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My first two-shot Turned SS (Last Part updt pg 9) (Page 2)

chut007 Senior Member

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Posted: 09 January 2013 at 2:09am | IP Logged
continue please dear .

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blueflames IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 2:00pm | IP Logged
First of all thanks to all the lovely people who encouraged me to continue. 

Part Two..

Asad entered her room, held her shocked gaze and closed the door without breaking eye contact. He was moving forward very slowly with passion in his movements. As he moved forward zoya backed her steps until she hit the wall, zoya was stuck between wall and a rogue.

Holding her gaze Asad moved forward, unbuttoning his shirt with ease and got rid of it as he reached zoya. Zoya was panting for breath as she couldn't breaking eye contact but still totally aware of the Six Pack body of Jahpanah.  Zoya put up her hand with courage and just mouth Asad with such a voice that Asad captured her lips in a breath taking kiss, after endless moments he trailed his lips across her cheek to her ear, and whispered her name in a husky voice. He said Zoya Zoya Zoyaaa !!!!


It was 9 am and Zoya was still nowhere to be seen had made Asad go check on her, he knocked her door twice but got no response he walked in the room only to see His miss Hoity Toity sleeping ( wait did he say HIS) well !! Asad controlled his mind and thoughts which were rather ragged as he hadn't slept a wink last night. Night had passed in understanding the difference between the hearty responses of attraction or the basic human instinct of lust. But he took it more as attraction, because he was worried she hadn't showed up at breakfast, so just to make sure she was ok, he came to her room. She was sleeping but was breathing erratically he noticed, and mouthed some inaudible name. Her dreaming of someone made him a tad bit jealous and angry and he decided to wake up her from her fantasy and face Her Dark Lord in reality: P

Zoya opened her eyes; Asad was hovering over her bed, shaking her to wake up.  Omg first she was dreaming about the forbidden Fruit and now that forbidden fruit was hanging over her bed, looking straight into her eyes, as if finding something, a bit possessive look, she thought .

 Zoya pushed him away and straightened to sit. Allah Miyan ! What's wrong with you Mr Khan " app yahan kia kar rahe hain?? Mujhe utha rahe the ya darra rahe the, ya phirr'" her voice trailed off as she was about to say 'good morning kiss kar rahe the', but she held her tongue in time, and left the sentence hanging and began to get up to avoid his questioning gaze, and made way towards the bathroom quickly. She splashed cold water on her face to get the Mr Mcdreamy Khan out of her mind, first he saw me in kitchen, then invaded my dreams and now got into my bedroom too. Removing Asad from her thoughts was going to be a hell of a task. She found the only solution was to avoid him at all cost.


 She walked to the dining room, holding her ipad and bag, and saw her breakfast set neatly, and Asad having his coffee in his usual place. Asad noticed she didn't say good morning not even a hi, she looked everywhere except at him, and sat down quietly. She started eating and spilled some coffee over, but without a word she just cleaned it up and finished up breakfast. She called phuphi and informed her about going out for sightseeing and left without a word to Asad.  Asad was shell shocked that HIS chatter box zoya didn't utter a word to him and didn't even look at him and had left. He was sure zoya was up to something, but still he was curious, as nobody avoided him and most importantly played games with him.


well i intended to make it a Two Shot, but i guess its gona be a bit longer. so people please bear up with me.
and do let me know how the story is progressing Day Dreaming

Edited by blueflames - 15 January 2013 at 8:29am

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kandygrover Goldie

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 3:00pm | IP Logged
Plz continue really like it

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ParneetS IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
The ss us interesting :) 
It's so realistic to imagine ASYA doing all this.. Lol

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sophie420 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 3:20pm | IP Logged
Really Nice
Continue Please, and can you please pm me when you do.
~Sophie :) 

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Shabana0786 Goldie

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 3:33pm | IP Logged
Very Nice & Interesting!!..
I enjoyed the first two parts & i'm glad its going to be longer then a two-shot coz i'm definitely looking foward to reading further..
Please PM me wen u update again..Thanks!..

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coralblue Groupbie

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 4:06pm | IP Logged
Read the first two parts, sounds good.

Looking forward to what Asad's next move is going to be.

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TheSexyDevil IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
I liked both parts
and it was awesome...she was dreaming of him
and he jealous...ohhh and than she avoid him too
this is going to be fun
please continue soon and pm me too

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