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"Relationship to new level...MARRIAGE..." #2 (Page 97)

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ab toh sunday hogaya...pls update...

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Whr r u
Update na
It's too much day
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shakti_patel msg 4 all readers

becoz i have exams i cannot update nd my internet is also nt working...

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Sorry guys. i am really very sorry. first of all my
 internet was not working and when it got fixed
 my lappy broke down then exam came upon. 
for updating this chapter i have came to my 
dad's office, i am so sorry please forgive me... 


R-Kriya, tumhe yaad hai humne kuch kaam
    adhura choda tha, hume use pura bhi
    karna hai.
Sw-Kya kaam adhura tha rey?
K-K... K... Kuch nahi swayam. T... T... Tum jao
    na sharon ke paas. hum bhi aa hi rahe
Sw-OK, I am going , you both also come.
K-Ha ha aa rahe hai tum jao...

Swayam goes from there to his room and rey was
bak to his job
R-Haa toh kriya, aab toh hamara kaam pura kare?
K-Nahi rey abhi nahi pehle chalo sharon ke
R-Plzz plzz plzz kriyaaa...
K-Nahi rey chalo

      And she started moving. rey's level of anger
was increasing .He pulled kriya and pinned her 
to the wall nearby and kissed her wildly, his 
anger was visible very clearly. First kriya was 
shocked because of his anger but later she also 
kissed him back and when she kissed him back,
 rey also slowed down and made the kiss 
passionate and very soon a very romantic 
atmosphere was created but then comes our 
vicky to disturb our love birds...

V-Yaar rey sirf kiss karne se tum bhi swayam ki
    tarah papa nahi banoge..
R-Kriya, tum jao hum aate hai

     Kriya went to sharon's room looking down 
and blushing... Now only rey and vicky was there
at that place.

R-Haa toh vicky kya keh raha tha tu?
V-Ha toh mei yeh keh raha tha ki "you need to
    prove like swayam." Mujhe lag raha tha ki
    pehle yeh khaber tum doge..
R-Dude uski shadi ko 1 saal hogaya hai aur meri
   shadi ko eek week bhi8 nahi hua. Dude thats
    huge difference
V-That means ki tumne shadi ke baad hi apni
    limits cross ki thi?
R-Offcourse, dude what else?
V-Waah mere sher, I am proud of you

They all went inside to meet sharon and talked 
and it was decided that they are going to have party at swayam's house and then all girls went to their houses(sasurals).

At rey's house
K-Rey mei kya pehnu party mei?
R-Darls abhi toh 6 gante baki hai party mei toh..
K-Toh kya? aapke dimag mei kya chal raha hai?
R-Mei toh shopping ki baat kar raha that.. tumhe
    kya laga?
K-K..K...K...Kuch nahi.
R-Accha (smiling wide) toh chale?
K-Always ready for shopping wid you
R-Always ready for shopping or ready for shopping 
   wid me?
K-Always ready for shopping with you or widout
R-Is it so?
K-Yes it is so...
    saying this rey hugged kriya and now was not
leaving her then from nowhere rey's servant came
to call him
Ser-Rey baba aapko memsaaab bla rahi hai..
R-Aya ramu kaka
R(thinking)-hamesha galat time pe aate hai 
      disturb karne... huh..
      Then they went to meet ray's mom and told 
her that they are going for shopping and also 
told her the good news given by sharon. Rey's 
mom was also very happy on hearing this news.

Westside mall (Mumbai)
    They entered the mall and went to the shops 
having sarees and rey selected a black saree which 
had backless blouse and a very sexy golden 
border. Then they went to western store and there 
kriya was looking for something to wear in party.
 she went for looking narrow jeans and suddenly
 rey saw something and he smirked and went to 
the other side of where kriya was standing.

K-Haa rey(without seeing towards him..)
R-Idhar dekho tumhe yeh try karna chahiye..

       kriya saw towards him and what she saw 
made her mouth open wide. there in front of her
 rey was standind holding a mini-skirt and an 
off-shoulder top in his hand. kriya looked 
around to know if anyone was looking at them. 
but fortunately no one was looking at them. 
kriya playfully hit rey's hand but rey was no 
less, he would surely make kriya wear it. He 
pulled her in trial room and told her to change.

R-Change to this right now..
K-No i am not changing
R-Yes you are
R-Ok then i am changing.
K-Are you wearing it.(laughing)
R-No sweet-heart i am changing your cloths..
K-WHAT? (screamed)

      Rey with one hand closed her mouth and 
pinned her to the trial room's door. Kriya was 
wearing a shirt and capri. Rey started opening 
buttons of kriya's shirt. He reached midway and 
kriya stopped him.

K-Rey ruko..
R-Nahi (huskly)
K-Nahi mei change karti hu na.
R-As you wish..

        And he moved backwards but kriya didnot
 moved a inch.
R-What? why are you not changing?
K-First you  move out of changing room.
R-No i am not going anywhere... you change..
K-Ok them turn the other side.

Kriya gets a plan and starts working according to
 her plan.

Next update after pg-120 and after 12 april as 
my exams starts on 1 april and it ends on 11 
april so i will update after 12. till then complete
 my page demand and please tolarate me... sorry for that.. 

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