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Hello Arjunians...back with a part...bohat sochkar likhi hoom...hope u like it...iss prem kahaani nahi itni aasaan yaar...bohat hardwork karni hai!
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The note read….."kya baat hai ACP sir? Mera ek halkhi si warning aur itna darr….mazaa aagaya!…..AND NOW THE GAME IS ON!"
There was a small note again at the end of the chit "waise aapki wife ko blue se zyaadha RED suit karegi….Blood Red, you know?"
It was clear that this was no silly flirty guy…it was definitely some criminal sadistic mind which was hatching plans to make Arjun go through hell!
And Arjun also understood that he had been following them all along!
Arjun knew that he had to get his team working on this or atleast let Rathod know about it…He couldn't afford a risk in this case, especially when it boiled down to Reva….
He glanced once into the hospital entrance before driving out…..
The republic day function went on well…however there were emotional moments which filled every team member with Riya's memories again…..…it was heartwrenching to see Riya's mother crying inconsolably…
Their minds kept replaying their close encounters with their darling team mate!
"Dammit!! [after a little pause]ussko tho hum pakadh lenge Rawte…tum chintha matth karo! Sawaal hai yeh ke kaun ho saktha hai ke itna himmat karke tumse ulajh raha hai?"
Sameer barked out furiously seeing the notes and hearing the matter from Arjun!
Arjun snapped from his thinking and spoke up "jo bhi ho bohat shaathir hai Rathod…..koyi chota mota criminal nahi hai!"
Sameer: ho saktha hai par ETF se nahi bachega….dont worry!"
Arjun: ETF? Matlab tum sabko involve karne waale ho??
Sameer: haaan….Shree ke help toh tum already le chukhe ho…..[seeing Arjun's confused face] fikhr matth karo…yeh hum paanch logon ke baahar nahi jaayega…..I will make sure of that!
Arjun knew that Sameer was right…..the team's involvement would be an additional asset and he would be able to track down the guy easily…..
It wasn't a great idea to keep it under wraps and keep worrying….Moreover he trusted his team…..but Aisha….he wasn't sure if he wanted to involve her in this…..Arjun left that decision to Sameer at the moment…..He didn't want to give her an odd one out feeling also!
At the conference table, Sameer briefed the team about the matter and also told them that it has to be kept confidential as it was extremely sensitive and involved the safety of an ETF officer and his family!
Chotu: kaun ho saktha hai? Arjun sir se aisa mazaag?
Shree: exactly….ETF se aur woh bhi Arjun sir se khel???
Rathod: Shree, Chotu…..yeh koyi mazaag ya khel nahi hai!!
Arjun was revolving his pen and thinking deeply…….Aisha was silent and suddenly spoke up "kya main woh notes dekh sakthi hoom??"
Arjun glanced at her while Sameer passed the notes to Aisha
Aisha studied it and then responded, "sir, yeh ek criminal mind ka khel hi hai par mujhe nahi lagtha ke kuch badaa karne waala hai!
Arjun was silent but Rathod spoke up sarcastically "phir tumhe kya lagtha hai Aisha??….ke hum chup beite aur kuch badaa hone ka wait karein?"
He spoke that out in an impulse and didn't realize what he just spat out till he finished…he looked apologetically at Arjun…..
Arjun stared back at Sameer and Aisha before looking away….
Aisha wasn't prepared to stop "Sir…..I meant that he doesn't intend to do any harm…he is a sadist and usse yeh sab karke mazaa aa raha hai..woh sirf Arjun sir ya unke wife ko daraana chahtha hai…..koyi jisse inke khushi dekhi nahi jaathi…..tensions create karna chahtha hai!"
Rathod snapped her "tum yeh sab itne yakeen ke saath kaise keh sakthi ho?"
