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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Nice update

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 2:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by RamnVij

Jenny,

What can I say, except thanks for extending to your readers, the privilege of being special guests in the pre-inauguration launch of the luxury palace hotel at Anand Vilas Smile

Your descriptions of the grandeur, opulence and ornate decor of the halls, courtyards, balconies, windows, chandeliers Smile just took my breath away. I could actually see the rooms, corridors and gardens opening up before me! As a HUGE fan of Indian architecture, forts & palaces, I would just like to give you a standing ovation for your evocative and descriptive writing. 

Nice to see Arnav's empathy for Rajvir's pain and guilt. Also, hope he does something for the local community that holds him in such reverence, just as he has started an NGO 'Khushi' for a worthy cause, hope he & Khushi institute some community upliftment/ cottage industry programs to help the local populace better their circumstances. 

Am not really worked up about Khushi's lack of reply, she must have been immersed in her on call duties. Perhaps she even was on an earlier flight to reach Mewar? Am sure you have some nice moments planned for the couple in your next update. Smile

Cheers...

You expressed my sentiments 100 times more eloquently than I could! Clap
Now I'm paranoid something has happened to Khushi...

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 2:17am | IP Logged
Amazing update. Arshi in d talkin term wow.

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 2:34am | IP Logged
gr8 update...

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 2:36am | IP Logged
read all parts in one go! thanks for writing :)

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 5:17am | IP Logged
That was a very sweet update. 
I like this Rajvir character.
Awesome.
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 6:39am | IP Logged
well, here's my comment on the update... although I could've added to the first post, since you update right before my comment, but i thought it wouldn't be fair...

anyways, so Arnav went back to his haunting past, eh?? It was a bittersweet ride... I mean on one side, he was facing the demons of his past, he was remembering every pain that he faced as a child, his father and mother's everyday quarrel, and his loneliness... yet on the other side, he's remembering his love... every little moment he spent with Khushi... 

I feel bad that he has to face it all alone... since it's definitely not an easy step, and to walk that path alone? I am hoping that Khushi is giving him a surprise visit and coming early... I think he deserves this. Khushi has always understood Arnav, I hope understood his discomfort, and his loneliness... 

ps. the description you gave about the decoration of the room? flawless.. I literally imagined every corner of that room... :)

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