Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain


Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain
Ek Hazaaron Mein Meri Behna Hain

Virika- OS- Humesha n Forever *AWARDED* Ch10-Pg 32

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 11:40pm | IP Logged
 Guys I am new up here... This my first attempt to write hope you'll like it...

The court case had an happy ending with Jaiswal going to jail...Sleepy
And everyone retarded to their rooms with Viren going Swamini's room n consoling her after her after her B'day mid-night surprise..
Jeevika was standing in the corner in their room, looking outside with a hand on her mangalsutra and the other supporting it. Lost in her thoughts, she was unaware of her surroundings...

Jeevika Bhabhi nahi nahi Jeevika darling tum sirf meri ho...
Hum Viren ko apne raaste se hatta kar apni zindagi khusi se jeeyenge...
Aur rahi Manvi ki baat vo agar maan jati h to thik h varna hum usse bhi maar denge..
*N the SHOOT*

Flashback ends as Jeevika comes out of her thoughts with a jerk...
Last few days were the toughest to handle for Jeevika...
Tears rolled down her eyes remembering the worsest accident of her life... How could karan do that? How dare he thought of Jeevika when he knew that Jeevika immensely love Viren?

Meanwhile, Viren while coming back from Swamini's room had the same thoughts...
Viren thought: Our lifes took a 360 degree turn in a last few days.. I know Jeevika well, she is hurt but she will never tell anybody but I know my better half, she is weak emotionally especially when it comes to me!! I have to do something to make my love comfortable...
She has to forget everything...
I'll make her forget with my love... Its my fault somewhere or the other that I couldn't save her from the monster! How could you do that Viren?
He hit his hand on the wall in anger remembering the video clip...

His face lightened when a brilliant idea struck his mind...Today is SB's b'day & after the surprise they could go for a picnic & he could get his both fav. ladies out of the stress..
He happily went to the other family members except Jeevika & told them the plan..Everyone excitedly agreed!
But now, it was Viren's task which was left incomplete... To pacify Jeevika for the trip...

*In Virika's Room*
Jeevika was standing in the same position, numb, stressed, while Viren entered..
Viren: Jeevika... Kaha ho tum? Mujhe meri Black wali file nahi mil rahi!...
Jeevika didn't realise his presence , she was lost in her own thoughts...
Viren couldn't , she her in such a state, he went forward and hugged her from back...
Jeevika came out from her world all of a sudden...
A light smile came on her face seeing Viren but it canished in a couple of seconds remembering Karan's deeds...
A tear escaped from her eye which she tried to control but couldn't... and it was very well noticed by Viren...
He took the iniatiative and tightened his grip on her.. Jeevika feeling the warmth, relaxed and has the feeling of coming home after a long tiring day in his arms and closed her eyes and leaned to keep her head on his shoulder...
Viren was happy seeing that she is reacting to his hug & he could bring his love back from the depression...
They remained still for a couple of minutes..
Viren was not able to resist the silence anymore and he spoke up..
Viren: Jeevika...
Jeevs: hmm
Viren: Jeeevika mein tumhe kuch btana chahta hu...
Jeevs: Jee kahiye
Viren: Jeevika, hum log kal sab bahar ja rahe h picnic pe...
Jeevs: Jee thik h mein humare bags pack kar leti hu...
*She was about to leave when viren caught her back*
Viren: Haan, kar lena but mujhe tumse iss picnic se pehle kuch chahiye...
Jeevika: *Attentive* Kya chahiye virenjee?
Viren: Mujhe meri Jeevika vapas chahiye...
Jeevs: Confused* Matlab?
Viren: Mujhe vo Jeevika chahiye jo humesha smile karti rehti h, mujhse pyar karti h sabse jyada, mere uske pass jane par khush to bahaut hoti h par BLUSh bhi karti h...
Meri FM ji... Jo mene khana khaya ya nahi or ghar kab aunga blah blah tension lene se thakti nahi...
Mujhe apni Jeevika chahiye jo har baat ake apne Viren jee se kehti h, aur apne Viren ji ki hug mein sab bhool jati h!
Ye nhi jo abhi iss wakt mere samne khadi h mujhe meri Jeevika chahiye...
He said while holding her arms tight!
They share a eye lock... Viren could see the pain in her eys n Jeevika could see the love, the care...
No words were spoken...
Jeevika instantly broke the eye lock n the only word she spoke was Viren Ji...
Jeevs: Viren jii...* Hugged him tight, as tight she could held him close*
Viren tightened the grip bringing her more closer by waist...
Viren now felt her tears on his shirt and pulled apart...
Jeevika *While crying* : Viren ji meri taraf se kabhi Karan k liye koi feeling nahi thi mein bass apse pyar karti hu sirf apse..
before she could continue viren put hi finger on her lips...
Viren: shhsshh mein janta hu Jeevika, mein tumpar bharosa karta hu, apne ap se bhi jyada...
I love u jeevika...
Jeevika left withj no other option kiss him on his cheeks...
Viren felt it as a postive sign n Jeevika hugged him tight yet again...
Jeevika : i love you Viren Ji... i love you, love you, love...Embarrassed
Viren* tightening the grip* : Ayee Hayee Mrs. Vadhera... Kya baat h Wink 
Acha jeevika suno aj meri baat...
Mein humesha tumhare sath hu... humesha... kabhi apne apko akela mat samajhna... N kal hum picnic pe jaa rahe h ab hum apni zindagi ki nahi suruwat karenge..
Jeevika nodded with a huge with a huge smile Big smile LOL
So thats it for now guys...
This is  my first attempt on writing hope you'll like it Heart
I'll continue if I get some response...
                      Guys if you want pm's buddy list me...
part 1 - Page 1
Part 2- Page 2
Part3- Page5
Part 4- Page 6
Part 5- Page 8
Part 6- Page 10
part 7- Page 12
PART8 - Page 19
PART 9- Page 27
Part 10- Page32
If you want to read more by me then refer to my index:

Edited by Charucrazy - 30 April 2013 at 5:26am

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Fari_15 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 11:47pm | IP Logged
I was amazing!!! Loved it!!
Plz continue soon! Smile

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komalkryan Newbie

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Posted: 14 January 2013 at 12:00am | IP Logged
Awsm...loved it so much...continue soon..<3

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$Hef@li Groupbie

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Posted: 14 January 2013 at 12:10am | IP Logged
its awesome...loved d emotional bonding of virika...do continue soon...n pm me...Smile

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..Amrita.. IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 14 January 2013 at 12:33am | IP Logged
brilliant start will be waiting for the next part continue soon

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HayatM Senior Member

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Posted: 14 January 2013 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Really nice!:))
Do write more pls

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surbhi1994 Goldie

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Posted: 14 January 2013 at 2:18am | IP Logged
awesome yaar
loved it
continue soon
pm me plz
Smile Clap Wink 

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vini_karan Groupbie

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Posted: 14 January 2013 at 2:23am | IP Logged
simplY wOW...
uA sucH a brilliaNt writeRR...apnA ye talent kahA chupa ke rkha thAA :P
AwestruCkk :*
continuE asaP...
i canT waiT foR diSS..!!


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