UPDATING IN PARTS, SO WAIT FOR MY PM
CHAPTER 6 REVIEW
This chapter was a perfect mix of everything, and in the right proportion. You showcased friendship, love, care, affection, tenderness, pain for and towards every character.
All characters were used in this chap, each one's role was perfectly written.
-Starting scene was beautifully penned down. Rukmini and alok were fab in their part. The pain experienced by ashu was reflecting in each of their faces, be it the friends, the parents or nidhi.
-Nidhi's reply that if baba backs out her father will file a case against him was a nice diversion. Liked that scene. Nandini kissing nidhi's forehead was so full of affection.
-Ashu's treatment finally starts. Great that nidhi is with him. Just a small question, armaan thanked nidhi for coming when she did, i was confused here, coming into ashu's life, coming to armaan's house then, or coming b/w that painting and ashu? I knw the doubt is absurd, but couldnt help myself from asking.
-Ashu looking for nidhi after getting up was so sweet. Armaan teasing him was interesting. Looks like jagan is the sober one here, putting ashu out of his misery and sending him to nidhi.
-Kitchen part was awesome. The eyelock and most importantly the first kiss, aah such a bliss it was. I really liked it when nidhi said she never left. Also liked mallika here, her teasing the couple was fun and also giving them their privacy. Well thought of.
-Anji at armaan's place and that banter was hilarious. Pimple and beauty spot dialogs were fab.
-Nidhi being mischievious with ashu with that bowl scene was interesting. But as jagan said, thats the trick to be tried on a six footer.
-Movie scene was another great one. Ashni sitting together and their doubts about armaan and anji and them sharing from one bowl was a treat for us.
-Then comes the car scene. Aww, Ashu missed that expression on nidhi's face, but never mind. Their silent acknowledgement of each other's presence by the hand gesture was a nice one. U even showed anji nidhi silent bonding over here.
-French dialogues, omg i am still in dreamland. From where did u get this idea??
-Morning scene at ashu's place was one of the best. Rukmini's concern and baba teasing ashu was simply great, and his phone ringing at the same time was really gud.
-Ashu surprised on knowing nidhi is here and then running down to meet her, so restless i tell u. And nidhi wanting to see him in the suit, was really cool.
-Then comes the best part of the chap. Ashu opening his arms for her,nidhi running into him was great and especially the twirl. I wonder if it wasnt for the blaring horns, would they have ever parted?? Wallet as a gift was amazing. I recently gifted my brother one and my thoughts instantly went back to that.
-As soon as the burqa scene started, knew it was nidhi only. Ashu also knows how naughty his nidhi is. That scene was comedy types. Really loved it.
That was a wonderful chap di. The small scenes had a lot of intensity to them. Now i am off to read chap 7
Edited by deepali.rock - 16 January 2013 at 5:58am