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Virmaan : after marriage-2 : Thread-2 : part-120 (Page 57)

shonaten Senior Member

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Ok take ur time dear
but plss and this 2 update make cute sweet and romantic update

rasp_berry IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 8:44am | IP Logged
Bad news is not less than heart attack fr me yar
imsid Senior Member

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 10:14am | IP Logged
make these 2 updates as long as posible
and mst importantly hot and romantic pls
ye tumhare twist aft 5th march pls pls
Niaksharma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 12:40pm | IP Logged
i m sorry guys i cannot updated one part tonight...i m continuesly writing from last 4 hours nd i have more study work for tonight...but i keep my promis...i updated double updates tomorrow...

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kulsum_virman IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 12:42pm | IP Logged
pls dnt miss to update tmmrw am dying to read urs update
Niaksharma IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 11:20pm | IP Logged
V-angrily but in low voice-kya kar rahi thi uske saath?..aur Maine kaha tha na aas paas rahene k liye..vaha usse bate karne ki kya jarurat thi..main tumhe dhundh raha tha aur tum..ab bolo chup kyu ho?
She scared nd confuse with his behaviour..
V-bolo na..this Time he said loudly..
Maanvi looked there nd here nd found its public plase..she controlled on herself..
M-calmly-virat..ase kyu baat kar rahe ho?..main bas vaha tumhari photos dekh rahi thi..aur main to use janti tak nahi usse bate kyu karungi? woh kya tha?
M-virat plz..Maine kaha na main baate nahi kar rahi thi..woh hi achanak se a gaya aur tumhare aur apne bare me kuch bolne laga..main kuch kaheti usse pahele to tum aa gaye..aur agar baat kar bhi li to konsa pahad tut jayega..
V-matlab main Jo kahe raha hu woh important nahi hai?
M-main ye nahi kahe rahi virat..tum ek 6oti si baat ko kaha se kaha le ja rahe ho?..maine kaha na main uske saath vaha bate karne nahi gai thi..main to tumhari achievements aur tumhare posters dekh rahi thi..yaha tak ki mujhe uska naam tak yaad nahi hai..she said little angrily but her eyes getting wet..
Virat come out in his sense..he feel guilty for shouting on her..he close his eyes nd opened..
V-i m sorry..said with regret..
Maanvi wiped her only tear which abt to come out from her eyes nd looked away..
V-come close to her-maanvi i m sorry..plz..i m really sorry..
Maanvi didn't looked at him..he abt to say something when raj and rid come their with their gang..
Raj-Rj-hey tum dono abhi tak yahi ho?
Both looked at them nd stood next to eachother..
M-manage to be normal-woh actually plan kuch ban hi nahi paya..waise aap log yaha?
T-woh actually tumhe bataya Nahi..raj aur ria Jo humare senior couple hai unki marriage anniversary aa rahi ria ko shopping pe jana hai aur luckily aaj woh free hai..
He cut by raj
Rj-so woh chahti hai ki main uske saath chalu but abhi abhi humare album k director k pa ka call aya tha Hume ek meeting me jana hoga so..
Ria-Ri-but mujhe shopping pe aaj hi jana hai..aur abhi..
V-mujhe bhi meeting me aana hoga?
Kaiy-Ky-of course..lead singers me se ek hai tu..
M-to kya problem hai?..main tumhare saath chalti hu..
M-haa..waise bhi main yaha inki meeting me kya karungi?..baad me tum mujhe humare apartment tak drop kar dena..
Rj-thank u maanvi u made my problem now can i go for meeting?
Ri-of course..i have batter company now..
All laughed..but virat looked at maanvi who ignoring him..he knew she is still angry on him..he want to talk to her..but she moved towards ria..he looks disappointed..
M-achcha to chale?
Ri-yeah..bye everyone..sorry virat but i needed her..
V-try to smile-its okey..nd take care..looked at maanvi..bye..but she looked away..
All-bye ladies..
M & Ri-bye..
Nd maanvi walked with ria not even looking at him once..
V-in mind-now u r gone..ur sherni wife came back now..but deserve that..aur karo gussa..
E come out from his thoughts with raj's call..
Rj-virat..chal Hume abhi lunch bhi karna hai..
V-yeah..nd he followed them..he called maanvi many times but she didn't received his call..he finally texted her..
** maanvi plz i m sorry naa..nd plz mera gussa khane pr utarna..ria k saath kuch kha lena..plz..**
nd he also texted ria ** ria maanvi ne lunch nahi kiya hai so plz use kuch khila dena..shayad woh tumse na kahe paye..**
nd he walked with his gang..they went to canteen and ordered their food but virat didn't eat anything..he just took juice..everyone teased him but he take it lightly..he was worried abt her..
Here in mall..ria nd maanvi read his msg..maanvi ignore it..but ria smiled nd shook her head..they walked towards kitchen stuff section after completing ria's shopping..
M-thank u ria..mere saath ane k liye..actually mujhe kitchen k stuff ki shopping karni hi thi..aur agar virat k saath ati to adha saman to woh lene hi nahi deta..nd she they are become good friends..
R-its okey maanvi..balki mujhe tumhe thanks kahena chahiye..varna raj k saath mera bhi kuch asap hi Hal hota..
Nd they finished their shopping nd abt to come out from mall..
Ri-maanvi..tumne lunch nahi kiya tha..kuch khane chale?
M-nahi..woh virat ne bhi nahi kiya hoga..mujhe bhook nahi hai..
Ria smiled..think-virat ne sahi kaha tha..maya aur maanvi ka koi match nahi hai..
M-kya hua?..chale?
R-yeah..nd just then ria's get call..after it..
Ri-maanvi virat ka call tha..shayad tumhara phone switched off hai..actually usne ye batane k liye call kiya tha ki aaj late ho jayega..i swear pakka boys ne koi plan banaya hai..
M-chhodo na..hume chalna chahiye..she got upset but ignore nd walked towards car..she lost in her thought so her leg hited with car's wheel..
M-sshh..aah..she yelling in pain..
Ria heared it nd come near to her..
Ri-maanvi kya hua?
She saw her toe bleeding..near her thumb..
Ri-maanvi bleeding ho rahi hai..chalo Hume doctor k pas jana hoga..
Nd she takes her to doctor..after that ria takes her in her apartment..

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AmnaZaYa Senior Member

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Posted: 08 February 2013 at 11:30pm | IP Logged
yeah first one to comment. 
it was an awsum wonderful update.Smile cont soon...
plz add romance in next part.
.Yamin. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 12:13am | IP Logged
Awesome update Khushi...
love it...will be waiting for next update...

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