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PlzzZ contin

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wow a diffnt and fabulous story plz update soon...

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plz continue...

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nice one Uteem.

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awesome OS...continue soon

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Thanks guys for the likes and comments...
now posting the 2nd and the last part..
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In the evening..armaan is getting little cranky and wants to go out...whereas mb is little tired and she wants to take rest...suddenly someone knocks the room ..and mb opens and sees rk standing there...seeing rk armaan crawls towards him...and forward his hand to pick him up...he picks armaan...and armaan started jumping in his arms..and they go inside the room...armaan is still jumping in rk arms as he wants to go out...and seeing this rk asked mb that can he take armaan in the garden..mb allows him...as she can take rest...

Armaan goes with rk in the garden and enjoys with him...after 1 hour when armaan slept in rk arms...he takes towards mb room he knocks the door twice..but no response..as mb is still sleeping...so he goes towrads his room and make armaan to sleep on bed properly and he is also tired and he slept hugging him.
Afetr 1 hour...madhu wakes up and goes to the reception and enquire about rk..he said he is in his room...madhu goes towards his room and knocks the door..after 5 mins rk opens his eyes and get up and goes to open the door and sees madhubala standing there...madhu asks from him about armaan..he said i came to your room and knock the door twice but he got no rply..so he takes armaan with him..he is sleeping..madhu goes towards the bed and sees armaan sleeping with cute smile..she dont want to disturb him and ask rk when armaan wakes up..please call me..rk said ok...
Laterarmaan wakes up and smiles seeing rk sitting side by him and watchiung tv...he pokes his thighs..rk sees towards armaan and smiles and picks her up and armaan kisses his cheeks..and rk takes armaan towards mb room...mb takes armaan from rk and thanks him and they have dinner together and sleeps in their room.

Next morning rk and mb wakes up..and mb makes armaan ready and goes towards the meeting hall...rk knows a lady in dehradun..whose his best friend mom and requested her to come to the hall and she took care of armaan and on the other side..rk and madhu attended the meeting and going to finilise the deal..when the share holder of the opposite company enters the hall..seing him...madhu fainted there...rk is shocked and said that they will meet in 1 hour...they are ok with it..as the deal is really profitable for them.

Rk takes mb to the room and aunty with armaan follows them and throws little bit water on her face..after few minutes she wakes up and hugs rk and started crying..seeing his mom armaan too started crying..and whereas from one hand he strokes mb back and on the other side armaan back too...mb says she wants to go back to the hotel..after seeing her state he said he will come with her and he said to the company head that they will continue next time..they said ok...one person is still in shocked state that is none other than madhubala...he never thought in his arms that he will face madhu...and too with rk and after seeing rk concern towards mb...he knows if rk cancels the deal their company downfall will start...

On the otherside...rk took mb back and asks from her whats the matter and even told if she is comfortable in sharing the past she can...she can see pure concern in her eyes..and opens her full past/...rk is shocked and angry on that person..amd mb said whats her mistake thats loving a person..who just left her the next day after becoming one..and she is alone in this world today also and in past also...and breaks down..and rk asked who is responible she said YASH CHOPRA...rk is shocked and told her thats why you are fainted..she said ya...she can never forget that part when no one was there with her during her preg days and also when armaan birth takes place...rk said shhh and makes her sleep...and in his mind he thought yash you are finished...i will make you realise what biggest crime you did...you will suffer whole life..he called the company owner and cancel the deal...the owner is shocked and he tell his share holder...yash is more shocked...and decided to talk with rk...he goes to the hotel and hotel receptionist calls rk and told yash chopra is here to meet you...he goes to the reception..and before yash can speak he gives a tight slap on his face and said ready to face hell and ready to face RISHABH KUNDRA...be ready to face your good days...yash is totally shocked and says that bitch and before he can continue one more blow..and yash leaves from there...and calls his source to get all the information about yash chopra and even told makes him  to lose all his buisness deals and makes his life hell...

