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SwaRon FF:Will love You.Forever.#2, Note pg-57 (Page 7)

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Chapter-11

Time passed...every passing second took some part of their pain with it...allowing them to have space to fill in with the beautiful memories waiting for the them...with each passing day the day of their divorce was coming closer...


One fine morning sun rays happily entered into their bedroom falling over the two bodies engulfed in each other...feeling blessed to be in each other embrace...


Past few days were blissful...they were staying under one roof...that day's incident cleared some of the misunderstandings between them...she became much more tolerant about him...he could sense the difference...she was determined to re-unite the broken pieces of her marriage ….as she promised herself that night...she knew he still loved her dearly...she is still the reason behind his every heart beat...she was trying to know the reason which led him to push her away ...so heartlessly..the reason which changed them from the PERFECT COUPLE to the TO BE DIVORCED COUPLE...


She again converted his house into their HOME...with her presence in it...though they didn't discuss about the divorce since that night ….a fear always used to engulf her heart..fear of being separate from HIM...


She was making breakfast for them...he took bath and got ready to go to work...he went to the dining area from where he could get a clear view of his angel ...he took a chair and sat there admiring the heavenly beauty in front of her...he could see the difference in her behavior... she  has became very warm towards him...he could see the same caring ..and loving sharon...at least few glimpses of her...who made his life ..worth living...


Sharon...m hungry...he said ..with a pout..

Yeah ...m almost done...she said smiling at his adorableness...

Jaldi karo na...mujhe bahut bhuk lagi he ...he said..while making sounds with plate and spoon...

Oh ho Swayam..stop being such a kid ...bas ho gaya...she said and started walking towards the dining table with a tray in her hand...


He was admiring her...his strict and disciplined Siren Sharon...


He saw her moving towards him...next moment she kept her hand on her forehead...he could sense her uneasiness...he ran to her rescue...but before he could reach her ..she fell on the ground ..unconscious...with her..his world crumbled down...


He fell on his knees and kept her head on his lap...he patted her cheeks...called her name...sprinkled water on her face...but there was no sign from her ..regaining senses...


He picked her in his arms and ran towards his car...kept her in the back seat...his heart..his mind were surrounded by negative thoughts...


What is wrong with her?

Anything wrong with her health?

What if she it unwell...


His heart ached...mere thought of loosing her again...was heart wrenching for him...he shooed away all the pessimistic thoughts and drove towards the hospital...


They reached hospital...he picked her in his arms...and ran inside...he went to their family doctor...fortunately...the doctors last appointment got canceled ….so she directly took her for check up...


He stood there...near the door...while doctor was doing check ups..se was lying there ... ... motionless ...she was looking un- naturally white ...weak...almost lifeless ...


Her usual bright face was looking pale ... eyes closed ..the same eyes which always convey her care ,affection ,passion, love towards her ...his source of energy ,confidence...source of life ...they were closed ...the hope which raised inside him was after that night...to be together with his love again...was trembling...he was getting restless...


Mr Shekhwat...

A voice disturbed his trail of thoughts...he looked up..it was the nurse..

Yes..yes sister...

Doctor Malhotra is waiting for you in her cabin...

Ohk..thanks...i will go and meet her..where is my wife?

She is still unconscious...you can go and meet the doctor in the mean while...she will be conscious in sometime..


He ran towards the doctors cabin...


In the Doctor's cabin...


What is wrong with my wife ...Doctor...is she alright?please tell me doctor...he asked...his voice was full of concern..he was getting restless to know her condition..


She is fine Mr Shekhawat...in fact...there is a news for you...I don't know whether its good news or bad news ...I heard you both are getting separated...she said with questioning eyes..she knew this couple since 6 years...they always seemed so perfect together...she was curious to know the reason...behind their separation...the present scenario was making the situation even more complicated...


Doctor...please tell me...How is she?..Is she alright?..Is she suffering from any disease? ..he pleaded..


Relax..Mr Shekhawat...Your wife is fine...she is not suffering from any disease... she is pregnant …She answered him...


Her words changed his worried expression into a content one..his downwards curved lips were now changed into an upward one...he was elicited ...with the new found happiness...their sign of love was taking breath inside her...their long cherished dream...their sign of love...who will be a perfect blend of both them...he was happy...overwhelmed..excited...nervous...hopeful...all at the same time...all he wanted to do that very moment was to take her in his arms and tell her the news...the ray of hope which will change their lives...about the life..who will be answer to all their questions...a beautiful thread of love that will bind them together ..forever...


