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ARHI~Vines With Thorns Th#Last~ EPILOGUE pg92 (Page 121)

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fairy_stardust

WOW...just WOW! Here I was thinking the epilogue won't be much of a huge update but it was the sweetest and most unique after wedding functions. Raja was the hero of this update...I have never loved a dog as much I have grown fond of Raja. How he supported Arnav in the ring catching ceremony, won the tug of war with the help of 3 girls and slept on their bed, haha!!  <3  Raja is the bestLOL

I also did not expect the secret garden scene which must've looked so pretty all decorated, yaahh!  Day Dreaming Arshi were truly adorable throughout and I am so glab Madhu finally got ownership of the cottage. Again, I truly enjoyed reading this FF and I shall be following your new FF story. Choosing the best scene here would be hard as there were so many splendidly well written ones. The one that moved my heart was the day Arnav read Khushi's diary in the secret garden (if I remember correctly).  yep very correct. Thanks so much for liking.


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Originally posted by rulama

Zara that was too good!
Arnav understanding that Raja takes the front row while he waits patiently!
Its because of Raja he comes across Khushi. Or else she would have been ravished by savages long back!
Thats why Arnav is grateful to Raja and is ready to wait in the wings!
Really sweet of Arnav to understand her so well!
Liked the way all the loops tied in both the parts.(last and epilogue)
Lovd Dadaji's acceptance and how he deals with his grandson.
Gift deed to Madhu was also touching. Its his way of atoning and making sure Madhu always keeps an eye on his grandchildren! glad you liked it. Raja is the best of courseLOL

Following your hierarchy too dear!
Zara , whenever I am getting time I am reading your earlier works too.You know your writing really matured by leaps and bounds. I am glad that you have developed it so well! 
Hope you rise to new heights with every new work of yours! thanks so much. I'm glad I'll have a reader like you for Hierarchy. thank you.

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Originally posted by Enchantress

Hey Zara,

Even i had tears after reading the entire update. It was a mixture of emotions that i had, I was feeling so happy to see the entire family happily enjoying the marriage. Aww i could imagine Kushi and Raja taking different poses for the photograph and looking too sweet and cute. I love them. And, then Arnav and kushi... I love them too very much. One extraordinary effects that your fictions give is that i could really imagine everything.  so glad. I always aim to help readers see what I see.

The games , they were too enjoyable. Raja and Arnav's tug of war, Anjili,chinki and priya helping him *chuckles*. He does has a huge fan following.. of courseLOL
 
Hmm.. Finally they are one.. And, m too happy.
I m really going to miss this , really. It is one of my favorite stories. I m waiting for Hierarchy. to be updated. Thanks. Embarrassed


~Dee~

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 11:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Nichuss

zaara...a big ang tight teddy hug...for pointing

me in the epilogue start ... you really deserve it. 

i thank my sweetheart chandana for giving me this story link...

from the prologue itself i became addict of VWT...and especially 

addict to my love RAJA Heart everyones addictedLOL

i dont have words to express how much i loved this story...

the story from the start to ending was unique...

if asked to write abt VWT...i will make it pages f essay...LOL LOL

the diary writing...f kushi...in a sense...her raja would b reading it.. yep deep connection

raja protecting kushi as a hen protect her chick... very unique bond

the story proved...the voice not needed for loving...eyes n emotions talk the feelings..and loved ones can read thr mind... thanks for liking the story for this reason sis

the best part--this is difficult que... the scene i loved most are the arnie comg first time to secret garden...arshi confession...raja taking arnie to hostel wen kushi was away..kushal -muskan scenes...raja-kushi firs meeting in childhood

in short every part had lot f fav scenes...which r close to my heart... Yes I have noticed you have a whole listEmbarrassed

muskan was a dead character..but never felt she s no more... yep the soul of the story

her presence was always thr in the story one or othr way... exactly

miss u raja... Heart my love... Hug
miss u arshi...
a very gud bye ..to rm family...u always stay in my heart... *hugs*

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Heart  Heart

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this is for u ZAARA
 muah!

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Originally posted by jahnvi.luvs.ASR

an amzing epilogue...AnimatedSmileyWithDaisy.gif (264239)

how he showed his love when he slid the ring in her finger...
raja and khushi's photographs awesome...
and then that tug of war between raja n arnav...
the love u showed everything so beautifully written...
n by the end i had goosebumps and a lump in my throat... Aww really happy you liked the epilogueEmbarrassed
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m so glad i was a part of something so beautiful...
the writing that conveys much than just sentiments... thanks so much for enjoying and commenting

sometimes i felt its more than fiction...waiting for u to update and then reading the updates almost with baited breath...and now with heavy heart have to say good bye to it... yes. heartfelt goodbyegoodbye-18.gif (239280)

i love VWT and raja n obviously arnav-khushi and dada the secret garden but most of all the person who actually made everything so wonderful and amazing... aww thanks
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thanks a lot zara for giving us VWT :) very welcomeBig smile



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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chandana.s

Res

 
* Here starts my final speech *
 
First let me talk abt the epilogue...
 
