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FF : HAR PAL... (CH 32: PG 143)

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 8:15am | IP Logged

REQUEST TO THE SILENT READERS:
PLEASE GIVE A BUDDY REQUEST SO THAT YOU MAY NOT MISS THE NEXT PART OF THIS FF AS IT IS NOW IN THE FAN FICTION FORUM...

Hey everyone!! After giving a shock treatment by stopping Yadien... I'm back again. And this time with something that I had not much done before.

It's the story of ETF, but can't classify it as Ariya or something else.

It starts with the ETF, with Aisha in the team... and no, its not Arisha.

Will Riya be there? Honestly I don't know. As of now, she is not here. But she is not dead, as she may or may not come in as the story progress. Its because I have a habit of changing the story line at times. So lets see'

So for now its Arjun FF.

I know I'm confusing you all' let this confusion or rather the mystery stay for a while...

So here I go, fingers crossed and for the first time, a bit tensed at the beginning itself... never felt it after "Life goes on'" as it was my first story... so lets go...



Edited by kunchu - 01 March 2013 at 12:32pm

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PROLOGUE:

He tried to open his eyes slowly. Every inch of his body was paining. His hands were tied up together by a rope. The legs that hardly touched the ground were weak to support him. His shirt was taken away, maybe it was torn. His once bare chest had blood. He could feel blood in his mouth and a bit flowing from his nose. He tried to keep his eyes open. "concentrate. Breath. You will have to live. breath."

2 men noticed him awake. They came to him. "are aap ut gaye... aap jab so gaye the thab tho hum bore ho gaye the. Tho shuru kare?" they held him by his hair and pulled his head back. He closed his eyes by the pain. "Ek hi sawaal?? Kaha hai wo? Jaldi bathao warna tum janthe ho na ke kya hone wale hai? na tum bachega... aur na wo"

"kaha hai wo? Usse chod do"

"aha... pehle hum sawaal kiya tha, tho pehle apko hi jawaab dena hoga na??"

"jo puchna hai puchlo mere jawaab wahi hai. I don't know. Mujhe patha nahi"

"tho aap aise nahi manoge. Khair... (looks to the other man: le aao...)

The other man leaves and he saw what was in his hand. A red hot iron that was fuming. The interrogator was happy to see the response on his prey. "kaise laga thofa? Ab bhi koi jawaab hai tumhare paas?"

He nodded negative.

The red hot iron was brought closer to him. He could feel its warmth. They placed it on his chest, from shoulder and across his heart region. "AAH..." his scream echoed the hall.

---

Somewhere ahead a team of men and woman was working on some files. They were evidently tired. But no one was ready to accept the defeat. Each step was leading to the dead end. A man leaned onto the table with his 2 hands on it. he was looking at an empty chair. "kaha ho tum??" his heart cried out without the voice.

---

The man was fully down by the torture. He could hardly feel the burning sensation. Through his partly open eyes he could see blood oozing out of the new burn. He was feeling dizzy.

Man 1: patha nahi kaunsi mitti se bana hai ye? Do din se yaha hai. aabhi thak muh nahi khola. Aise bhi koi ho saktha hai kya?

Man 2: kyu nahi ho saktha? (Looks at the unconscious man hanging on his hands) akhir  ETF ke chief  jo hai wo!!!

 ***

So everyone!!!

Hows it???


CHAPTER 1: PAGE 5



Edited by kunchu - 14 January 2013 at 4:49am

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Good one...
Cont soon...

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Niceee...Hmm toh is d chief Rathod or Arjun...???

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 8:52am | IP Logged
OMG!! Rathod in trouble???
Nice,,, Continue soon... 
And please show ARISHA!! Please please!!

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 9:18am | IP Logged
wow i was waiting for ur new ff
do continue soon
i dont mind even if it is arisha storyWink

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Hmmm finally you are backBig smile
Well its a very captivating start, you are making some people torture RathodCry
So this will be a crime-thrillerWink
Waiting eagerly for your future updatesSmile

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 9:51am | IP Logged
good one. please continue this ff. so rathore is in trouble. please update soon.

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