I don't know if you are staying together...who is the father...but I had to inform you..as you are still her husband..


Her last few words were heart breaking...but that was normal...for any spectator...their story was a mystery...


Doctor..I am the father of this child...its mine...he said...


His eyes were full of pain...he had to prove  his fatherhood to the life which is taking breath inside his Sharon...even though they were legally a couple...

Good ...congratulation Mr Shekhawat...I need to discuss few more things with you...


Yeah ..tell me doctor..


There are major complications in her pregnancy ...she needs complete rest ..she is not in a state to take any physical or mental stress...


The doctor explained the reason behind her complications...


After few minutes..he was walking in the hospital corridor...he didn't know whether to cherish the new found happiness and celebrate the arrival of the newcomer..or cry over the old graves...


Two hearts...beating in unison..one who was feeling the mixed emotions of happiness...nervousness...and anger...all at the same time...the other one was still unaware  about the newly developed events around her...a third life was unfolding its bud...into a flower...proving its existence...slowly...with the power to change the last chapter of their SAGA OF LOVE...



So guys how was it? good ...bad ...very bad..boring ... plzzz do comment.. i will wait for your comments and feedback Day DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming


Finally...a SWARON convo...Two  chapters back to back ..D'oh


I hope this was not very boring....I know due to late updates or may be cause of decreased quality of writing...many reguar readers left me...but i am still writing for my existing onesOuch


Next chapter...on pg- 30.Embarrassed(i know its huge..take your time...i am not in a hurry..)




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Edited by deep_Tanha - 26 January 2013 at 4:16pm

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Me first Cool
jab aapne meko cc pe btaya u are posting two back to back updates..
doppelganger 1...ahaan maze aa gaye Embarrassed
doppelganger 2..zyada khush mat ho abhi seEvil Smile
me...Party
wen i read the update...
doppelganger 1..packs her bags and runs away leaving dust.
doppelhanger 2..ROFL
me...trolled Ouch
di inna anyaya kyu ? *sniffs*
vaise to aap sari updates hi chinni si krte ho bt
mere "love u forever" ki sath zyada hi partiallity krte ho..
mtblb inni chinni-chinni si updates Unhappy
meko kinna man tha aur padhne ka Day Dreaming
chalo ab kya kr skte hain Tongue
meko ek baar btao to kaun se readers chod ke gye ? Stern Smile
kyunkii likes to badh hi rahe h Ermm
coming to the review..
u know meko aapka ye wala ff kinna pasand
intense swaron Blushing...
awww swayam he is damn cute Embarrassed
bechara inna guilty feel karr raha tha...
.jab sharon ne btaya ki usne bhi maze kiye LOL
tab jakar uski antar aatma ne use kosna band kiya ROFL
Meko laga unki convo hogi next update main...Ermm
Bt it was completely unxpected
sharon being pregnant..
loved swayam ka confidence
bachche ka baap to mai hi hu bhai Cool
Um u said swaron were married since 12 years
to ab achanak kaise Shocked
Both the updates were awesome
wanna read more *pout*
mai zyada fussy to nh ho gya na comment main OuchErmm


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NISHA

Me first Cool
jab aapne meko cc pe btaya u are posting two back to back updates..
doppelganger 1...ahaan maze aa gaye Embarrassed
doppelganger 2..zyada khush mat ho abhi seEvil Smile
me...Party
wen i read the update...
doppelganger 1..packs her bags and runs away leaving dust.
doppelhanger 2..ROFL
me...trolled Ouch
di inna anyaya kyu ? *sniffs*
vaise to aap sari updates hi chinni si krte ho bt
mere "love u forever" ki sath zyada hi partiallity krte ho..
mtblb inni chinni-chinni si updates Unhappy
meko kinna man tha aur padhne ka Day Dreaming
chalo ab kya kr skte hain Tongue
meko ek baar btao to kaun se readers chod ke gye ? Stern Smile
kyunkii likes to badh hi rahe h Ermm
coming to the review..
u know meko aapka ye wala ff kinna pasand
intense swaron Blushing...
awww swayam he is damn cute Embarrassed
bechara inna guilty feel karr raha tha...
.jab sharon ne btaya ki usne bhi maze kiye LOL
tab jakar uski antar aatma ne use kosna band kiya ROFL
Meko laga unki convo hogi next update main...Ermm
Bt it was completely unxpected
sharon being pregnant..
loved swayam ka confidence
bachche ka baap to mai hi hu bhai Cool
Um u said swaron were married since 12 years
to ab achanak kaise Shocked
Both the updates were awesome
wanna read more *pout*
mai zyada fussy to nh ho gya na comment main OuchErmm




