SwaRon FF:Will love You.Forever.#2, Note pg-57 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago

Me first 😎
jab aapne meko cc pe btaya u are posting two back to back updates..
doppelganger 1...ahaan maze aa gaye 😳
doppelganger 2..zyada khush mat ho abhi se😈
me...🥳
wen i read the update...
doppelganger 1..packs her bags and runs away leaving dust.
doppelhanger 2..🤣
me...trolled
di inna anyaya kyu ? *sniffs*
vaise to aap sari updates hi chinni si krte ho bt
mere "love u forever" ki sath zyada hi partiallity krte ho..
mtblb inni chinni-chinni si updates 😔
meko kinna man tha aur padhne ka
chalo ab kya kr skte hain 😛
meko ek baar btao to kaun se readers chod ke gye ? 😳
kyunkii likes to badh hi rahe h 🤔
coming to the review..
u know meko aapka ye wala ff kinna pasand
intense swaron ☺️...
awww swayam he is damn cute 😳
bechara inna guilty feel karr raha tha...
.jab sharon ne btaya ki usne bhi maze kiye 😆
tab jakar uski antar aatma ne use kosna band kiya 🤣
Meko laga unki convo hogi next update main...🤔
Bt it was completely unxpected
sharon being pregnant..
loved swayam ka confidence
bachche ka baap to mai hi hu bhai 😎
Um u said swaron were married since 12 years
to ab achanak kaise 😲
Both the updates were awesome
wanna read more *pout*
mai zyada fussy to nh ho gya na comment main 🤔Edited by --NishaGoyal-- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

res archangels- my angels😳

NISHA

Me first 😎
jab aapne meko cc pe btaya u are posting two back to back updates..
doppelganger 1...ahaan maze aa gaye 😳
doppelganger 2..zyada khush mat ho abhi se😈
me...🥳
wen i read the update...
doppelganger 1..packs her bags and runs away leaving dust.
doppelhanger 2..🤣
me...trolled
di inna anyaya kyu ? *sniffs*
vaise to aap sari updates hi chinni si krte ho bt
mere "love u forever" ki sath zyada hi partiallity krte ho..
mtblb inni chinni-chinni si updates 😔
meko kinna man tha aur padhne ka
chalo ab kya kr skte hain 😛
meko ek baar btao to kaun se readers chod ke gye ? 😳
kyunkii likes to badh hi rahe h 🤔
coming to the review..
u know meko aapka ye wala ff kinna pasand
intense swaron ☺️...
awww swayam he is damn cute 😳
bechara inna guilty feel karr raha tha...
.jab sharon ne btaya ki usne bhi maze kiye 😆
tab jakar uski antar aatma ne use kosna band kiya 🤣
Meko laga unki convo hogi next update main...🤔
Bt it was completely unxpected
sharon being pregnant..
loved swayam ka confidence
bachche ka baap to mai hi hu bhai 😎
Um u said swaron were married since 12 years
to ab achanak kaise 😲
Both the updates were awesome
wanna read more *pout*
mai zyada fussy to nh ho gya na comment main 🤔

Suku

Deeps at last you updated wo be it is about time. I was wondering what happend to this FF... Well here goes my comments.Chapter 10Deeps you never cease to surprise me. Your writing is a seamless blend of sweetenss and positivity. It is like beautiful poem, or like an untouched bloom with all its purity and virtue. The description of sun rays itself proves you subtle way of writing but in turn leaves a wealth of meaning. The contentment on swaron faces is a treat to read, and they some how patched up their difference. Well it was a bold thing for sharon to ask swayam his love for her. Atleast she didnt wallow in self doubt and self pity and it turn gave them a chance. That is why i always say deeps your update just possess so much positivity.👏 Good going deeps I am a very delighted fan of yours, who is well satisfied with your update. You are just awesome and the besttt😳

now chapter 11

🥳Party time Swaron is going to be parents dinchak dinchak😃😛 Deeps you made my day darling🤗 now they can get a divorce😳😳.

