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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 3:56pm | IP Logged
Lovely Os..
Well written!!..

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 10:02am | IP Logged
Oh my!! That was brilliant stuff, my dear.. Clap

Thi kahan yaar ab tak? I request.. Uh huh! Demand that you write more.. EmbarrassedWink
This was soo beautiful.. So very subtle and poignant!

Ayaan-Asad, I absolutely love their bonding.. Never on TV, have we witnessed something remotely similar.. Smile
And AsYa, Allah Miya! I'd never thought I could fall for any other couple after IPK.. But AsYa are slowly redefining magic on screen..
I wish we do get similar scenes on the show, in the future now that the ice between the duo is broken..
P.S.: that bit where she falls unconscious was hilarious! ROFLWink

And majaal kisiki toh tumse kahe, ki yeh phir aa gayi!! If you keep writing stuff like this, I'm sure tumhara peecha koi nahi chodega.. Thumbs Up

P.P.S.: I've been struggling to hold myself back from writing on these two.. Already have too much on my platter.. But now you've provided fodder to my intentions.. TongueWink

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 3:47am | IP Logged
Wow man it was superb...
Aur END to aur bhi khas tha...

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Posted: 01 February 2013 at 9:03am | IP Logged
nice  one

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Posted: 22 February 2013 at 7:21am | IP Logged
Man i love ur one shots

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Posted: 23 February 2013 at 4:57am | IP Logged
Hello there!Big smile

I am truly amazed at your writing skills in Hindi. I cannot quote the parts i absolutely loved, but after the dialogues in the last bit i simply had to tell you how much i adored this little fic.

"Kabhi Kabhi sapno se ya apno se bhi takra deta hai" Is my favourite line ( Among others)  HeartSmile
Ending it on a humorous note was absolutely brilliant!

Keep writing! And i totally understand how us writers need a little nudge to our egos once in a whileLOL 

Cheers!
 Niti

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 2:45pm | IP Logged
This was like the most awesome OS everrr!! The ending had me grinning like an idiot LOL It was the sweetest thing everrr when Asad told her k behosh mat ho jana Big smile

Loved how you reflected Asad's state at being asked to stay away from his brother. I felt sooo sorry for him! Poor baby! Unhappy

But the thing that blew me away were the dialogues! How can you write such deep and meaning dialogues?? You should be writing scripts for movies! Seriously! You're God gifted Masha'Allah Embarrassed

Keep writing more!! Hug Hug

*runs off to the next OS* Wink

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Posted: 25 February 2013 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
Hey ...
That was simply brilliant :D
 

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