Suku

Deeps at last you updatedD'oh wo be it is about time. I was wondering what happend to this FF... Well here goes my comments.Chapter 10Deeps you never cease to surprise me. Your writing is a seamless blend of sweetenss and positivity. It is like beautiful poem, or like an untouched bloom with all its purity and virtue. The description of sun rays itself proves you subtle way of writing but in turn leaves a wealth of meaning. The contentment on swaron faces is a treat to read, and they some how patched up their difference. Well it was a bold thing for sharon to ask swayam his love for her. Atleast she didnt wallow in self doubt and self pity and it turn gave them a chance. That is why i always say deeps your update just possess so much positivity.Clap Good going deeps I am a very delighted fan of yours, who is well satisfied with your update. You are just awesome and the bestttEmbarrassed


now chapter 11

PartyDancingDancingParty time Swaron is going to be parents Day DreamingDancingDancingdinchak dinchakDancingDancingBig smileTongue Deeps you made my day darlingHug now they can get a divorceEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.
Ye tho super se upar wala update. The closeness shared by Swaron is something so pure and rare, jithna fight karo kuch be karo they can never be indifferent. That is our swaron. Always making us drool on them and especially in your update deeps, it brings us to tears but then they stand up again and giving us hope that though life is not a bed of roses and rather it is a combination of roses and thorns and thorns doesnt last for long.Hamesha aap ke updates mai se muje wohi lagta hai ki, himmat maat harna, coz if you want to you can def change your life for good.ClapClap That is our deeps, with full of postivity enthusiasm and full of life, and this reflects in your updates too. Thanks deeps you are a sweetheart, but your writing By God totally alienWink out of the world boli tho aap poochenge mai kya alien huWink so seede alien boldalaLOL
The whole update when swaron was together shaorn preparing food for swayam is so cute,and him carrying her to hospital with so much anxiety was so typical of swayam. You hve captured the swaron essensce so well. Love you love you love you so so much deeps it is one your bestest update!!!!! aur jaldi update karo jiEmbarrassed
 
 
Surbhi
 

Hukum!!

Aapne update kiyaaa!
Yayyy!!!
Back to back woh bhi!
I was really hoping to read more..but its cool..aapne jitna kiya wohi kaafi h :-P
Swayam se zyada pyaar toh mjhe sharon pe aa rha h yahan...she is so sweet yaarr...matlab sab kuch pata hone ke baad bhi she is ready to forgive him and start a fresh life with him..
Aur swayam toh pehle angry man bana fir happy man fir excited man :-D :-D :-D
Dono reh nhi paaye bechaare :-X
Aa hi gaye apni routine life mei wapas...natak khor!!
Good newsss!!! lol sharon is pregnant!!
Swayam kitna senti ho jaata h...cute ladka!
And now i am eagerly waiting to read what will happen further.

Aapne as usual awesome likha...i wish you had written more :-/
I was glued onto it.
Update the next one jaldii!!





Edited by deep_Tanha - 29 January 2013 at 5:37am
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res megha di
deepriii (new name Wink mann kiya bulane ka...) phirse kaan pakar ke maafi for the sooo late comment...agli baar update padhte hi comment likhungi!

you know how close this story is to me...zyada nahi likhungi...u also know how much i love the way u write and tell your story...aur wo last line mein words like bad and boring add karna band karde...wht u write are never bad and can never be boring...plsss...seriously i dont wanna read those words again varna no comment from next time!! Wink

and tune double update diye...Clap itna to compensation banta hai...m soo glad u r finally out of your writers block...

u portrayed swayams guilt sooo sooo well deeps...the entire part where swayam thought he forced himself upon her was so well written, the emotions could be felt soo well!

and the metaphors u use, like the vase breaking into million pieces, WoW!! i always love ur use of metaphors...

sharons craving for him...the way she expressed herself and told her that she wanted to feel him...

loved how subtly u showed some amt of misunderstandings getting cleared...how they started living happily together again...sharon making breakfast...swayam askin for food...lil things, lil moments which are big leap towards living together happily...

loved the fact that you showed sharon pregnant here...sometimes these r gods ways of not letting a couple separate...swayam having to assure that he is the childs father was painful and ironic...

m sure from now things r going to move towards happy times...eagerly waiting to read further...

love you!
your di! Smile


Edited by deep_Tanha - 15 February 2013 at 1:42am

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