SwaRon FF:Will love You.Forever.#2, Note pg-57 - Page 6

Posted: 11 years ago
na bole tum
na maine kuch kaha
Posted: 11 years ago
meko mazza aaing *clapping hands *
Posted: 11 years ago
dii
suna na suno na
sun lo na
Posted: 11 years ago
pehla reader mujhko hi chun lo na
Posted: 11 years ago
bewafa bewafa bewafa nikli haye tu(aapπŸ˜†)
Posted: 11 years ago
bs ab mai jaaing
koi kadra hi nh insaan ki πŸ₯Ί
no reply -_______-
Posted: 11 years ago
😭😭😭 Sorry deepu i know i should have commented on this but i couldn't really sorry!! i didn't even remember about this res!! maff karde!! 😭😭😭  tabiyat set nahi hai is liye chota sa sara huye comment nahi karna chahti tere liye is liye next update pe will sure comment bara wala!! i swear aur haan apse har update pe jab bhi tu srubhi, himi aur nishi ke liye res karti hai ussi ke andar mera naam bhi likh dia kar!! Please haan yaad se!!! Really sorry re!! I am really ashame!!
Edited by Tanya_Swaronluv - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
*unres

Hey Deeps...πŸ€—
Wow two back to back updates were really a surprise to read and worth the wait as usual...:)

Chapter10:
A grand start by describing the most beautiful girl...or as u rightly said the most beautiful creation of the creator...:)
The guilt swayam was feeling were clearly visible through your words...he was immensely hurt that he even felt like he raped her...out of anger he had to hurt himself too...
I felt glad when sharon told that she willingly gave up to him...and also that she dint regret anything what happened that night...their reaction itself spoke so many hidden feelings...

I wanted to feel you ...My heart was craving for that moment just like yours...I wanted to feel you close to me..as much as you wanted me...I wanted to feel YOUR'S...
this line was the catchy one for me...though it was incomplete, her true feelings were being opened up...

Chapter11:
Starting with a happy note...the cheerful sharon who is determined to find the reason of her husband's introverted behaviour...and a happy swayam who still found it hard to digest the fact that his old sharon was back...:)

Swayam's restlessness infront of the doctor was normal and as the patient is sharon, then it is very predictable...πŸ˜‰
I loved the way he confidently said that he is the father of the baby...
waiting for sharon's reaction towards the same...;D
 
Two hearts...beating in unison..one who was feeling the mixed emotions of happiness...nervousness...and anger...all at the same time...the other one was still unaware  about the newly developed events around her...a third life was unfolding its bud...into a flower...proving its existence...slowly...with the power to change the last chapter of their SAGA OF LOVE...
how do u write so beautifully??*sigh*

loved both the updates to the core...only thing i found both of them short...:(
ur updates are always mellifluous...eagerly waiting for next chappy...😳


Edited by binuja_ - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by --NishaGoyal--


Me first 😎
jab aapne meko cc pe btaya u are posting two back to back updates..
doppelganger 1...ahaan maze aa gaye 😳
doppelganger 2..zyada khush mat ho abhi se😈
me...πŸ₯³
wen i read the update...
doppelganger 1..packs her bags and runs away leaving dust.
doppelhanger 2..🀣
me...trolled
di inna anyaya kyu ? *sniffs*
vaise to aap sari updates hi chinni si krte ho bt
mere "love u forever" ki sath zyada hi partiallity krte ho..
mtblb inni chinni-chinni si updates πŸ˜”
meko kinna man tha aur padhne ka
chalo ab kya kr skte hain πŸ˜›
meko ek baar btao to kaun se readers chod ke gye ? 😳
kyunkii likes to badh hi rahe h πŸ€”
coming to the review..
u know meko aapka ye wala ff kinna pasand
intense swaron ☺️...
awww swayam he is damn cute 😳
bechara inna guilty feel karr raha tha...
.jab sharon ne btaya ki usne bhi maze kiye πŸ˜†
tab jakar uski antar aatma ne use kosna band kiya 🀣
Meko laga unki convo hogi next update main...πŸ€”
Bt it was completely unxpected
sharon being pregnant..
loved swayam ka confidence
bachche ka baap to mai hi hu bhai ]8D]
Um u said swaron were married since 12 years
to ab achanak kaise ]:o]
Both the updates were awesome
wanna read more *pout*
mai zyada fussy to nh ho gya na comment main πŸ€”



🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣🀣

this was my reaction while reading ur comment baby
🀣

ye tujhe  chinni laga..lol...tere updates mere ek paragraph se chote hote heπŸ˜†

ur comment made my day..oops..nightπŸ˜‰

i know..tujhe ye kis liye pasand he...naughty girlπŸ˜‰

mene kitni baar bola he..swaron ka affair tha pehle 6 saal...school n college time milake...6 saal ki shaadiπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
di...ye jo banner mein bachche hai
inse maine guess kia is ff ki hapoy ending hogi
leap ke baad
n ye dono future tannu n tamya hai

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