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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 1:11am | IP Logged
Hii Gorgeous BALHians I know its shortone but i want to share this thought with you all ..Its a small birthday present on sakshi's Birthday .. Enjoy the day .. and wish our princess with luck & happiness ..Plz wish her on this thread..
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3388301


"Hame appki madath ki jaroorath hai !!
Plz mai aapke aage hath jhodthi hu!!
Plz meri bachhi ko dund lijiye,
Mai[sobs] mai
manthi hu ki shayd ham se galthi huyi hai !!
lekin mai aapke aage hath jodithu hu plz meri bachhi ko dhoond lijiye "
[Just watch her acting yaar ,mind blowing ]Take a bow lady and live happily ..

Hearing her words,Even the inspector eyes moistend ..
He assured her ,Mam we will start our search right now .
Plz aapne app ko sambhaliye[Plz control your self]
He immediately sent Pehu picture and details to every station ,he himself went for searching .
Ram entwind his hand with her ,Priya control yourself ..
We have to be strong now ,For Peehu's sake ..
Plz come with me and search for her ..
They went to school and from there they were searching each inche for their adorable daughter.
Tring tring ...
Ram's mobile rang ..
He attended the call ,His face went pale ..Turned his direction to bandra road ..
Priya asked him What happen ??Did they found her ??
Is there any news about her ??Plz tell me ,her tears are uncontrolable
They had a news about her but they were not able to find any ??Plz be calm we are going there .
Soon their car reached to the bandra city hospital gates ..
Priya eyes flouded with tears ..
Ram where are we ??why you brought me to the hospital ??
Pe..peehu theek tho hai na ??
He got down he made her to getdown from the car ?
Rammm !!Im asking you only ??His face hung down ??
We have to go ,they all are waiting for us..
Priya followed him in a daze ,she clucthed his arm tightly seeing all the patients ..
He put his arm around her shoulder to comfort her ..
Soon they reached the police ,Where they were waiting for RAYA..
Sir :He is the boy who survived in the accident .
Matlab ??
Ram's face went pale ,He feels that earth is crashing under his feet ,he began to sweating very badly ,his left hand went to support Priya ...But all he feel is empty ...
He quickly glanced at the site .. Priya sliding down dazly supporting the wall ,Her tears are flowing like floud,her eyes became red ,Her body shivers with worst fear of her life ..
She murmurs "This ..this can't be true ""
that ..wo...this can't be true ..
Ram kneels down infront of her ,Priya he called her very softly..
Ram ... She first time called his name after 5 years ..
Ram peehu said that she dont leave me alone ..
How this will happen ..her sobs racking the body ,He engulfed in a brief hug,He rubbed her back to soothen her up .
Police: Sir this way plz ..
Ram: Clutched priya's shoulder ,gave her strength to walk furthur ..
They leads to one room...where a tiny bundle packed in a white sheets ..
Priya looked at him ,his hand is shivering ,her legs were trembling ..
They were in dilemma ..what exactly is happening ??
She glanced around the room ,found a tiny bundle lying on the bed lifelessly ..
She gasped "Rammm"
Do you believe this is true ..
No Ram ,You are mistaken ,nothing happend to her
plz leave me ,i want to go ..
plz this is not true ..plz I wil search her ..
Leave me for god's sake ..
Ram:Priya ..my dear plz its just confirmation ..
Phir bhi Ram ,she yelled at him ..
I know about peehu , she wont let me leave alone and go .
I love her dammit ,its not her ..why dont you understand ..
she writhed under his grip to free herself.
Police :Mam its just verification purpose .. just see the dead body and clear the confusion wether it is your daughter or not !!
Priya angry red eyes glared at him ...He feared at the site ..and steps back when she aproaching him.
Do you have a daughter ,she asked him
police:Yes mam ..
Did she missed anytime ..
Police:yes mam ,when she was a kid but soon we found her ..
Priya:she cut him in between .at that time ,I will show  this lifeless kid body to you and asks sir  just for clarification ,How you feel..
Police:Sorry mam..
Priya:Please we all are parents , we all love our kids ..Even [crying badly] this kid's parents also will feel bad when they heard about this tragedy ..
But i strongly feel she is not our daughter , She ran from there leaving all stunned ..
Police : Sir!!!
Ram : She is correct Inspector ,It wont be our daughter ..He too rushed after her ..
Calling her priya ..priya ..
she ran and sat on the bench which was placed in outside the garden ..
He sat beside her ..She cupped her face in her palms sobbing ..
Priya ..I sent total team to search for her ..Plz we will find her by tonight ..
Dont worry ..she will be alright ..
She looked at him with love and emotion ..
"She is my life Ram, I love you and I love her "
You two people are my heartbeats Ram...
He astonished for a while with her confession ..He came to reality when he found his shirt wet be her tears .. He can't see her in this state ..He too was trying to be strong but tears spilling from his eyes too seeing the vulnerability of the situation and themselves..
Priya mai kuch kehana chahatha hu tum se !!
She looked at his dark eyes with her tear filled eyes ,blinked them to cotinue ..
"I ..I ..Lo"
A shrill ringing tone alerted them ..
She asked him lift the phone ..It must be about peehu ..
He attended the call ..His tears flowing uncontrollably
"Listening "Papa " from that side
Priya shakes him asking what happend ..
He kept it on loud speaker he seriously not getting the words ..
Papa ...now this time her voice lil bit crying mode ..Mamma hai waha pe ...
Priya happiness is no boundaries ..
Princess where are you baby ,she swallowed a lump in her throat and prayed to god 1000times to hear her lively voice ..
He soon called to vikram told her tap his phone and find out where peehu is exactly ..
The location .. Ram pulled priya to get into the car while she pampering peehu with her motherly talk ..
Peehu ..baby aap kaha hai ??
Mamma muzhe nahi patha hai ,mai aapka ghar ke ardess dhoondthe dhoondthe ..
Priya heard peehu crying ...
She too was crying hearing her kid ..
Dekho baby mamma our papa aaraha hai aapke pass ..
Meanwhile vikram traced the location with the help ofdetective team..Told the adress to Ram..
soon Ram reached the destination because it is near to the hospital ...
He was searching for peehu there but he didnt find her ..
He took the phone from priya, asked peehu what she can see her surroundings..
She told she is seeing a road ..
nahi beta our kya ??
ek bada sa vehicle hai ??Ram searched for that soon he found out the truck , he asked her , the red colour one
Ha papa ! she said
he almost ran that side with priya and they found their lil bundle sitting under a tree , crying & talking with them ...
Priya ran to her hugged her kissing her each inch of face and checking wether she had any bruises are hurt.. he too engulfed her into a big hug ..
Threesome hugged ..Cried their heart outs ..
Peehu ...mamma im hungry ,allo parantha chahiye !!
Both are smiled at each other ..They were back to priya's flat ..
Peehu sitting in Priya's lap ,She is stroking her hairs slowly asking the details what leads to this type of hurry ..
Peehu playing with the phone asked her dad..
"Papa ...when you will feed mamma's number in it "
Both broke into laughter seeing her charmingness again ..
Priya cursed herself for yelling at Ram when he gave Mobile to her ..But today that was helped her finding Peehu ..She was very glad to see her back ..
They reachd their flat ..had their dinner ..Peehu asked Ram to sleep beside her ,he obeyed it ,she slept nicely between their mom and dad..
Ram touched Priyas hand that is lying on Peehu's tummy ..
She looked at him ..He looked at her ..
Mai chaltha hu !!!he said to her
Why dont you stay here today ,I think I'm still in fear of losing her forever ..
He shuts her mouth his fingers..she asked him plz ..
He said "Ok"
By the way you are about to tell something in the hospital yard..
Hmm scractching his temple ...
Nothing ...
he spelled slowly
"I Love you in past ,present and future tooo "
I too love you with moistend eyes she grasped his hand more tightly ..Both slept snuggling closer to their princess ..

