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Posted: 09 January 2013 at 3:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aroran

Pls continue soonThumbs Up
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Originally posted by arya.nair


Pls do continue dear Smile
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Originally posted by colorsluv

Nice Intro.
Cont soon.

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 9:06am | IP Logged
Part-1


in Rk mansion,Payal and Radhaji were
waiting for Rk
Payal- bhai abhi tak nahi aaye mughe
unki fikar ho rahi hai!!!!
Radhaji: don't worry Payal beta wo aa
jayega tumhe pata hai na Delhi yaha se kitna door hai
Payal: maa bhai ka phone bhi switch
of aa raha hai mughe toh bari fikar ho
rahi hai bittuji bhi unke saat nahi hai
Radhaji: payal beta i know you love
your bother he'll be alright and he will be us very soon...
Payal: maa kash aisa hi ho
Radhaji: ab chalo go to you room and
sleep
Payal: nahi i will wait mom
Radha knows very well that Payal will not listen to her and she decided to be
with her and wait..
after an hour Payal tried his phone
and it was once again came switch off..
Payal was looking at the door and
then she saw Rk coming, he was carying one girl in his arms..
"bhai" said Payal
and then radhaji got up from the sofa,
both were shocked to see rk and the
girl...
Payal moved towards Rk and said "who is she bhai"
RK- i don't know i found her on the
road, she came front of my car..
Payal: ohh looks like someone has
hurted her..
RK: i think you are right pihu we need to call doctor..
Payal: wait I'll call Dr.Mishra
RK: ok pihu
Rk went towards the guest room and
kept her on the bed
Radha was following RK she came forward and moved to the girl and sat
beside her
Radhaji: kitni pyaari hai
RK just ignored her and came out of
the room..then payal came and said
"doctor Mishra is coming' rk said "ok" and went to his room to
freshen up
after haif an hour Dr.Mishra came pihu
took him to the girl ,where Radha was
sitting
radha: Doctor please examin this girl doctor: ok let me check her
Radha moved back and doctor was
checking her
Doctor: looks like someone has hurted
her so much!!!!
he showed radhaji and payal some cutting marks on her hands and some
burning marks!!!! Radhaji and Payal got shock how can
someone be so much cruel,,she was
badly hurted...Doctor gave them some
creams to apply over the burning and
cutting marks and said she will fine
she needs rest!!! and left from there,, Payal kept a blanket on the girl and
both ladies went out of the room and
went to sleep...
Next morning
Rk came down and asked about the
girl..payal told him everything about all those cutting and burning
marks...after having breakfast Rk and
payal went to the girl's room
she was sleeping peacefully..both rk
and payal were lookimg at her,...
but there was something else was going in rk's mind
-Flashback-
it was dark night and RK was coming
back from Delhi(from his shoot)
he thought he's late and he knows
very well that pihu must be waiting for him...and worried
and suddenly someone came front of
his car and rk stopped the car at once
and got out of the car and and saw
someone lying on the road..he went
towards the person and said are you okay????
then he touched the shoulder and
tuned the person and it was girl he
thought he can't leave her here like
this so he carried her and kept in his
car and drived off!!!!!!!!!!!! -flashback ends-
slowly the girl opened her eyes and
saw rk and payal and got scared and
said please leave me and my family
plzzz i beg you...
Payal went towards her and said 'hey relax we are not going to harm you'
and she hugged her!madhu hugged
her tightedly
payal said you want water let me get it
from kitchen and she left fom
there...now Rk was alone in the room he don't know what to say now so he
asked her name???
she said "madhubala"
now he knows her name...he moved
towards her and said i found you on
road lying uncounsiously so i carried you here...she didn't replied
rk decided not to question her more
and then payal comes with a glass of
water and gave it to madhu
madhu said thanks to her...rk said
now he should go otherwise he will late for his todays interview..he
hugged payal and said bye to her and
left from there... IN KITCHEN radha and Deepali were cooking
Deepali:mammiji suna hai rk koi larki
ko ghar laya hai...wo actually nokaro
ne kaha..
Radhaji: haan wo kal raat usse road
par behosh meli... Deepali: aur wo usse le aaya
Radhaji: isme buribaat kya hai wo toh
sirf uski madad karna chahta tha!!!!!
Deepali: sahi kaha maamiji...
Deepali gave a smile to radhaji and left
from there and there payal asked madhu her
name and told her that her brother rk
brought her here...madhu kept silent
and was looking down
payal said her she should get
freshen...payal had got some clothes for her madhu took the clothes and
went inside the wash room...
and then Deepali comes inside the
room...


Edited by Drashti.deewani - 10 January 2013 at 9:08am

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 9:07am | IP Logged
i typed it so fastly so sorry for mistkes i have done

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 9:10am | IP Logged
nice ff...update nxt prt soon...

Edited by zoshad3119 - 10 January 2013 at 9:10am

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 9:14am | IP Logged
interesting... pm me when u update

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 9:14am | IP Logged
@Drashti.deewani: Awesum n fantastic!!!!Smile

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