Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Virika- OS- Humesha n Forever *AWARDED* Ch10-Pg 32 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago


I'll be busy in the week days so wanna update as much as I can on the weekends...
This update is for u SARA again, coz ur comment motivates me to write more..
Love u my janeman n want an update from yr side soon πŸ˜ƒ
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Viren opened the door while Jeevika was behind him..
*Door Opens*
Virika r shocked to see virman in the corridor hand in hand...
Virat: I am sorry Manvi
Manvi: No I am sorry Virat
Virat: Manvi, mujhe tumse duur nahi rehna!
Manvi: Mujhe bhi nahi Virat, par di,jiju ka kya kare?
Viren: Aapne di, jiju ko bhi sath rehne do aur khud bhi sath raho!...
Virman Blushed πŸ˜³
Viren: Virat mere bhai to ho jaye?
Virat: Kyu nahi bhai!
Both the brothers wink at each other while the behnas r confused!
All of a sudden, the VV brothers lift up their ladies and walk towards their own rooms...
Jeevika: Viren Ji ap yeh kya kar rahe ho koi dekh lega...
Viren: Koi dekhta h to dekhe, shadi ki h tumse bhaga k thodi le ja raha hu.../
N vese bhi koi hume esse dekhe to acha hi h usse bhi to pta chale tum sirf meri ho sirf meri...
Jeevika πŸ˜³
Viren: Jeevika jaldi se door kholo
Jeevika: Kyu itni jaldi kya h ? Kya mein itni moti hu?
Viren: Aree tumhe to mein zindagi bhai utha k ghum sakta hu bas tumhe problem nahi honi chahiye!
He winks* n Jeevika πŸ˜³
Jeevika closed the door behind...
He carefully placed her on the bed... then he came on the top of her...
They had a cute eye-lock β€οΈ
Jeevika then succeeded to blush* πŸ˜³
Viren bent towards her ear, kissed it making jeevika close her eyes in pleasure..
Viren: I'll never let anybody hurt you...
Viren now moved towards her eyes and kissed them...
Viren: I'll stop every drop of water from coming out from here.. n I promise to keep u happy β€οΈ
Now he moved towards her nose and kissed it..
Viren:I'll kill the person who will have bad eyes on you n I promise you'll be safe in my arms forever..
Now he kissed her cheek..
Viren: i love it when you blush.. It makes me feel special πŸ₯±
Not he made him way to her lips...
Viren: I LOVE YOU β€οΈ β€οΈ
N they spent the night love making...
The next morning, sun rays made its presence through the window in the room...
Somehow disturbed by its presence Viren slowly opened his eyes and looked around the surroundings which reminded him of last night..
A smile crept on his face..
He saw his sleeping beauty who was in his arms smiling with no worries and was mesmarized...
He bent down and kissed her forhead with lots on love..
Viren: Kabhi tumhe apne se durr nahi jane dunga...
Jeevika: Aur jab tak ap mere sath ho mujhe aur kuch nhi chahiye πŸ˜›
He smiled hearing her comment as she opened her eyes..
Jeevika: Good Morning Viren Ji
Viren: Morning Love
Jeevika was about to move out of the bed when Vireb brought her back..
Jeevika: Ab kya hua Viren JI?
Viren: Mrs. vadhera shayad ap bhul rahi h apne mujhe meri 'Morning kiss' nahi di! So come on! while he indicated her to kiss on his cheek...
Jeevika: Viren Ji shayad ap bhul rahe h ki kal room se bahar jane se pehle apne mujhse apni morning kiss le li this so NOO!
Viren: Aree vo to agar mein Virat ke sath sota to na.. AB mein tumhare sath to tumhe morning kiss deni hi padegi...
Jeevika: Nahi milegi...
Viren: To fir mein tumhe jane nahi dunag aur tumhe hio embarassment jhelni padegi ki tum time par neeche nahi gyi ( Viren teased)
Jeevika getting no other idea kissed him on his cheek..
Jeevika: Ab khush, ab jau..
Viren: Haan jao na mene kab roka h?
Jeevika: Viren Jeee
Both took a bath n joined others in playing truth n dare after breakfaat!
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Precap: Viren: JEEVIKA...
Pheww gave a long update.. 
Love 
CHARU

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Posted: 11 years ago
THANKX FOR THE PM. VERY WELL WRITTEN
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey!

i just read all the parts in a go, and woo! what a start,

i was mesmerized and could imagine the whole scene,

when jeevika was trying to tease viren and the anger! o god!😲

lovely way to express it,

and the part when he slips into the bed and is impressed by jeevika!

hillarious!

you're a superb writer!

i really liked the part in which you showed viren's kisses and their meanings too!
awestruck i was!

thanks for the pm, and plate sooneR!
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow
thanks for the pm
continue soonπŸ€—
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow it was just suprb.
Lud the virika kiss lol,n the way he was telling that he will nevr let anything happen 2 her.
U r a fav writter charu .


I cant understand the precap so continue soon.
Thanx 4 d pmEdited by Virika-luv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
woh!!!
it ws awesome
loved it
plz continue soon
wl b waitin...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awesome updates loved all the parts read in one go..pl pm me when you write. Added you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey i read all the parts and i just loved your story plz pm me next time plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing, 
thanks for the PM... 
continue soon 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Helloos my turn to give chummis to u.
1st one for dedicating it to me.
2nd one for this fabulous update.
3rd one because I love you
And it goes on n on n on.
Perfect!! Need to say more.
Hayeee after reading this in like dil garden garden ho gaya.
I so want to see such scenes in humbum.
Charuuu this left me at loss if words so endure my blabbering.
asdfghjk.
LOL.
Edited by ktloversera - 11 years ago