Posted:
11 years ago
*unres
Hey Deeps...π€
Wow two back to back updates were really a surprise to read and worth the wait as usual...:)
Chapter10:
A grand start by describing the most beautiful girl...or as u rightly said the most beautiful creation of the creator...:)
The guilt swayam was feeling were clearly visible through your words...he was immensely hurt that he even felt like he raped her...out of anger he had to hurt himself too...
I felt glad when sharon told that she willingly gave up to him...and also that she dint regret anything what happened that night...their reaction itself spoke so many hidden feelings...
I
wanted to feel you ...My heart was craving for that moment just like
yours...I wanted to feel you close to me..as much as you wanted me...I wanted to feel YOUR'S...this line was the catchy one for me...though it was incomplete, her true feelings were being opened up...
Chapter11:
Starting with a happy note...the cheerful sharon who is determined to find the reason of her husband's introverted behaviour...and a happy swayam who still found it hard to digest the fact that his old sharon was back...:)
Swayam's restlessness infront of the doctor was normal and as the patient is sharon, then it is very predictable...π
I loved the way he confidently said that he is the father of the baby...
waiting for sharon's reaction towards the same...;D
Two
hearts...beating in unison..one who was feeling the mixed emotions of
happiness...nervousness...and anger...all at the same time...the
other one was still unaware about the newly developed events around
her...a third life was unfolding its bud...into a flower...proving
its existence...slowly...with the power to change the last
chapter of their SAGA OF LOVE...how do u write so beautifully??*sigh*
loved both the updates to the core...only thing i found both of them short...:(
ur updates are always mellifluous...eagerly waiting for next chappy...π³
Edited by binuja_ - 11 years ago