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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 3:41am | IP Logged
Hello buddies,
                       This is my first os ever so I want pm anyone  know this may be a crap it's a mere thought of mind. Please bear with me.

*Pyara Sach-

Jo Insan har waqt Sbki khushi chahata h
Sabke baare me Achcha sochta h,
Sabki fikr karta h
Wahi insan
Hmesha Akela reh jata h... Its true..

Arjun a super cop who has golden heart...wid amazing skills to solve any case...he never failed in any his mission till now...!!
as he is one of d best cop in d department so he has equally enemies...
he is a honest cop for whom duty come first.. he is married to a sweet angel name roshni who is teacher by profession...arni meet at during a school function of roshni as arjun is d chief guest of d function..but as said people who is honest hv to pay some value for their honesty...
department is very happy wid d work of arjun so d department decided to reward arjun for his work... arni goes together fr d ceremony bt destiny hv its own plan...d car in which arni travels have a bomb fitted by d enemy of arjun...arni together sit n goes to d ceremony by dat car...
unfortunately arjun busy wid a call in phone but roshni sees d bomb n throw arjun out of d car..
arjun unable to think what happens widin few seconds..! suddenly car blasts leaving arjun dumbstruck..people nearby in d way saw arjun unconscious n let him put in d hospital..
arjun at a critical condition...but doctor save him anyhow bt arjun becomes dead by inside...
he only rembers roshni face n d sweet moments spend wid her...he totally breakdown!!


Teri nigaahon ke teri hi raahon ke
Kareeb se gayi jindagi
Tujhe kyun dekha na tujhe kyun jaana na
Shikaayatein karu ya nahi
Thami hai yeh saansein, pari hai yeh aankhein
Sahu kaise abb yeh faasala

Bin tere bin tere bin tere...
Koyi khalish hai hawaao mein bin tere

Koyi khalish hai hawaao mein bin tere



Kuchh bacha hi nahi darmiyaan
Saans leti hai abb yeh duriyaan
Dil nahi jaanata raahon mein
Haath se haath chhute the kahaan
Kyun najar ke kinaare tute hai khaab saare tu bata
Suna suna sam hai khaali khaali jahaan hai abb mera
Bin tere bin tere bin tere...
Koyi khalish hai hawaao mein bin tere

Koyi khalish hai hawaao mein bin tere


Plzzz comment of u like it.

Thank you





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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Hey Payal! Hug

Short and Nicely written! : )

Such a tragic death of Rosh! Cry

And i agree! Confused

Jo Insan har waqt Sbki khushi chahata h
Sabke baare me Achcha sochta h,
Sabki fikr karta h
Wahi insan
Hmesha Akela reh jata h..

P.s- love that song in the end! : (


And it wasn't crap at all! Tongue

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 3:59am | IP Logged
first lines
well said n do continue dear

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 4:00am | IP Logged
Payal... my dear sisterHug
 
This was such a beautiful OS... Short, Sweet, emotionalClap
 
This really doesnt feel like your first attemptWink
Loved it to the core Clap *Claps claps**
 
awww this was really heart touching for me...Hug
 
Write more short Os's dearSmile would love to read short onesWink


Edited by funkylicious - 08 January 2013 at 4:01am

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 4:06am | IP Logged
Wao true line dr,
sabki khushi chahane vala ,
last mein akela reha jata hai,
i feel bad for arjun ,
poor roshani,
What a tragic death,
tumhen to es concept per ss ya ff likhana chahiye,
anyway conti soon

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 4:06am | IP Logged
payal : short n sweet story 

Hug for u 

loved d lines in d starting

Roshni's tragic deathCry

Expecting u to write moreSmile

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 4:11am | IP Logged

Awsome Line..just amizing...Embarrassed

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 4:53am | IP Logged
Awesome. Its really good. Plz continue...I hope u'll do..Smile

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