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"Relationship to new level...MARRIAGE..." #2 (Page 8)

Roxxy47 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 2:45am | IP Logged
Congrats for the new thread Big smile.


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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 5:25am | IP Logged
Hey guys...
Thank for your wishes
Next update today onlyBig smileBig smileWink

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 5:31am | IP Logged
__EPISODE 19__

R-Aab blush karna bandh bhi karo baatcutter.
K-Rey aap ko kase pata ki mein blush kar rahi hu??
R-Mein tumhe tumse bhi zyada janta hu.

Kriya was happy on listening this

Continiuing the call.
R-Accha toh yeh batao tum phone kyu pick kar rahi
K-Voh mene batayana mei sharon ke saath thi
R-Toh tumne mujhe miss kiya?
K-Nahi bilkul nahi.
R-Accha toh mujhe tumse baat hi nahi karni
K-Arrey mei toh mazak kar rahi thi.
R-Nahi mujhe baat hi nahi karni.
K-Sorry baba meine tumhe bahut bahut miss kiya.
R-Toh kaal pick karne aajau??
K-Nahi , mein aur saari ladkiya picnic ja rahe hai.
K-Kyu batau?
R-Yuhi puch raha tha.
K-Voh hum pas vale park mein ja rahe hai aur fir
R-Ok toh tumhe...

(Suddenly in kriya's room her mother entered and 
on other side in rey's room his mother entered)

R Mom-Beta kis se baat kar rahe the?
R-Maa voh mein ... voh voh
R Mom-Kya voh voh kar rahe ho?
R-Voh mein...
R Mom-Sethe sethe bolo na kriya se baat kar rahe 

(Same happened with kriya and both the mothers 
were laughing on seeing situation of their childs)

Both mom-Accha accha baba baat karlo eek dusre 
Kriyaansh-Thank you  mom.

(Both mothers left the rooms)

K-Accha toh phone rakhu?
R-lekin kyu?
K-Toh kya baat karni hai aapko?
R-Mujhe nahi tumhe mujhe kush kehna hai?
K-Mujhe toh kuch nahi kehna.
R-Bhul gayi meri baatcutter?
K-Lekin kya rey?
R-Voh mujhe voh teen sabd aur meri goodnight kiss
     deni hai.
K-Voh voh mei
R-Koi bahana nahi chalne vala hai.
K-Accha thek hai bolti hu.
R-Jaldi , i can't wait anymore.
K-Ok ,I
R-You, I Love You my sweet baatcutter
K-Love you too.
R-Ok ,aab meri good night kiss.
R-Kya nahi baatcutter meri kiss.
K-Ok muuaaah.
R-Thank you , my swwet lovely wife.
(Kriya blushes to the core)
K-Ok aab good night rey sweet dreams
R-Byee baatcutter good night to you too.
    and dont forget to hav dreams about me and you.


In morning sun rays were falling on  face of our 
prince rey and princess kriya. Rey woke up and
went for walk and kriya cobering her face sleept
again. After returning from the walk rey called
her princess.
     Kriya gets annoyed on hearing the cell ringing
and see the caller id .Small smile creept on her 
face seeing caller id. It was written "chabilal". She
picked up the call.

R-Good morning baatcutter.
K-Good morning rey
R-Toh ready for trip??
K-Mei toh ready hu lekin aap ne chai pe? aap ne 
    breakfast kiya? aap ko aapki sab cheez mil gayi 
    na? aap ko kuch chaiye toh nahi na? aap ko 
    neend to acchi ayi na? aap kuch bol kyu nahi 
     rahe ho? 
R-Kriya tum mujhe bolne dogi toh mei bolunga na?
K-Oh sorry.
R-Asa lagta hai ki mei KBC ke hot seat pe baitha hu.
    Itne sare sawal puchti ho voh bhi eek saath.
K-Kaha na sorry.
R-Ok bye jaake tayar ho jao.
K-Ok bye.

Kriya gets ready, had her breakfast and started
waiting for sharon and all other girls. after some
time they all came and all went to picnic. they
had heired a mini bus having seat for 8 peoples.

The bus took them first to water park . They entered
the park at 10 am and had lots and lots of fun.
They had their luch at resturent in water park 
itself only. Again they started having fun. They
went to water disco also and had lots of fun . They
danced and danced till it was 5 pm . Then they
went to near by park. They had their snackes their
and played random games and left their house. And
reached to kriya's house till it was 9 pm.

As all girl's cell phone was at kriya's house after 
coming to their houses they all checked their cells 
that if there was any call or msg from their in-laws
or husbands. All the girls had 1 msg from their
hubbies saying to reach at the address given in msg.

After comparing their msgs to eachother all girls
come to know that they have to reach at same place 
only. They reached there and was surprised on seeing
what their eyes were seeing . They were not ready 
to beleive it.

Not giving any.
sorry for that
Keep thinking what all the girls saw that they were
not ready to beleive what their eyes saw.

This time demand page 20 SmileSmile

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glmorous_diva IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 5:37am | IP Logged
am firstDancing
kriyansh phone convo ws superb...
kriya ke KBC queLOL
eagerly waiting 4 nxt update

Edited by angel_luvkreya - 12 January 2013 at 5:36am
dancersqueen IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 6:53am | IP Logged
awesome...loved kr phone convo...thanks 4the pm...
d3_rox Goldie

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Posts: 1498

Posted: 12 January 2013 at 7:24am | IP Logged
Phone concersation was amazing..
N Rey KBC ke hot seat par baitha hai...
Arrey itna suspence kyun rakh rahe ho...
Plzzz update soon...thanx 4 the PM!!:):)

Pinkpearly IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 7:31am | IP Logged
lovely update
Kriyaansh convo was amazing
Thanx for d pm
Pinkpearly IF-Dazzler

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Posts: 3282

Posted: 12 January 2013 at 7:44am | IP Logged

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