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ARHI~Vines With Thorns Th#Last~ EPILOGUE pg92 (Page 124)

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 9:59am | IP Logged
awesome ending..great epilouge (quite hot tooBlushingBlushing lol)
oved it.and dont worry we are waiting or new ff..and midnight theft also..do update soon Smile

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Posted: 09 February 2013 at 10:53am | IP Logged
Superb ... absolutely heart warming...

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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 4:43am | IP Logged

I'll start with a gift because I gave a late reply:

Sorry! Finally I'm writing my final good bye on this thread. Of a really special and unique story.

The outfits where perfect, the location was perfect, the atmosphere was perfect. You described everything so well I loved it.

The cottage papers we all knew and somewhere we were all expecting it.

The pictures taken wow the way Arnav let Raj go first just showed how important Arnav considers him in there life. He even supported Arnav over Khushi that was bound to happen sooner or later. Just the idea of taking pictures was incredible really cute scene. All of raja's scenes have truly been flawless in this story he has always been there at the right points you did a really good job. His last scene in this chapter was no different. It gave a connection between Arnav and Khushi the bond he shared with her all these years and the new bond he has created with him the one of care.

Love has grown and blossomed between not only Arnav and Khushi but also Arnav and Khushi.

The games they were all so cute and different. How could I not love your work? Big smile

The way he put the ring on her finger we don't normally see that. But my favourite part was the tug of war when I was reading it I knew it was going to be between those two. I was jumping in my seat knowing it was going to be them. I could stop laughing at the fact that they were both so serious I could just imagine it. Felt so real in my head. The whole wedding felt real in my head: Anjali's antics, the guys all helpless, the laughter the tears everything.  Thank you for writing an amazing piece like that.

Then ending WOW was truly speechless with tears in my eye. Not a regular end with kids but one that showed there life complete as well as the other couples. I don't think any other ending could touch me as much as that did because that ending defined to me 'grow old together'.

He made the garden so beautiful. There special garden where there are thorns and vines but still beautiful as they create it the way they want. His last word he said to her that he loved her the way she is could really bring tears to your eyes. It really did do the job your story was meant to makes you see life in a brighter light. Weird but I think I'm getting emotional saying good bye to this story. It was first FF I ever commented on as it was the one that touched my heart more than any other I think. Before I do get emotional I'm going to tell you my favourite line in your epilogue which stood out to me. The line I personal think made the story complete, it defined not only VWT but also IPKKND:

'rightfully in his arms'

I think just those words say why I love them.

 

Thank you for writing a story that touched my heart, made me feel 100 emotions. And one I get teary saying goodbye to. Good luck for you other stories. Patiently waiting for the next part of hierarchy.

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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 5:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by babyhumz

I'll start with a gift because I gave a late reply:

Sorry! Finally I'm writing my final good bye on this thread. Of a really special and unique story. 

The outfits where perfect, the location was perfect, the atmosphere was perfect. You described everything so well I loved it. 

Thanks so much for loving it.Big smile

The cottage papers we all knew and somewhere we were all expecting it.

The pictures taken wow the way Arnav let Raj go first just showed how important Arnav considers him in there life. He even supported Arnav over Khushi that was bound to happen sooner or later. Just the idea of taking pictures was incredible really cute scene. All of raja's scenes have truly been flawless in this story he has always been there at the right points you did a really good job. His last scene in this chapter was no different. It gave a connection between Arnav and Khushi the bond he shared with her all these years and the new bond he has created with him the one of care.

yep Raja is very important in Khushi's life and also the story of arhi. Glad you liked the importance i gave himEmbarrassed he really deserves it.

Love has grown and blossomed between not only Arnav and Khushi but also Arnav and Khushi.

The games they were all so cute and different. How could I not love your work? Big smile

Aww how sweet!Embarrassed

The way he put the ring on her finger we don't normally see that. But my favourite part was the tug of war when I was reading it I knew it was going to be between those two. I was jumping in my seat knowing it was going to be them. I could stop laughing at the fact that they were both so serious I could just imagine it. Felt so real in my head. The whole wedding felt real in my head: Anjali's antics, the guys all helpless, the laughter the tears everything.  Thank you for writing an amazing piece like that.

for the milk game I wanted it to be different and romantic, instead of the typical game of a wedding.LOL Tug of war between Raja and Arnav for their lady love is inevitable,lol. Really glad you liked it!! Thank you!!! 

