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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 8:45am | IP Logged
Go with the theme of the OS


I decided to write this as a quick OS
this is from the precap where Prashant gets aartis hand and Yash comes




Yash - blue
Aarti - Pink
Prashant - grey
Ansh -
Green because Ansh fav color green
G3 -
purple
others - black italic
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Yash and Aarti went there seperate ways to find Ansh. Aarti looking for Ansh, she shouted
''Ansh!!''
 ''Mumma you are here? Why didn't Papa pick me up.. Dost Uncle came''
Aarti went up to Prashant and gave him a big fat slap on the face
''How dare you touch MY ANSH, he is not yours, he is mine and YashJi's son. Come on Ansh, We find Papa''
 Aarti try to run away.Prashant grabs Ansh's hand and says
''No one can seperate me from my beta''
 ''Do not get this through your thick skull, HE ISN'T YOURS''
Aarti trying to leave when Prashant grabs Aartis hand Ansh shouts
''MUMMA''
 '' Leave me Prashant leave me, Let go, Let go of my arm Prashant, Let go of my arm''
Prashant ''AHAHA what you going to do aarti seperate my Ansh from me''
Yash came from behind Prashant.. Looking very angry.
H
e kicked Prashant, Prashant  let go of aarti, he fell straight to the floor,
Yash went up to him and kicked him a few times to make sure he could not get up.
'' Don't you ever touch MY aarti and MY son again''

Yash hugged Aarti and Ansh, he looked at Aarti and said
''U ok Aarti?'' (no AartiJi guys)
''Yes i am fine, are you hurt YashJi?''
'' No not hurt, come on lets go,
he smiled and Ansh and said
''Guess what ? I have balloons !!''
''Yay .. I love you Papa! I know that Mumma loves you aswell and you love Mumma!''
Yash and Aarti shared an eyelock for a couple of seconds ..

Prashant rose from the floor getting up slowly clutching his leg
'' Shall we go Aarti'' (again no JI)
'' YASHJI LOOK BEHIND!!!!''
Prashant was there with a big branch big enough to knock Yash out. Prashant aimed at Yash.. Just when Prashant was about to hit Yash, Aarti came in the way. Yash was blinded my Aarti's beauty when he saw Prashant and saw what prashant what he was about to do.
''AARTIJI!!'' he shouted
''MUMMA'' Ansh shouted
Yash went infront of Aarti, Yash fell on the floor, Aarti saw Yash on the ground
''YASHJI YASHJI please wake up..''
Prashant left laughing


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Aarti somehow managed to get him to the hospital (somehow she carried him). The doctors immediately took Yash to the Operating room/theater whatever as he was bleeding a lot. Aarti decided to ring The SM. G3 picked the phone up
''Hello''
'' MummyJi Yash is in hospital (she forgot the JI aha), he was protecting me and Ansh, Prashant wacked him on the head, YashJi is in the operating room,''
'' How did this happen Bahu? Vidhi Palak Payal We need to go to the hospital ! My Yash is in hospital''
'' What happened to Yash, and btw he isnt our concern''
''He is my son, and for once, i am not listening to you, I am sorry i am going against you. I am going to see my son''
'Mumm
yJi this all happened because ... ... ... ... ... ''
she told G3 that SP said he had no relation to Ansh when the schoo doctor rang up and said Ansh got hurt and Prasant took Ansh away and how they tried to find Ansh and what happened when they found him..

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G3, PayPal and Vidhi came to the hospital.. Vidhi still peeved off at Aarti. Few hours past by.. The doctor came to Aarti and said
'' Are you Mrs Sindhia?''
''Yes I am''
''The patient wants to see you''
''Ok''
Aarti walked to the room where Yash was.. Aarti looked and Yash, Yash looked at Aarti.. Aarti walked slowly to the bed and sat down near Yash stroking his hair.. she whispered
''I love you Yash''
Yash looked at Aarti
'' I love you Aarti ''
Aarti gave Yash a quick kiss on the forehead
'' I am glad you are ok YashJi and btw that was your TAX''
'' ahahah Aarti, I am fine, I was more worried about you''

Yash and Aarti shared a romantic eyelock for minutes, smiling at each other, lost in each other eyes EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

so was it ??? Ouch No tomatoes thrown plz.. I can continue and extend it if  you guys want to ..



Part 3 updated - Father and Son talk
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3389503&TPN=4&#73967660


Edited by Yaarti - 14 January 2013 at 9:45am

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Hey gr8 writing yaar..Love it..

If possible love to see yash and his papa scindia conversation too

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 8:53am | IP Logged
Like this comment if i should continue.

If i do continue that people who have liked this i will PM to say the next update is there

okok and BTW ADD ME AS A BUDDY hehe

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 8:55am | IP Logged
@Yaarti:Loved your Os...Simple , Sweet and lovable...Let me wait for next updatStarStar

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 8:56am | IP Logged
Woow lovely piece of writingClapplease do continue and pm me if you can dear as i do not want to miss the continuationTonguepllleeesee 

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 8:58am | IP Logged
sure will do !! .. may update another part and make it longer only if if people want me to continue .. and thanks for the comments guys!!! 

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 9:22am | IP Logged
Wow wow lovely os sweety !!! Atlast arthi payed her tax to yashu yippeee !!!!
Great job dear

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yep .. she payed tax! aha ..

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