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Character Sketch - 

All the characters are the same as in the serial expect for Purvi. In my this FF i have made Purvi the biological daughter of ArMan but Manav doesnt know about Purvi and Purvi doesnt know about Manav being her father. Before 18 years when Manav left for Canada, he was not knowing that Archana was pregnant with another child. The another child is none other than Purvi herself. After 5 years, Archana comes to know that Purvi is suffering from Bone Marrow Cancer and the only way to save her is the replacement of bone marrow which matches her. Archana's bone marrow isnt matching. My story starts from the day when Archana and Manav comes face to face first time after 18 long years...

Promo - What will happen to Purvi? Who will be her matching donor? Who will save her? Will Manav ever come to know about his another daughter?


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Chapter 1  -  pg 1

Chapter 2  - pg 2

Chapter 3  - pg 3

Chapter 4  - pg 3

Chapter 5  - pg 4

Chapter 6  - pg 4

Chapter 7  - pg 5

Chapter 8  - pg 6

Chapter 9  - pg 6

Chapter 10 - pg 8

Chapter 11 - pg 8

Chapter 12 - pg 10

Chapter 13 - pg 11

Chapter 14 - pg 13

Chapter 15 - pg 14

Chapter 16 - pg 15

Chapter 17 - pg 17

Chapter 18 - pg 18

Chapter 19 - pg 19

Chapter 20 - pg 21

Chapter 21 - pg 22

Chapter 22 - pg 23

Chapter 23 - pg 24

Chapter 24 - pg 26

Chapter 25 - pg 28

Chapter 26 - pg 29

Chapter 27 - pg 29

Chapter 28 - pg 31

Chapter 29 - pg 31

Chapter 30 - pg 32

Chapter 31 - pg 34

Chapter 32 - pg 36

Chapter 33 - pg 37

Chapter 34 - pg 39

Chapter 35 - pg 40

Chapter 36 - pg 41

Chapter 37 - pg 43

Chapter 38 - pg 45

Chapter 39 - pg 46

Chapter 40 - pg 47

Chapter 41 - pg 48

Chapter 42 - pg 51

Chapter 43 - pg 53

Chapter 44 - pg 55

Chapter 45 - pg 58

Chapter 46 - pg 59

Chapter 47 - pg 60

Chapter 48 - pg 61

Chapter 49 - pg 63

Chapter 50 - pg 65

Chapter 51 - pg 67

Chapter 52 - pg 69

Chapter 53 - pg 71

Chapter 54 - pg 72

Chapter 55 - pg 74

Chapter 56 - pg 75

Chapter 57 - pg 77

Chapter 58 - pg 79

Chapter 59 - pg 81

Chapter 60 - pg 84

Chapter 61 - pg 86

Chapter 62 - pg 90

Chapter 63 - pg 94

Chapter 64 - pg 98

Chapter 65 - pg 101

Chapter 66 - pg 106

Chapter 67 - pg 109

Chapter 68 - pg 112

Chapter 69 - pg 115 

Chapter 70 - pg 117

Chapter 71 - pg 120

Chapter 72 - pg 123

Chapter 73 - pg 125

Chapter 74 - pg 128

Chapter 75 - pg 133

Chapter 76 - pg 137

Chapter 77 - pg 141

Chapter 78 - pg 145












 



































Edited by pkarvi - 06 June 2013 at 6:58am

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Guys if you dint liked just say it openly i wont feel bad...This will only help to know should i continue with my FF or not...Smile

Edited by pkdoshi - 09 January 2013 at 4:36am

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Seems very interesting FF.plz  do continue


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Chapter 1-

Archana and Manav in office cabin are standing in front of each other after 18 long years. They are shocked seeing each other as well as happy too. The both have lots of thoughts coming in their minds. Also there are lots of question in their eyes too but are still not able to talk to each other. They want to run to each other and have a hug but can't as they are still upset with each other.

Manav (thinking) -  Why Archana? Why? Why din't you came with me. Why?

Archana (thinking) - U never called me. Just sent Savita Aai with the custody papers of our children.

Manav(thinking)- U should have atleast came to the airport. I would have never left you.

Archana(thinking)- I called you many time Manav on that night but you didn't received my calls or waited for me.

 

Both had many question in their eyes to ask to each other but weren't able to talk.

Suddenly a staff comes I their cabin and ArMan comes out of their world of thoughts. Archana wipes her tears which were rolling when see suddenly saw Manav after 18 long years.

 

Staff to Manav - Sir, what about Mrs. Archana Deshmukh? Is she confirmed for the job or not?

Manav - Yes she is confirmed and she can continue to work here only.

Archana - Thank you Sir.

 

Saying this she left his cabin with an angry and shocked expression on her face.

 

Outside, Purvi has been waiting for her mother to know what has happened inside. She thinks that Manav Sir is a very kind person and employer and is not like her other Khadoos Boss Mr. Arjun Kirloskar. Manav Sir will definitely give Aai her job back.

 

At that very point Archana comes out of the cabin. Purvi sees her and goes near her to ask what happened inside. Archana starts walking from there in a huff. Purvi also walks behind her questioning her what happened. She continuously asks her "Aai tell na what happened inside"'This is heard by Manav. Manav hears Purvi telling Archana her Aai and is shocked. Lots of questions running in his mind and sees both Purvi and Archana going away from the corridor of his office.

 



Precap - Purvi is sleeping when Archana comes near her and caresses her hair and mutters "Sorry beta I am really sorry that I am keeping you away from Manav your father. But I am helpless. Sorry beta please forgive me"

 












Edited by pkdoshi - 17 January 2013 at 11:39pm

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I like the character sketch plz continue

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don't bash me up if its lame just tried my writing skill a little bit...Smile 

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Well ...GREAT START Thumbs Up I find ur ff interesting and keep it up u r doing superb.Pls add me to ur PM list.

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good start of ur FF.waiting 4 next chapter.
 try to update soon.

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