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ARHI~Vines With Thorns Th#Last~ EPILOGUE pg92 (Page 120)

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 9:24am | IP Logged
wow... wt an end to beautiful story...all the credit goes to u to write a story in this  beautiful way...always love a happy ever afterDay Dreaming...best of luck with ur other projects...thanx again for giving us an amazing journey...ClapClapClap

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 9:26am | IP Logged
Loved the epilogue.. I so love Happily ever afters.. Gonna miss this.. Was an amazing journey... 

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 9:56am | IP Logged
MY MY MY!!!!!!!! Just bcome real emotional wen received u're Pm sayin 'd last pm of vines wid thorns'...
Wat to say wen u're fairytale ends...no wrds to decrive wat u feel wen u're sweet lovestry meets such a beautiful end...it cudn'y have been bettr...it ended just perfectly wid d rite wrds...

D last update aka epligoue focussin on dere marriage was so nyc...dere weddin., dere dresses, dere masti, dere love, dere feelings., dere bonds alll ended so gracefully...i have no regrets except one dat kash raja ko bhi apne liye rani mil jate...but all in all dere masti was eventful nd satisfyn..den dere sahugrat,...awww...under d blanket of stars...in dere lovely secret garden...wich bonded every1...

My fav tale has come to an end...all teary-eyed but i'm glad u ended it here only...an end wich leaves us wanting for me is d bst end in mah opinion...lovd it...all d chracters held dere own nd yet dey were so diffrent...

Feeling bad dat we will ot look frwd to VWT update..though i joined in d middle but lemme tell u zara ji dat it connected wid it from d frst chptr...hats off to u introduce to go d unconventional way nd presentin d stry just so beautifully...in d end i wud say

...AND DEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!!!!!!!!!!

p.s just teary-eyed rite now...wanna rite so much but unable to...but a BIG HUG TO U FOR SHARING SUCH A BEAUTIGUL JOURNEY!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 10:08am | IP Logged
Zara that was too good!
Arnav understanding that Raja takes the front row while he waits patiently!
Its because of Raja he comes across Khushi. Or else she would have been ravished by savages long back!
Thats why Arnav is grateful to Raja and is ready to wait in the wings!
Really sweet of Arnav to understand her so well!
Liked the way all the loops tied in both the parts.(last and epilogue)
Lovd Dadaji's acceptance and how he deals with his grandson.
Gift deed to Madhu was also touching. Its his way of atoning and making sure Madhu always keeps an eye on his grandchildren!

Following your hierarchy too dear!
Zara , whenever I am getting time I am reading your earlier works too.You know your writing really matured by leaps and bounds. I am glad that you have developed it so well! 
Hope you rise to new heights with every new work of yours!


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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 10:11am | IP Logged
Originally posted by evrydayirabbave

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omg! i can't believe its over!

(see, even Zayn is crying LOL Embarrassed)
i 'm crying so much! this was one of the best ff's i've ever read, and one of the most attaching ffs ever i mean seriously, this ff is really amazing!!!! thanks so much.Embarrassed

zara, you truly are a really talented writer
the fact that this is over is making my heart explode
i'm such a huge fan of yours and honestly, i hope your skills rub onto me
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but can't wait for your new ffs coming up
hope you all the best of luck for your future ffs
even though this is finished, i will read this ff over again, because i love it! aww thanks. I hope you like my last two ff's too.Smile

ps: you think you could check out my ffs? i'd love it if i could get a few pointers from you Embarrassed I don't mind at all.

pps: love ya! 

(along with sexy Paul Wink Embarrassed) eeep! *faint*

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Originally posted by drunkiiebabe

i open this pm with a heavy heart cant believe VWT is finally over it a sad sad day

wat a beautiful wedding and wat a wedding without family awww kushal i just adore him i remember a time when i use to want to bang a door on his head awww they give madhu authority of the cottage that very sweet trying to repent his wrong deeds n anjali the little teaser teasing her brother the photo session with khushi n raja so cute haha arnav gald raja a dog n not a human or he would be tough competition hehehe Arnav knows Raja is too much of a match for himLOL

awww arnav n khushi r too cute hahaha poor arnav all he want to do is go to his room but the ladies arent letting him it fun to see this side of kushal happy laughing having fun haha raja on arnav side arnav put the ring on her ringer haha n kushal n devayani cute banter they r so cute haha tug of war between raja n arnav n raja won cause he got 3 girls on his side hehe "all's fair in love n war of courseLOL

awww the garden scene was beautiful magical everything over the guilt is gone n now it time for happiness yep.
 
beautiful epilogue gonna miss this ff alot Thanks sis for all the comments you have given me. Muah!

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Originally posted by ..SankiMedhz..

Awww...this has finally come to an end. It was a lovely journey with you Zara...and with Raja of course!LOL
THAT GIF IS SO CUTE!Heart Yay!