Fabulous..Just a fun filled atmosphere..
* Totally Enjoyed reading Hug* Yay!
 
Finally Arnav-Khushi got married with the blessing of there family... yep!Smile
 
Aww...Arnav carried Khushi inside the room as it there tradition.. * Lolz they should wisefully choose there brides * Wink LOLOLOL
 
Aww,Rio was shocked to see Raja with the bride LOL ofcourse first its right to click pic with Khushi...
The way Raja barked at a confused Rio to take there Pic was so funny & after Raja was satcified with the photo session he let the new wedded couple to get there photo... Wink yes its a big ask from raja.LOL
 
* I'm Very happy to see kushal so kind & Jolly *
The ring game was lovely...Everyone took Khushi's side where as Raja took Arnav's..Arnav is such a smart ass,He slided the ring to Khushi's finger inside the milk only...
* How sweet & romantic.. Day Dreaming * Arnav is indeed a smart ass, lol. LOL
 
Lolz,The tug war was fun...Poor Arnie,he though they wil let him tug war with Khushi...
 * Omg Anjali,Priya & Payal were helping Raja to pull the rope * LOL yes they can't left Arnav beat raja just becuase he's a manLOL
 
Arnav was also glad that Raja was a dog,otherwise he dint get a chance with Khushi.. Tongue
Raja was peacefully sleeping beside Khushi... * He is such a cutie pie Embarrassed * of courseEmbarrassed
 
Wow,The suprise Arnav arranged to Khushi was Awesome...
 * Plz god i also want a secret Garden & a dog like Raja Tongue ,Rest talking abt Arnav,well im just 19 so when time come il find him  Wink LOL * LOL. aww sis you shall the right man for you.Wink
 
The  rest was very romantic Blushing ...Arnav words regarding her voice made my happy,He loves her as she is.. Embarrassed
Then they leave Happily ever after,It was just like a Fairy Tale...
very beautifully written Clap ,Can feel all the emotions & joy while reading.. yep warm ending
 
*****
 
* Cant believe its ended Broken Heart ...It was very close to my heart... Cry Cry *
But everything as to come to an end... Ouch But im happy i came across this one when u posted the first chapter...I'm thankful to have you as a friend sis. thanks so much.
 
Its a wonderful journey filled with so many emotions & drama..I gonna miss this very badly..The Story is very beautifully built around a Girl who can't speak but her cheerful,silly antics & bubbly nature can make anyone fall in love with her.. Heart yep the heart of the story.
 
* I cant tel whc sceen or chapter is my fav as i love each & every part of it... *
But the things that attracted me more towards it is the bonding b/e Raja-Khushi & her way of talking to him through a diary,The Mystery behind Kushal's rude behavier towards Khushi,The secret garden,he way Arnav-Khushi found there Love & There unconditional love towards eachothers,The way Arnav understands Khushi without words..Many more..  Day Dreaming aww thanks for liking my story for that. * very proud*
 
* I know,if i feel this bad for the ending then how u must be feelings as it ur story/imagination/plot * yeah.Cry
 
Thanks for such a wonderful FF,great job Clap ...Im very eagerly waiting for ur new FF Hierarchy for the story to unfold. hope you'll like it as it progresses.
 
* And how can i forget *
 
Love U Lots Hug Back at you sis.
 

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Originally posted by sarthshru

cannot beleive have to say bi to this ff...thanx zara for this beautiful journey...feel like cryingBroken Heart...its like i lost ipkknd once againCryCry...but the diffrence is this time  there story is complete and they are living blissfuly in their worldSmileSmile...thanx 4 giving this wonderful ff to us on a time when i was on the verge of losing all hopes after the end of ipkkndClap...will dearly miss this ff and cherish it throughout the life..Embarrassed. thanks so much. Vines with thorns is in it's own league side by side with my  Price of freedom ff.

now coming to the update..Embarrassed.
it was simply emotional and fabulous...how wonderfully u gave an end to this beautiful story is worth applauds dear.Clap..loved their moment and arniee baby was really a darling to accept khushi the way she was.Thumbs Up..seeing her differently from the rest of the world...thanx 4 showing me this side of arnav... welcomeEmbarrassed

probably mah longest  comment everWacko...!!!!
 wish u all the luck and prosperity in life and may u continue to entertain  us by writing more of such intriguing stories ( do pm me if u ever do soWink) make sure you have me buddied.
with tears ( of happiness)
goodbye vines with thorns 
- shruti