Ye tho super se upar wala update. The closeness shared by Swaron is something so pure and rare, jithna fight karo kuch be karo they can never be indifferent. That is our swaron. Always making us drool on them and especially in your update deeps, it brings us to tears but then they stand up again and giving us hope that though life is not a bed of roses and rather it is a combination of roses and thorns and thorns doesnt last for long.Hamesha aap ke updates mai se muje wohi lagta hai ki, himmat maat harna, coz if you want to you can def change your life for good.👏👏 That is our deeps, with full of postivity enthusiasm and full of life, and this reflects in your updates too. Thanks deeps you are a sweetheart, but your writing By God totally alien😉 out of the world boli tho aap poochenge mai kya alien hu😉 so seede alien boldala😆

The whole update when swaron was together shaorn preparing food for swayam is so cute,and him carrying her to hospital with so much anxiety was so typical of swayam. You hve captured the swaron essensce so well. Love you love you love you so so much deeps it is one your bestest update!!!!! aur jaldi update karo ji😳

Surbhi

Hukum!!

Aapne update kiyaaa!
Yayyy!!!
Back to back woh bhi!
I was really hoping to read more..but its cool..aapne jitna kiya wohi kaafi h :-P
Swayam se zyada pyaar toh mjhe sharon pe aa rha h yahan...she is so sweet yaarr...matlab sab kuch pata hone ke baad bhi she is ready to forgive him and start a fresh life with him..
Aur swayam toh pehle angry man bana fir happy man fir excited man :-D :-D :-D
Dono reh nhi paaye bechaare :-X
Aa hi gaye apni routine life mei wapas...natak khor!!
Good newsss!!! lol sharon is pregnant!!
Swayam kitna senti ho jaata h...cute ladka!
And now i am eagerly waiting to read what will happen further.

Aapne as usual awesome likha...i wish you had written more :-/
I was glued onto it.
Update the next one jaldii!!

Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

res megha di

deepriii (new name 😉 mann kiya bulane ka...) phirse kaan pakar ke maafi for the sooo late comment...agli baar update padhte hi comment likhungi!

you know how close this story is to me...zyada nahi likhungi...u also know how much i love the way u write and tell your story...aur wo last line mein words like bad and boring add karna band karde...wht u write are never bad and can never be boring...plsss...seriously i dont wanna read those words again varna no comment from next time!! 😉

and tune double update diye...👏 itna to compensation banta hai...m soo glad u r finally out of your writers block...

u portrayed swayams guilt sooo sooo well deeps...the entire part where swayam thought he forced himself upon her was so well written, the emotions could be felt soo well!

and the metaphors u use, like the vase breaking into million pieces, WoW!! i always love ur use of metaphors...

sharons craving for him...the way she expressed herself and told her that she wanted to feel him...

loved how subtly u showed some amt of misunderstandings getting cleared...how they started living happily together again...sharon making breakfast...swayam askin for food...lil things, lil moments which are big leap towards living together happily...

loved the fact that you showed sharon pregnant here...sometimes these r gods ways of not letting a couple separate...swayam having to assure that he is the childs father was painful and ironic...

m sure from now things r going to move towards happy times...eagerly waiting to read further...

love you!

your di! 😊

Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 11 years ago

pure paga par
mai hi kabza kar lu to

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --NishaGoyal--
pure paga par
mai hi kabza kar lu to

haha...wat r u upto baby???

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 11 years ago

empty mind is devils workshop
aap thodi fasst nikli
varna mein pure first page pe kbza krna chah rahi thi 🤣
am k na 😆Edited by --NishaGoyal-- - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --NishaGoyal--
empty mind is devils workshop
aap thodi fasst nikli
varna mein pure first page pe kbza krna chah rahi thi 🤣
am k na 😆

pagal..ye wala mene lamba likha he...and i m giving double updates..tera comment aaj hi chahiye...m K as well

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Posted: 11 years ago

apko pta m kbse update ke liye waiting 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

intehaan ho gyi intezaar ki
aayi na koi khabar update ke haal ki

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Posted: 11 years ago

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