Aisha: kyun ki maine criminal psychology padaa hai…..aur handwriting ke basis pe usska mind bhi thoda bohat padh sakthi hoom……
All were silent for a while and Arjun spoke up because she had just said what he had also inferred……"I guess she is right Rathod…[after a pause]..par kisi bhi haal mein, mujhe usse track down karna hai…..Reva ko lekhar main koyi bhi risk nahi le saktha!"
Arjun had also thought on the same lines as Aisha when he analyzed the handwriting and the expert he had consulted had also given the same as the preliminary opinion…..But whatever it was, he couldn't let a criminal stalk him or Reva…….He had to track him down…..
He spoke up grabbing the attention from the rest of the team who were discussing other possibilities "Chotu, mujhe unn saaare criminals ke list chahiye jisse humne pakadha hai aur jo ab jail se baahar hai!"
The turning to Shree "Shree, uss handwriting ko criminal records se match karo aur dekho koyi match kartha hai kya?"
Disclaimer: I don't know much about handwritings and criminal psychology….so its all based on my own theories….it could be wrong also!
A little later……Arjun and Rathod in Rathod's cabin….
Rathod: tumne dinner keliye sab ko invite kiya hai na??
Arjun looking up from the file "haan, kyun?"
Rathod: Aisha ko bhi??
Rathod: oh come on Rawte….aise attitude teek nahi hai….woh bhi team ka issa hai….jab tum sab ko invite kar rahe ho, usse bhi karlo….warna woh kya sochegi??
Arjun: [leaning back] Sameer, mujhe toh yeh lagtha hai ke agar maine usse invite kiya toh hi kuch galath sochegi!! She always takes my words in the wrong sense, you know that!
Rathod chuckles "itna bhi buri nahi hai Rawte…..invite karlo usse!"
Arjun raises his eyebrows and looks enquringly at his friend and boss while Sameer adds "WHAT? Humaara team morale ka sawaal hai Rawte!"
BeforeArjun could reply, he gets a call from Reva "hello…"
Sameer understands that its from her and focuses on something else
"haan teek hai…par apna dhyaan rakhna…..aur zyaadha dher nahi…..jaldi ghar…[she snaps him and says something for which he chuckles and Sameer turns to Arjun and is glad seeing his friend smile and talk so casually] ok ok…..aur haan, maine sabko invite kiya hai….so dinner program is on….shopping ke aadh mein usse matth bhoolna…..[he smiles again]…..Reva, ghar paunchthe hi mujhe call karna…bye.[cuts the call bidding bye to her]
He smiles again and places the phone on the table and looks up sensing his friend's eyes on him….
Arjun: kya?? Woh shopping jaane waali hai…isiliye…..[explains as if Rathod asked a question]
Rathod speaks up "maine kuch nahi poocha tha…tum khud explanation kyun deh rahe ho Rawte??…tumaari biwi hai…usse baat karne keliye main thodi na manaa karne waala hoom….jab chaaho jo chaaho baat karlo!"
But suddenly, Rathod remembers something and speaks up in a serious tone "par usse akele sho…."
Arjun snaps him "Jyothi hai usske saath….waise bhi, main usse daraana nahi chahtha…I cant control her movements without telling her the truth…..aur main usse yeh sab nahi keh saktha!"
[Arjun thinks to himself that she already has a lot of fears to overcome and he cant add another one]
Arjun wasn't in right spirits as he drove back home…..The stalker and the notes were clouding his mind…..but at the same time he also had the determination and strength that he wouldn't let his life go out of his hand….not this time! Never!
It was about 6 when he reached back home…..Reva had already called him an hour back informing that she was back home…..That also helped ease his mind a bit….
The moment she opened the door and he saw her, all his other tensions flew away…….
It was quite a sight…..She was all messed up and worn out and he could make out that she had been toiling her way in the kitchen….
She greeted him with a pleasant smile and she looked beautiful even in that messed up form….As he stepped in, his fingers, by an impulse strolled to her dough smeared face and he rubbed it lightly off her face…
"dekha, isiliye kahaa tha ke hum order karlenge…..ab dekho kya haal banaaya hai!!