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 11:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Maddy1270

a heart-warming ending to a beautifully written story! have loved many scenes but my favourite ones have been those involving raja with khushi... arnav is second best! Awww thanks for saying so...*whispers* I think so tooLOL
 
lovely seeing the happiness permeating raizada mansion... arnav smirking at the thought of lifting khushi up in his arms to fulfil the raizada tradition was damn cute but not as much as raja taking precedence over arnav during the photo session and actually barking an order to teh photographer to take his and khushi's photo! mighty nice of arnav to give way in this and to acknowledge raja's importance in khushi's life... Arnav shook his head glad that Raja wasn't a human being to compete against for Khushi. He knew who would have definitely won in that case. I so agree with him! A fact Arnav has to live withLOL
 
khushal now being his real self was heart-warming to see... teasing an impatient arnav... the games were cute, with arnav sliding the ring on to khushi's finger while their hands were in the bowl, followed by that special tug-of-war between arnav and raja... glad that raja won with a little help from the girls! Yep of course Raja would winLOL
 
raja sleeping blissfully on the bed decorated for the newlyweds cracked me up... maybe arnav had an inkling this would happen which might be why he made special arrangements in their secret garden... You know Arnav too wellWink
 of course, it somehow felt very right for their wedding night to take place in this special place that held such vivid memories for them and also meant so much to arnav's parents... it was like muskaan's and abhi's blessings being with arnav and khushi as they became one! a beautifully emotional scene, especially when arnav speaks from the heart about how much khushi means to him, as she is, without having to vocalise her words as her eyes speak volumes to him! touched my heart! Awww really glad!Big smile
 
their love growing with the passage of time and encompassing their children is something these two beautiful souls truly deserve... liked the last lines about the portrait... raja is part of their lives and can never be separated from either one of them! thank you for taking us on this beautifully moving journey! thanks very much for commenting each time. Your comments had a very meaningful edge. Thank you. Hope you'll read my next FF hierarchy too. Embarrassed

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Originally posted by penny25

MY MY MY!!!!!!!! Just bcome real emotional wen received u're Pm sayin 'd last pm of vines wid thorns'...
Wat to say wen u're fairytale ends...no wrds to decrive wat u feel wen u're sweet lovestry meets such a beautiful end...it cudn'y have been bettr...it ended just perfectly wid d rite wrds...thanks so much for thinking so.Embarrassed

D last update aka epligoue focussin on dere marriage was so nyc...dere weddin., dere dresses, dere masti, dere love, dere feelings., dere bonds alll ended so gracefully...i have no regrets except one dat kash raja ko bhi apne liye rani mil jate...but all in all dere masti was eventful nd satisfyn..den dere sahugrat,...awww...under d blanket of stars...in dere lovely secret garden...wich bonded every1... LOL raja's rani is Khushi.LOL

My fav tale has come to an end...all teary-eyed but i'm glad u ended it here only...an end wich leaves us wanting for me is d bst end in mah opinion...lovd it...all d chracters held dere own nd yet dey were so diffrent...thanks alot.

Feeling bad dat we will ot look frwd to VWT update..though i joined in d middle but lemme tell u zara ji dat it connected wid it from d frst chptr...hats off to u introduce to go d unconventional way nd presentin d stry just so beautifully...in d end i wud say
...AND DEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks so much. I hope you read my next FF hierarchy as the first chapter is already up.

p.s just teary-eyed rite now...wanna rite so much but unable to...but a BIG HUG TO U FOR SHARING SUCH A BEAUTIGUL JOURNEY!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 11:49am | IP Logged
so we finally say bye to wines with thorns 
it was a throughly beautiful story especialy because the lead though not perfect had a way to perfect relationship with the other lead and thts wht matters the depth and intensity of ur feelings towards each other.
raja was so lovely.
i am sad tht it ended, very very sad.
if i had to described it in one word it wont be dramatic, trilling, exciting, it wld be beautiful and thanks for that, a beautiful ff.

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 11:55am | IP Logged

I thought Price of Freedom was best but this FF was wonderful one,also made a special place in my heart which will never erase...I loved how u portrayed the character Arnav, Khushi, Raja, Khushal, Devyani, Aman,Chinky,Sajan,Anjali,Payal, Priya & other's...The most lovely character was Raja,Arnav  and Khushi & the bond which Raja-Khushi,Arnav-Khushi,Arshi-Raja shares was awesome, one in million...I read this FF on ur blog till half and commented on it abt my experience  and after that I read today the remaining part and expressing my view... Thanks for sharing this beautiful FF...

Ur writing amaze me...U r one among my fav writer in this FF...I know I'm not regular reader of ur FF and I myself don't know if I'll be able to read the FF's regularly...So when ever I read any FF in this forum I drop my comment abt my feelings other wise it will not be fair on my part to enjoy u ppl hard work and not to appreciate it...Mostly I never  asks anyone to add me to their Pm list as I know sometimes I'll not be able to read their part which also scares me what  they will think abt me(this info is not needed but as a reader I wanted to inform u)...I got to know u  started ur new FF Hierarchy,All the best...Hope I'll be able to read that one regularly and will be able to comment on ur FF without fail...




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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 1:42pm | IP Logged
Wonderful Epilogue!

It was great to read through this particular journey of Arnav and Khushi.  It was simply beautiful!


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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
Beautiful ending

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