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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 10:24am | IP Logged
very nice dear:)
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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Loved it Rish.. The way u have written it and the way it was executed.. Kudos girl..
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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 11:03am | IP Logged
This is written so beautifully and I just have no words to describe this
I loved reading it and thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 1:06pm | IP Logged
Thank you... to you, and all the writers out there talking about current issues... Sure reading a romantic story is blissful, but reading a thought provoking story, is always inspiring... I am so glad that you wrote this... It was a beautiful piece! 
ananya786 Senior Member
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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
beautifully written... Clap
just loved it...<3
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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 7:29pm | IP Logged
The scenario you painted is very much vague based on the plot base, so try getting a clear view. More like a critical lens rather than words laid in a way to mesmerize a reader. 

other than hat, you are good to go! 

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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 12:28am | IP Logged
This was so good.. Awesome..
Sadly its the truth with our society. In such incidents where a woman suffers, she is still getting blamed; sometimes for her style of clothing, sometimes her behavior or lifestyle she chooses for herself. And I wonder why can't people understand a simple fact that it's the thinking process of men who consider women just as an object to quench their physical desires..
You have written it so well..Clap
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Posted: 20 January 2013 at 6:54am | IP Logged
very well done risha ...
keep up the god work...
do write more 
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