Virika- OS- Humesha n Forever *AWARDED* Ch10-Pg 32 - Page 4

Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

superbb charu !!! continue soon lovely sweet romantic update

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swasti tiwari

@sanjana_cool

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

superb
continue soon and pm me!

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Charu

@-Charu-

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Okay so guys I am back 😉

N I'll update daily till jan b'coz NO UPDATE ON FEB N MID MARCH...

N PM"S WOULD BE SEND TO THOSE WHO SENT BE BUDDY REQUEST!

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Virika walked out of their room happily hand in hand...

Everyone were settled in the bus except virika n Virat...

Viren walked in the bus and gave his hand out to Jeevika.. She gladly accepted and walked inside the bus n suddenly Manvi yelled of her name n told her to sit with her which brought a sad expression on Jeevika's face but not creating a scene she steped forward only to be stopped by Viren...

Viren: Jeevika tum mere sath bethogi n that's final... Mujhe nahi pta tum manvi ko kya kahogi but you have to sit with me... N he walked forward to sit at the last seat...

This didn't went unnoticed by Virat who was standing right behind them...

Jeevika tried to convience Viren by making cute puppy faces but in vain... Now Virat thought of helping his babhi...

Mannu: Di aao na jaldi...

Jeevika: haan...

Jeevika was about to sit when Virat interuppted...

Virat: Aaa Bhabhi ap jake bhai k sath betho na mein apni beewi k sath bethunga...

Jeevika with a smirky smile : Ok n while going whispered in Virat's ears : Thank u!

On which virat replied with a smile...

Jeevika then with a broad smile went to sit with Viren who now by seeing her made and excited expression and let her sit at the window seat...

The bus started n now everyone was busy in their own things...

Jeevika was looking outside the window n Viren was constantly staring her...

While Jeevika looked him staring she asked him why is he staring her?

Jeevika: Virenji ap apni bewi ko pehli baar dekh rahe ho?

Viren: Ahaan ab apni bewi ko mein nahi to padosi dekhega?

Jeevika: Nahi... par agar dekhe to I don't mind 😛 she said while teasing himm...

Viren gets annoyed and pulls her towards him..

Viren: Kabhi essa dobara mat kehna tum sirf meri ho...

Jeevika: Virenji ap serious kyu ho gye? Mein sirf apki hu... coz I love u ❤️

Viren: I love u too ❤️ While kissing her on her forhead...

Virman interuppted...

Manvi: Agar apka ILY sesion khatam ho gya ho to hum chale di?

Virika blushed😳

Virat: Yar tumko khud ko to romance ata nahi unhe to karne do...

N all four walked out...

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Next update will have the starting of the picnic...

Hopefully I'll continue soon :D

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Charu

@-Charu-

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Running to tutions gonna continue again today don't worry!

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saavi jain

@vini_karan

Groupbie

Posted: 11 years ago

nyShhh..pyAra sa updatEee

nD yeaah..ua gonnA continuE today itseLf..!!

baby um waitingg :D

~~SAAVI~~

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Surbhi Jain

@surbhi1994

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

amazing part
loved it
coninue soon😉
thanx fr pm

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Nishtha Relan

@Nishtha.Relan

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

amazing update charu... thanks and waiting for your next update wohoo

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Charu

@-Charu-

IF-Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

I didn't thought that a thought of mine would be story one day n would be supported by so many...
Thanks guys... for the response you give it boosts my enerygy 😊
n believe me I get trillions of these ideas everyday wherever I am free you know na KHALI DIMAG SHETAAN KA GHAR HOTA H LOL
Here you go...
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Dadag: Evryone go n rest for some time we'll meet at the dinner at 8...
Everyone: Okay!
Everyone go towards their room...
Viren: Jeevika jaldi jaldi bath le lo, I'll take you to for sight seeing... I know a place here its beautifulll, you'll feel like we r in heaven believe me on this...
Jeevika gave a wide smile 😆
They reach their room...
Viren: Jeevika ji mere kapde...
Jeevika: Jee...
Jeevika take out his n her clothes n goes it to keep it in the washroom...
Jeevika: Virenji mene apke kapde washroom mein rakh diye h pehle ap bath le lijiye fir mein le lungi...
Viren: haan... while a idea struck his mind...
Viren: Jeevika humme sight seeing k liye jana h...
Jeevs: Haan to?
Viren: Aur 8 baje dinner par bhi jana h...\
Jeevs: haan viren jii to?
Viren: To mein soch raha tha ki kyu na hum dono sath hi naha le...
He gave a smirky smile coming closer...
Jeevika was shocked...;.
Jeevika: Nahiii (she felt like her sense gave up)
Viren: Kyu?
Jeevika: Kyuki mujhe thand lag rahi h n mujhe bath nahi leni she said while trying to run...
Viren: Acha ji tumhe bath nahi leni par abhi to tum keh rahi thi ki...
Before he could continue Jeevika ran out of the door...
Viren smiled at her wife's innocence n went for a bath...
He came out after some time n went outside locking the room behind,...
He finds her with shlok who was telling her how happy he is to come on a picnic...
Viren: Jeevika chalo...
Jeevika: Jee...
Shlok: Bhabhi ap jayiye mein mumma k pass ja raha hu...
Jeevika keeping her hand on his cheek: Okay! 😃
Virika go hand in hand to the sight...
It was a beautiful mountain end on a height...They were standing on the core of the place breathing in fresh air in the titanic pose...
Jeevika was lost in her own world... Unaware of what was happening all around when she came to her senses she realised Viren was not there...
He was no where around...
She was scared she shouted...
Viren Jee but he didn't came...
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Okay so the first suspense of my story LOL
I know it's stupid but waiting for the review!!
Love Always ❤️

Precap: Vireeennnjiii... Virenjiii kaha h ap? 😭😭😭

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mariarauf48

@mariarauf48

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

first one to comment yayyy😊

it was not stupd was soo cute 😳

saath mein naha le lol 😳

precap OMG 😲

jaldi jaldi update karna 👏

Edited by mariarauf48 - 11 years ago

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Ayesha

@--Ayesha--

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update.
Viren is so naught saath mein naha lo lol.
In precape viren gayab cant wait 2 know wht happend.
Update fast n pm meEdited by Virika-luv - 11 years ago

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