Im resing here so I can leave comments. :D
So i guessed right. Akash did mention an alliance between Arnav and Khushi to clear her name and so cleverly done too. The Guptas dont have a clue about what had happened and they so lovingly accepted Arnav to be their daamad!
I told you Zehra, Im particularly interested in your Arnav, so it does strike me somewhere deep down whenever he does something more human. He hates Khushi but took so much care of her and had a servant at her command. Hahaha! You named her Sheetal!
I love you!
Poor La. so heartbroken and sad.
the marks on Khushi were left by Arnav? But how? Im assuming nothing happened between them, then HOW!
Going over chapter 8 :)
The opening paras to the update were my favorite! I read them over and over and over again!
She hated him because he hated her.
She hated him because he made her explore an emotion she was a stranger to - hatred.
They were my favorite. So awesome!
The hurt and pain she went through when he was indifferent to only her. When he hated only her. When that feeling was only towards her! If she wouldn't be miserable, then pray what would she be?
Yes! I knew nothing happened that night! And I feel happy that I was right!
He only made her apologize.
Now I love my man Arnav here and his complexities. Although I dont appreciate his ways of procuring an apology, he had the decency to not cross his limits. I feel dorkish when I think of how judgmental and accusatory I was of him in the first few chapters. I hated him back then, but my sole interest in him never wavered. I wanna know what his next step would be, and would Khushi turn down the alliance?
Khushi's pain was so wonderfuly and tragically depicted. She hurt herself because not him, but his words defiled her.
You bring out such astounding aspects Zehra.
Chappie 9 now. whoops!
These two are a crazy lot! You know in the space of a chapter, I feel lighter. The tone changed marginally letting in some relief, but I dunno how long that would be here to stay. But Im happy as long as I feel that lil relief.
I love Payal and Akash in your story Lazy! They are so charming. Really!
Payal has a spine. can talk for herself and her sister and Akash has this almost irresistibly quirky witty brain that I adore!
Love the same dialogues being exchanged among Arnav and Khushi and how the reactions differed.
So Im guessing they'll be married soon.
Love the part when they didn't let go of hands even after Shashi did. aww
Arnav is being a pretentious asshole again. WHY!!
He is in so much pain but yet doesnt show. WHY!!
He cares but doesn't show. WHY!!!
Read it just now.
Will leave my comments tomorrow.
All I can say now is.. I'm so saddened by their past. Just when I mentioned relief, I got blast from plast and not a very pleasant one.
More tomorrow :*
Edited by jessicad - 16 February 2013 at 12:34pm