The wedding was beautiful...and the ceremonies afterward were fun filled...as you would expect in a loving family like the Raizadas. :) yep everyone happy

Khushal gifted the house to Madhu! That's so sweet of him...and its like saying sorry for all the times he hurt Madhu n Khushi through his words.yep.

Raja...is a sweetheart. Bas.Embarrassed
He actually had a tug of war with Arnav...and won. I'm going to pretend the three girls behind Raja did not exist. My Raja won.LOL of course!

And their first night together...was beautiful too. And The end...where Arnav tells Khushi how much he loves her...whether she talks...or doesn't talk, because its her heart that he values...and not anything else... :) perfect ending

Lovely ending Zara...and I'm looking forward to Hierarchy! :D
And you thanked me???Shocked I need to thank you for sharing this lovely story on the forum!
Thank you Zara!Hug *hugs*

And for that...I'm giving you a gift.LOL LOL. thanks muchly.Big smile




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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 10:22am | IP Logged
beautiful epilogue ... had tears in my eyes... im soo going to miss this ff... was really attached to it... i really glad i came across this ff... thanks for sharing...n i will surely check out hierarchy 

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Posted: 07 February 2013 at 10:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by arhi101

I can't accept that this ff is over tooCry. I am feeling the same as I felt when Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon ended. It is like going through the same phase in life againUnhappy awww don't say that! *hugs*
 
As usual the update was magical and beautiful. No wrods can describe how amazing the update was. Why did it have to end. Sorry for sulking like a babyCryCryCry. *double hugs*
 
Coming to the update:
 
Lovely dress for khushi, and the sherwani, I could just imagine sexy sobti in it. I was blushing uncontrollably. With all the marriage rituals complete, nothing could come between this adorable couple who were truly destined to be one. Reading their wedding update reminded me of all the hard times they went through, especially him being with Lavanya, Khushi being nearly engaged to Aman, their first time accepting their feelings, and of course who can forget the first time they made love to each other. I couldn't stop crying just remembering all those moments. So well written. Thanks so much. This is one of the reasons why i have no tissues leftLOL
 
The games were so cute. WOW loved how Arnav put the ring on her. That was truly the best part in the whole game. He is so cute and smart. The game also showed how restless Arnav was becoming to just get this all over and done with, so he could spend some qaulity time with his beautiful bride on their wedding nightBlushingAnd of course Khushi isn't oblivious to any of thatWink. LOL so true.
 
Finally for Arnav the games are all over and he can finally be with his wife. Only to see her putting Raja to sleep. Wow he made special arrangements. That was so romantic and passionate. Awesome description and very thoroughly written. thanks sis. Glad you liked it.
 
awww Khushi became pregnant. And they all had a happy life. So cute Beautiful ending. Can't believe it's finished. Yet I am deinitely going to read it all over again.
Can't wait for the new ff to kick start
Inshallah it will be successful like all ur stories.
thanx for the pmBig smile Thank you so much for your comments through out this ff. Hope to see you in my Hierarchy FF tooLOL

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Originally posted by hmtxyz

Thanks for the PM Zara! Was so sad when it read- Last PM...

"I'm sorry to say I have run out of tissues because I have used them all up and now am using my sleeve. " Awww... Am right here with you sister! Come get your hug!!! Hug *Super hugs*

This was a fitting end to the story. And I am so glad you chose to leave Khushi without her voice than creating a cheesy "miracle" which would have ruined the essence, probably. (No offence meant to anyone) thanks.Smile

The wedding, the games.. to be honest, I was more impatient than Arnav to get through those! Hehehehe
The bond between Khushi, Raja and Arnav was described so well! Yay. Glad you liked it!Embarrassed

The garden...Oh My God! Even better than fairy lights.. I can imagine how it looked!! Ethereal!! Wow! I was worried if readers could imagine it or not. Glad you commented on it, phew lolBig smile

And..ahem...the... ummm... mature scene.. Mature, yes. But touching too! Wish I could have seen Khushi's dress, though. Do you have any pics or links for the same? The links are embedded in the writing. go read the epilogue again and click the words. They are the link to the image.

The end.. was the beginning for them and you put it just right.

I will miss this sooo much! I know I am going to come back and read the whole FF again and again.. And I am sure all of us are going to take away beautiful memories from this one, my favorite being the one where Arnav talks to the guard of the hostel and goes and meets Khushi with the rose plant, the next best being Khushi and Kushal in the secret garden..and there are so many more!!! Thanks so much for mentioning for favourite . means alot. *Hugs*

Keep writing, Zara.. You have a wonderful gift with words!!!!
Loads of Love, and thanks a lot for writing!!!

P.S.: I am not making this post fancy, as I don't have the heart to. I expressed whatever I could, plainly. I hope you understand.. Its over, Vines with Thorns is over!! *sniffles* of course. hope you read my next ff Hierarchy the first chappy is up.Smile

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this FF will always have special place in my heart Heart

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