The next day they leave dehradun and goes back to their city and rk tells mb not to think about anyone..and lives her life and she is not alone he is there for them...
In the evening he calls madhubala and told her that she can bring armaan to the office with her rom next day..she is happy...Next day she takes armaan with her and all the office staffs are happy with the cute little baby and all pampers him..day by day armaan is getting family feeling from the staff and madhu is becoming more comfortable with rk after sharing her past..and on the other side...yash buisness is declining...and he is not getting buisness deals...he is very much frustrated...and he is in the state of nervous breakdown as no one is ready to help him.

Its been 1 year now...yash buisness is nothing...he is in mental asylum...rk revenge is done...today armaan birthday..whole office staff is celebrating armaan birthdy..he got so many gifts..armaan is happy in his small family and armaan loves rk alot..he calls him da/..madhubala also knows about this...she is happy as she also started liking rk...but still their is some fear in madhubala mind...in the evening madhu is clebrating armaan birthday in her room and only rk along with nanny is there at the home...rk proposed madhubala for the marriage and said i truely love you and armaan and will give armaan the love of the father..you can take your time...and pleaser have faith in me and goes from there..nanny also said to mb that rk is a good guy...please marry him..whole night she thinks about this...and slept after making decision.
Next day mb along with armaan goes to the office and rk behaved normally with her and armaan and loves armaan to the core...she decdied to tell him her decision...in the evening when all office staff left the office...she goes to rk cabin with armaan and armaan hands over a card to rk..rk opens the card..and becomes shocked to see the contents of the card...It has written..YES I WILL MARRY OU OR I SAY YES I WILL MARRY ARMAAN FATHER.

Rk is over the moon and hugs mb along with armaan and kisses mb forehead...mb never felt bad with the touch..and they decided to have a court marriage...and he dropped mb and armaan to her house...mb told about her decision to the nanny..nanny is happy now atleast mb can live good life and armaan can get fatherly love...she blessed both.

Next day rk declared about his marriage with mb in the office..all are happy and congrats them whole heartly...and in the coming weekend they have court marriage..and mb with armaan left for rk house..and on the request of mb nanny also goes with them..as armaan is very much attached with her...
In the night...rk made armaan sleep in between them and he knows mb is still not comfortable with him...and he respect her...
Mb respect for rk becomes more and admire him..and feels happy that rk never forces on her..and armaan is very happy with his da...Now its 1 month of their marriage and mb decided to give rk the bet gift that is to submit herslef...
She decroted the room with flowers.,,roses and made armaan sleep with nanny...
Late night rk enters the room and is shocked to see the room and mb who is sitting on the bed like a new bride...he knows what mb is trying to do and is happy that she is taking first step towards him and goes towards the bed and sit there and lifts the veil.and admire her and kisses her forehead..and goes towards her lips and said may i...she blushes and rk got his anwser...and kisses her lips and slowly slowly goes towards her neck collerbone and offs the late and becomes one...now they are 2 body 1 soul...after 1 year.
Mb is shouting in the labour room and rk is pacing outside the room and armaan is sitting with nanny...today is armaan birthday...he is 3 years old and he is getting wonderfull gift from his mom that is new sibling...they were celebrating his birthday soon mb feels the pain..and they took her to the hospital...after half an hour...doctors come out and congrats them and said mb delivered a cute baby girl...rk is happy and armaan is over the moon to get a sister and before rk can run towards the room ..armaan runs inside all started laughing seeing this...more than rk armaan is happy...and hugs his mom and admires his new sister..soon rk joins them and kisses mb forehead and the little angel and picks her up and admires her...all are happy..and armaan declared that he will name her...RISHBALA are happy and said what will be the name of your sister..he said MAHI...rishbala admires the cute name and hugs armaan...and kisses him...and all of them lives happily after...

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i want to end the story beofre tomoorw,,,
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Posted: 18 January 2013 at 12:49am | IP Logged
Lovely ending.
Vry nicely written.

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