Then ending WOW was truly speechless with tears in my eye. Not a regular end with kids but one that showed there life complete as well as the other couples. I don't think any other ending could touch me as much as that did because that ending defined to me 'grow old together'.

Again I wanted it to be a different ending rather than a typical oneLOL, kind of like a movie thing,lol. Thanks for feeling the importance of their eternal relationship at the end.Embarrassed

He made the garden so beautiful. There special garden where there are thorns and vines but still beautiful as they create it the way they want. His last word he said to her that he loved her the way she is could really bring tears to your eyes. It really did do the job your story was meant to makes you see life in a brighter light. Weird but I think I'm getting emotional saying good bye to this story. It was first FF I ever commented on as it was the one that touched my heart more than any other I think. Before I do get emotional I'm going to tell you my favourite line in your epilogue which stood out to me. The line I personal think made the story complete, it defined not only VWT but also IPKKND:

'rightfully in his arms'

I think just those words say why I love them.

Aww very true. Really happy it made you feel that way *hugs*

 

Thank you for writing a story that touched my heart, made me feel 100 emotions. And one I get teary saying goodbye to. Good luck for you other stories. Patiently waiting for the next part of hierarchy.

So glad that I'll be seeing you for my Hierarchy FF. I would have missed your heart felt comments badly.Hug

Eeep!Embarrassed


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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 2:05am | IP Logged

Amna Is Here Finaaly!

*pheww*

i know i know im late...soooper late as usual.. Dead

pat kya bataun.. college and work.. too much..

kher.. i should stap blabbering and say sth about the LAST CHAP + EPILOGUE Cry

its over!! Cry

i can not beleive yara!

abhi tw parhna shuru kiya the mene Unhappy

I can't believe it's over Ouch

 

it was an amazing journey reading your Arhi FF
Embarrassed
 
Amazing ending of a Wonderful story..

I loved how yew portrayed the character of Arnav, Khushi, Raja, Khushal, Devyani, Aman, Chinky, Sajan, Anjali,  Priya , Payal.. i hope im not forgetting anyone.. Am I..? Tongue

after ArHi the most lovely character was Raja Blushing

Originally posted by -Zara-

A special thank you to Nichuss, SankiMedhz, Chandana.s, Shona.Angel and Shimmer_ Vani for being there for this FF through to the end. Love them to bits.


aww...sissy dnt be thankful to us.. actually i should b the one thanking here for sharing an awsum story with us!

Loved reading each and every chap of your beautifull FF!

Smile

ok now finaaly...i'll say sth abt the last updates!
 
ahh..
 
updates were be-e-e-e-u-u-u-t-t-t-i-i-i-i-f-f-f-u-u-u-u-l-l-l
Love reading them Zara!
 
Mehendi.. I loved her dress...
it was boootiphull.. Heart
and yes finaaly amna & chinky kay beech main sab acha hogaya.. his babu ji want to meet her..awww..
 
weddding was Beutifull and games played after the wedding loved reading them..
ceremonies afterward were fun filled! Smile
Kushal.. aww... just adore him!
Khushal gave the cottage to Madhu! That's so sweet of him
 
and the game where raja was pulling that rope... omg!! ROFL
had a tug of war with Arnav LOL
and WON!! LOL
 
mjhe daal main kaala laga tha..
obvsly how can raja win all alone ionfrnt of Raizada!
anji bitya Embarrassed
"all's fair in love n war '' ofcourse.. pyaar aur jang me sab barabar hai jahan panah.. LOL
and the End... where Arnav tells Khushi how much he loves her... aww...it was beautifull..!!
Heart
 
i would have said nore abhi pa bell is about to ring and i can not bunk one more class Embarrassed
i'll leave Dead
 
 and we finally say taataa  bye bye to wines with thorns.. Ouch
i'll miss this FF..!!  Unhappy
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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 2:06am | IP Logged
bht short comment hai mera i know... par seriously Zara.. waqt ki shortage hai.. Unhappy
 
 
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Posted: 11 February 2013 at 7:05am | IP Logged
wow.. perfect ending to a a lovely ff.. :-)
m reading it again now :-D
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Posted: 13 February 2013 at 12:56am | IP Logged
Wow superb story.

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