My first two-shot Turned SS (Last Part updt pg 9) - Page 4

rosamale

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome dear👏👏👏 totally loved it... both are in soo much pain...

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743465

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Posted: 11 years ago

Pasta...
I love pasta...
The doctor called zoya Asads wife, I love it when that happens <3
And now, the great Asad Ahmed Khan is going to confess...
In the real world, it's gonna take a long, long time :P
Thanks for the pm love, and continue soon <3

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Sophia

@sophie420

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks for the pm!

Nice update!

~Sophie :)

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Shabana0786

@Shabana0786

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely Update!!..

It was Quite Adorable Coz First Zoya Took Care In Aiding Asad's Hand & Then He was Taking Care Of her..The Part Where Asad Liked the Doctor Refering To Zoya As His Wife & He Liked it,The Only Thing I Could Say Was "Aww"...Lol

Thanks For The PM...

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blueflames

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Eternal1234
wow awesome i loved it...
As for the confession part hmmm i feel maybe zoya should retaliate everything that he says and they get into a huge tiff and things go the emotional way and finally he just grips her hard with tears in his eyes and their eyes locked in each other and in a deep emotional way he should say "Because I love u..I really do more than anything else in this world"

I know it sounds very cliche but just a suggestion and ofcourse u must be having something really nice instored so write soon am waiting

thanks for the lovely suggestion. n its great to see that you loved it, its very encouraging.
thank you for reading.

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blueflames

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR
Awesome ff.I read it one go
You are amazing.
plz add me to your pm list dear.

you all who appreciate n comment are amazing!! readers make writers!!
will surely pm you the next part.
thank you for reading.

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Rachel

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Posted: 11 years ago

LOVED LOVED LOVED it man ! I was literally imagining Asad thinking all this about Zoya with all that passion and loveee ! :D

Everything about your SS is superb. Keep them coming and yeah as for the suggestions, dont make Zoya give into him very easily. He has to work his ass off to make her accept his love ;)

A little bit of angst always adds on to the spice of the story !! Haha :D

When are you updating btw ?

<3

Love

Rachyy

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momai14

@momai14

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

loved it dear...just awesome..

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Eternal1234

@Eternal1234

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: blueflames

thanks for the lovely suggestion. n its great to see that you loved it, its very encouraging.
thank you for reading.

Aww your welcome really happy that u liked...and ya update soon waiting for the next part

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blueflames

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AussieChick
Pasta...
I love pasta...
The doctor called zoya Asads wife, I love it when that happens <3
And now, the great Asad Ahmed Khan is going to confess...
In the real world, it's gonna take a long, long time :P
Thanks for the pm love, and continue soon <3

i love pasta too. :D

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