She rolled her eyes while following his fingers but she didn't pull back herself this time…she just smiled at his remark…"lekin mujhe itni khushi nahi hoti na??"
Arjun breathed in the aroma as he entered the kitchen "khushboo toh bohat accha hai….i hope taste bhi accha hoga!"
Reva rolls her eyes and replies "you can taste and check for yourself…..sab ready hai….bas fruit salad ke liye fruits khaatna hai! I bought icecream for the dessert"
Arjun smiles "main fresh hokhe aatha hoom.."
Reva prepares his tea and goes to the room by the time he freshens up…..."yeh lijiye aapki chaai…aur ab sab kuch chakh kar bathaayiye kaise banaa hai???"
Arjun: [smiling at her commanding tone] taste karne ki zaroorat hi nahi hai….i know its all tasty…..par ab tum jaao fresh hokhe acche se ready ho jaavo…..fruits main khaat loonga…..
When Reva tries to protest, he pushes her into the washroom…."main kuch nahi sunne waala! jaise maine kahaa waise karo"
Arjun walks out of the room shutting the door….while Reva shaked her head and smiles to herself….
A few minutes later…..Reva is all ready in a cream and orange color salwar and comes to the kitchen……"kaisi lag rahi hoom??"
[Reva had gone shopping and bought some new dresses for herself based on her assumptions on Arjun's likes and dislikes…..She wanted give him a surprise…..So she hadn't told him anything about this…..She had just said that she is going to shop for home!!]
Arjun is awestruck and keeps looking at her….She looked lovely in that……She had also put on Roshni's chain……He feels so happy as she had taken his opinion and dressed up for him!
Their eyes lock for a long romantic moment……He couldn't help thinking about hugging her at that moment…
All of a sudden, Arjun screams in pain…he had cut his finger by mistake….She runs to him and grabs his finger to have a look….Blood was oozing from the cut and she started scolding him….."yeh kya kiya aapne??? I told you I will do it….meri baat maane toh na?? ab dekhiye…."
She made him sit on the chair and rushed to take the first aid kit...she knelt down beside him and started cleaning it……He could see her concern and also understood though his finger got hurt, she felt the pain….A lone tear was welling up in her corner of her eyes…..
"Reva, tum ek doctor ho aur itni simple chaut dekh kar darr gayi!" He grinned seeing her panic like that!
Reva replied as she put the anticeptic "doctor hoom, isske saat aapki wife bhi hoom….waise bhi, doctor ho ya nurse, apnon ke dukh se humein bhi dukh hota hai….patthar thodi na hai???" She spoke up with a little anger due to his carelessness!
Arjun: mere liye itna parwaa karthi ho??
Reva: of course karthi hoom!….yeh bhi koyi poochne waali baat hai….
Arjun: [deciding to get the cat out] itna pyar karthi ho mujhse??
Reva: [the tear rolled down her eyes but she was fully focusing on his cut, though his question hit her heart directly] aapko shaq hai??
Arjun: [naughtily, wiping away the tear from her cheeks] phir kehthi kyu nahi??
Reva: kya harr baat kehna zaroori hota hai?
Arjun: nahi…par kuch baatein hazaar baar sunnkar bhi aur sunne ko mann kartha hai…[grinning]...aur yahaan tumne ek baar bhi nahi kahaa….
Reva: [understanding his intentions now, a slight smile cropping up] kya nahi kahaa??
Arjun: wahi jo maine tumse already kahaa par tumne ab tak nahi kahaa….
Reva not giving up….she puts the band aid on his finger, gets up from there and walks away silently into her room…..
Arjun didn't want to give up this time either….."aaj toh tumhe kehna hi hoga Reva!" he smiles and follows her….
[To be continued]
ok...so my devil is out...actually, next part thoda aur think karni hai...so stopped here!
how is it? pls reply with long comments...longer..quicker..baat samjhe na? lol!
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