Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Virika- OS- Humesha n Forever *AWARDED* Ch10-Pg 32 - Page 10

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wow that was awesome i loved it
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wahhh...read this one also...over demanding viren..as alwayss... LOL :P hahah..well..loved ittt...do continuee soon n plss PM me...thnkuuu
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freaking awesome as always 
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superbbb...as expected...i knew it would be virman behind the door matlab in coridor... awesomeee..do continueee n plss PM me..thnkuuu
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Fabulous update <3
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Silent readers speak up!
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Virika went to everyone and everyone had their breakfast and virman came up with the idea to play truth and dare...
They flipped the bottle and it stopped at DADA G!
Virat: Dada g truth ya dare?
Dada: Dare!
Virika&Virman: Waooo dadag...
Jeevika: Acha dada g ap hume acha sa gana ga ke sunaiye...
DAda g smile stud up n went to swamini..
Dada G: Aye Dil Laaya Hai Bahaar Apnon Ka Pyar Kya Kehna
Milein Hum Chhalak Utha Khushi Ka Khumaar Kya Kehna
Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj Ghar Hai Mera Gule Gulzaar Kya Kehna
Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj Ghar Hai Mera Gule Gulzaar Kya Kehna
Swamini: Aye Dil Laaya Hai Bahaar Apnon Ka Pyar Kya Kehna
Milein Hum Chhalak Utha Khushi Ka Khumaar Kya Kehna
Jeevika : Hum Tum Yoon Hi Milte Rahein Mehfil Yoon Hi Sajti Rahe
Viren: Bas Pyaar Ki Yehi Ek Dhun Har Subah Shaam Bajti Rahe
VIRIKA TOGETHER : Gale Mein Mehekte Rahein Pyaar Bhari Baahon Ke Haar Kya Kehna
SWAMINI: Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj Ghar Hai Mera Gule Gulzaar Kya Kehna
ALL TOGETHER : Aye Dil Laaya Hai Bahaar Apnon Ka Pyar Kya Kehna
Milein Hum Chhalak Utha Khushi Ka Khumaar Kya Kehna
Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj Ghar Hai Mera Gule Gulzaar Kya Kehna
Khile Khile Chehron Se Aaj Ghar Hai Mera Gule Gulzaar Kya Kehna

After a cute moment shared by the family and the bottle is flipped again...
This time it stops at Viren...
Jeevika: Viren ji truth ya dare?
Viren:Truth...
Virat: Acha bhai ap duniya mein sabse jyada pyar kisse karte ho?
Mujhe pta h apki BADI MA koo ๐Ÿ˜›
Jeevika smiled but in disappointment b'coz she knew the answer...
Viren: Jeevika ko...
Everyone shocked but in awe...
But swamini was angry...
Viren continued: But jeevika ko meri zindagi mein badi ma layi to mein unhe bhi equally pyar karta hu...
While he went n hugged her from back and smirked at jeevika ๐Ÿ˜‰
Everyone uttered awww โค๏ธ
and the bottle was flipped again...
After some time the bottle stopped at jeevika...
Viren: Jeevika truth ya dare?
Jeevika: Truth...
Manvi: Humesha darti rehna ap to...
Acha ab batao sabse jyada darr apko kab laga tha?
Jeevika went in to the flashback when Karan tried to kill manvi and his bad intentions at her..
Viren: Mein btata hu... Jab hum tumhe khone wale the aur happiest tab that jab tum theek ho gyi thi...
Manvi: Awww jiju n she went n hugged him...
Jeevika was lost n unknowingly she said: The worst was the day when Karan's true face came in front of me...
Everyone was shocked...
Viren: Jeevika...
Jeevika: Haaann
Swamini: Tum kehna kya chahti ho jeevika??
Jeevs: kuch nhi buaji vo...
Swamini: Keh kyu nhi deti tumhe hi mere bete ko mara h?
Jeevika: Nahi buaji...
Swamini: Haan jeevika, yahi to sekha h na tumne, yahi to tumhare khunn mein.. jab ma baap hi esse ho to bacho par to asar hota hi h...
Everyone was shocked...
Jeevika: Buagi mein apne mumma papa k against kuch nhi sun sakti ap mujhe jo kehna h keh lijiye I don't care but mumma papa k liye nahi...
Swamini: Kyu nahi jeevika tumhara tu khun hi ganda h...
Jeevika: Buagi ap janna chahti h na suniye...
Viren: Jee..
Jeevika: Apke bete ne mera sath batameezi ki... Mujhe todne ki koshish ki... 
she said while breaking down...
Viren was fuming with anger... He didn't knew what to say he just stood her hand and was about bring his hand towards her face when suddenly stopped realising what's happening!
Jeevika was shocked... so as everyone...
Jeevika: Ruk kyu gaye viren ji mariye na... Ye hath aj uth jane dijiye...  Aj pta chal gya ap apni bewi ko kitna samajh paye... Ye hath tab kaha tha viren ji jab aphi ka bhai apki patni ki izaat ke sath khel raha tha kaha tha ye hath?
She totally broke down!
Swamini: Nahi humara beta ye nahi kar sakta...
She kept her hand on her chest while falling!...
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I'll update when I reach page 19 till then  bug up n enjoy...