pas akar arjun ka hath dheere se hatakar khud use suljhane lagti
hai.Roshni ki nazar button par hai jabki arjun ki nazar roshni ke khubsurat
chehre par tiki hai.
"ye
apka koi case nahi hai jo itni aasani se samaj me aa jayega..hum ladkiyo ko
samajna itna bhi aasan nahi hai'samjhe ACP arjun..ya samjhau"
Or
ek hi jhatke me dupatta button se alag ho jata hai.Roshni nazare uthakar arjun
ko dekhti hai ..arjun apne chehre par ek smile ke sath roshni ko apni or
kheechta hai.
Arjun
dheere se kaan me "samjhao.."
Dono
ki nazar ek dusre se milti hai.Arjun roshni ko kiss karne hi wala hai ki'
                             Tabhi khidki ke
khadkhadane ki awaz use apne attet se bahar le ati hai.Hawa fir chalne lagi
hai.Barish bhi ek bar fir se shuru ho chuki hai.Ladki abhi bhi gahri neend me
soyi hui hai.Saamne table pe rakhi roshni ki tasveer hawa chalne se gir gayi
hai or kanch ka frame tukde-2 ho gaya hai.Arjun jakar jaldi se roshni ki
tasveer ko uthata hai.Uski daayi ankh ke kone se ek choti si ki boond tapak kar
roshni ki tasveer par akar girti hai or uss khun ki boond se mil jati hai jo ki
arjun ke hath se tute hue frame ke  kaanch ke chubhne ki vajah se nikli thi.
Roshni
ki tasveer ko table par rakh kar arjun kamre se bahar nikal jata hai or living
room me aake sofe pe baith jata hai.rah-rahkar roshni ka chehra uski ankho ke
saamne aa raha hai.Saamne table par 3-4 sharab ki bottles rakhi hui hai kuch
khali hai jo ki usne aj din me hi khali ki hai.Ek bottle ko uthakar pas me hi
rakhe glass me sharab dalkar ek hi bar me pura glass khali kar deta hai.
Roshni
ki yaado ko bhulane ka shayad yahi sabse acha tareeka hai.Bhale hi wo roshni ki
yado ko kabhi apne dil se mitana nahi chahta lekin jab taklee had se badh jati
hai to use ye rasta apnana padta hai.
I know its short but i promiss next updt will definitely be a long one and sorry for delay was busy with some college work.
guys if u read this fic and like it plz comment or atleast press like button.Plz its a request let me know u kliked it.
 


Edited by TIPSYSI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: pihu_angad

nice...

hey u are once again first to cmnt.Thnx for ur support yar..u really encourage me thanku😃
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
again a wonderful update update soon dear