Both knows they love each other , they have to clarify manythings , But the uniqueness of their relationship always stayed still ...
that is "they are mean to be together "
Soon they will clarify everything and will lead a happy life ..


Missing their closeness'
Missing their togetherness
Missing their princess
makes witnessed
their love towards each other ..
we hope they will show in the sereial also this kind of realization..


Thank you very much for sapring your time to read this FF and make me feel happy with your commnets ... Thank you soo much ...
HugHeart
HugHeartHugHeartHugHeartGod bless you all


Plzplz do leave your feed back and dont forgt to hit the LIKE button...

If anybody wants Pm add me to your buddy list ,will send you PM..


My other works of RAYA..


FF HugSirf Meri Ho ,  FF  ... Heart Ishq Heart,

FFSmile Prediction ,  SS Wink Love Journey,

OS Star Love And Life ,

OS Blushing SpecialGiftOs:Missing !!!

SS:Custody,SS:Rayape meet,Os:I Miss You,

OS:Tere Bina Mushkil Hai Jeena



Edited by luvsakshi - 13 January 2013 at 12:05pm

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 1:14am | IP Logged
ME FIRST!!! I owe you millions of replies Tongue You'll get them slowly Embarrassed Il start with this one Big smile Be back after reading Embarrassed

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 1:34am | IP Logged
Neel!
 
You had me crying while reading the first part. I haven't yet got over that shock. Whenever I see movies or any shows with that kind of Mortuary scenes, I find it really hard to handle and when you are writing about one of my most favorite people in the show, you got me totally down. I just hope Peehu is safe in Priya's home and am actually dreading reading the update or seeing the show on Monday. When they show children in any kind of trouble it really takes a toll on me and I get very agitated. Now, I am sure I won't be able to sleep tonight.
 
Very well written and I loved the happy ending. Please PM me when you update

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 1:36am | IP Logged
jst wow!!!!

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ranii.sharma

ME FIRST!!! I owe you millions of replies Tongue You'll get them slowly Embarrassed Il start with this one Big smile Be back after reading Embarrassed


Hayee Princess .. you back on our Princess birrthday .. glad to see you back .Waiting !!



Edited by luvsakshi - 12 January 2013 at 1:40am

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sangautam

Neel!
 
You had me crying while reading the first part. I haven't yet got over that shock. Whenever I see movies or any shows with that kind of Mortuary scenes, I find it really hard to handle and when you are writing about one of my most favorite people in the show, you got me totally down. I just hope Peehu is safe in Priya's home and am actually dreading reading the update or seeing the show on Monday. When they show children in any kind of trouble it really takes a toll on me and I get very agitated. Now, I am sure I won't be able to sleep tonight.
 
Very well written and I loved the happy ending. Please PM me when you update


Hi sandhya ji , I told the writer i dont want Peehu's kidnap track just want parents turmoil when they loss their child and want an happy ending ..So she just mould her story in the other way to avoid the kidnaping track .. But the Cv's are ruined my expectations ,just now i read in the other thread About the new promo,They said that 3 men kidnaped her and placed in storage rrom,she is crying mamma..
and there priya cryin in police station ..
Ohh unable to see this track..wish Cv's could close this as soon as possible..

Im sorry for the sad scene but whever we get these type of incidents , my heart goes away for the parents ..Anyway peehu is safe in her mothers warmth in this OS but not in our show ..
Thank you for the feed back ..

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by farwasneha

jst wow!!!!

Thanks dear ..

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 2:02am | IP Logged
Very  emotional  but at the end it is nice thank u for the OS

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