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*Completed* Th#3 SS: Making Decisions (Page 3)

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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
OK...had to pause my reading after the first 2 paragraphs...burst out laughing!!! you named the middle aged house help lady as Sheetal!! Rofl ROFL poor madhura naik...every ipk fan hates her...even more than shyam I think. LOL
I read this in another ff as well...the writer made sheetal as an old ugly lady and got rid of her character within 2 mins...like a revenge to the CVs... LOL

Anyway...once I had a good laugh, I continued reading the rest of the chapter. Great update...very intriguing. So she did not jump off the cliff...great little surprise! You like raising our blood pressures don't you!

Looking forward to the next update...this one was too short.

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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
zehra sorry for resing but i cant control my joy of being somewhere near the first page
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
Two things first...

Even after hearing abt the bombshell that La delivered...even though they both were rendered speechless for a moment, the red marks on her neck and arms took precedence over everything for Arnav. U know how i cherished the feeling...or how many times i read that last paragraph.

Second... that night that Arnav forced her to spend with him, that night when he made love to her, whatever he said or whatever had been his reason behind the deed...he had been so overpowered with passion that he himself didn't know till now how much, or with what intensity they had made love. He must have lost control of all and everything else while he had been doing so.


WOW!!!! that was one hell of a chapter.


Loved it! absolutely loved the contrasts that u have set there.

I am liking this Akash and Payel who are so different to those zombies that we had witnessed in the actual show.

Loved the way Arnav instructed his house help or whoever that was to take care of Khushi.

I could almost imagine the shock that Arnav got when Khushi informed him that he was the one who had bruised her so.

Wonderful update Zehra... Update soon

I didn't wait to see whether u had already e-mailed me...will drop another note when i check that.

p.s. Since i saw that comment of urs where u mentioned how u blushed after reading some of the comments from the earlier chapter, let me tell u something that i had intended to say after i had seen ur new profile pic... u r one beautiful girl sweetheart.

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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
p.s. Congrates for the new thread...u do deserve all the comments coming ur way for such a wonderful story.

Way to go girl!

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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 10:34pm | IP Logged
congrats for new thread...lovely update ... so arnav marring khushi... thats a good news in media...Wink

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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 10:35pm | IP Logged
What! Arnav doesn't remember what he did to her ? He is being such a prized bas***d at the moment, I could wring his neck with my bare hands. Unless there is more to this that you plan to reveal, I don't trust my instincts with your stories any more. :D 

I love Payal-Aakash, really. Payal is the heroine of this story. Period. 

I like this Sheetal person, she is like one of those caring yet stern nannies. 

"baby pink short sleeves pajamas with small red hearts and white teddies" Really? Embarrassed

Also, how is Khushi okay with waking up and eating at Arnav's place? How come she hasn't asked for her Sister or her father yet ? 

And why are you ending this in just 12 chapters? :(

Zeee, I want more! And congratulations for the new thread :) 



Edited by vgedin - 15 January 2013 at 10:40pm

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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 10:41pm | IP Logged
awesome update, the highlight of this story is every character apart from the leads are strong and determined, unlike the show where they were shown as dumbos including khushi.

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