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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 9:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by priya00147

Amazinggg update!!!!
Tumne gari kyun ni bheji ye toh bta?LOL
Sid mujhse gussa kr rha!!!chalo chodo thode nok jhok mei maza aata haiLOL
Waise mera sid hai bada pyaaraEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
Shru acha hua tune uss samjhe ya samjhaun ko style mei chup krwa diya warna pura din bas samjhate hi rehta kuch na kuch..lol
Sreedi ka case dekkr lag raha hai ab kabhi chutte legi hi niROFL
Direct dreamland mei pahucha diya unheWink
Ho gaii na prava ki aish ksg bacha liya use sath hi duba bhi di uski bhains khud plan bnakrROFL
Naughty ksgTongue
Pata tha asr ko na dekkr sanchi ka reactionLOL
Kya entry thi asr ki!!
rose petals,music,dinner!!!complete romance ho gaya!!Wink
yayyy me and sreedi in same roomHug
haan yaar ye bhi daal diya tune..lol..dekho late sokar kya halat ho gyi meriLOL
ye anku aur tani ko hmesha daal kali hi kyu lagti hai..lolzz..
bhagam bhag aur chupa chupiROFL
Sorry di aap mujhse pitate pitate reh gaiLOL
Anki aur tani picha krti reh..lol
ufff maine toh socha tha pkp jaunROFL
ye kya ho gya bakio k rooms ki bhi talaashi le daliLOL
hailaaa..!!!prava toh tez nikli..lol..
sanchi ka dil Garden Garden ho gyaTongue
wahh samy ko scooty!!!
konsa brandROFL
waiting for the update



yaar priyu tumhari comment
padkar mujhe to hassi ruke nahi ja rahi haiROFL
ye sid ko to beja maine airportWink
y r right tani aur anki ko hamesha dal khala lagtha haiWink
sam ko kounsi brand pasand vo hi brand ka scooty haiLOL
priyuHug  Hug

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Posted: 19 January 2013 at 9:13am | IP Logged
@Sne :: tera comment dekhke mujhe laga... Chinnu has updated.

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Pri itna chota cmt

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haan yaar bohat chota ho gya ye tohTongue

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update karo!!

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hey frnds i am back with next chapter, thank u all of u for liking last chapterSmile

CHAPTER-4

After driving scooty, all 3 of them come inside, and assemble in hall. Sit on sofa and chit chat and even boys join in their discussion. All of them have their breakfast ,and again sit to chit chat, neeli forgot to bring her phone from room so went to room, mean while these people started telling to each other,

shru says deka hume ne 2 din pehale hi sab kaam  pura karli hai,

"Girls are best"Wink

Boys here this sentence and says oye hello!!

humne bi kaam ki hai, isliye kaam jaldi khatam ho gaya hai...

Girls say, ooohh chup karo… kya kiya tum logo ne, ghumne ke alava...girls are bestLOL

Rey says aisa hai to chalo ek dance compitation ho jaye...

Girls were silent, boys says ab kya huva abhi to keha rahe te ki girls best hai...

Neeli says from stairs, girls are always best chalo dance ho jaye ...,

mai aakeli kaafi hoo…tum logon ko harane ke liye!!

Kyun girls sahi kahan na maine …

All Girls agreed with Neeli, everyone know she was great in dancing!! And cheered for her.Clap
Shruti arranges song and neeli and Rey take their positions,

Firstly Rey starts dancing,

Ladkon Ki Ungli Pe Nacche Hai Zamana
Oh
Ladkon Ki Ungli Pe Nacche Hai Zamana
Simple Yeh Funda Hai Kudiyon Ko Batana
Loote Nai Loot Jaaye
Seedhe Se Yeh Pat Jaye
Kudiyan Hai Jebon Mein Rakhle
Kudiyan Nu Thag Le Thag Le
Kudiyan Nu Thag Le Thag Le
Kudiyan Nu Thag Le Thag Le
Thag Le Thag Le Thag Le
Kudiyan Nu Thag Le Thag Le
Kudiyan Nu Thag Le Thag Le
Kudiyan Nu Thag Le Thag Le
Thag Le Thag Le Thag Le...

Now Neeli starts dancing

Ladkon Ko Lagta Hai Easy Jeet Jaana
Oh
Ladkon Ko Lagta Hai Easy Jeet Jaana
Is Baar Unko Hara Ke Hai Dikhana
Badi Badi Haake Hai
Inki Hawa Khaa Ke Hai
Jinhe Bhari Khali Hai Akale
Mundeya Nu Thag Le
Mundeya Nu Thag Le
Mundeya Nu Thag Le
Thag Le Thag Le Thag Le
Mundeya Nu Thag Le
Mundeya Nu Thag Le
Mundeya Nu Thag Le.

Both were equal compitaters to each other, so no one could decide who were better in dancing round.Confused


So prava and shruti says kuyn na hum kabbadi khele, vo bi mud (kichhad) mai,Wink
all agree with them, shruti says to servents to arrange...

OUT SIDE palace,Wink
shruti ok mai aur samiya guide karnge tum log khel na, mai teams banati hoo,,,

Everybody got Ready. Guys were on Vest and shorts..

Girls were wearing their comfortable cloth suiting the game.
Prava, Tani, Anki, Priyu

Pritvi, ASR, REY, Shaleen ek team hai...TEAM-AWink


Sree, Sanchu, Neeli, Shru

KSG, Ashish, Gurmeet and Siddharth durasi team hai...TEAM-B.Wink

 


Chalo take your positions,


Both the teams take their positions and samiya says pehale toss karte hai, heads for team A and tales for team B.

She puts coin in air and team A wins toss...and

Rules : "Without stoping u must say love"

Firstly from team-A tani goes,

 
In team-B all took their positions , tani entres other court and starts saying love. Ashish is trying to catch her, finally tani touches shru. she was about to run but Ashish pulls her hand and hold her tightly and says kaha ja rahi ho mujhe chod kar dear, tani is lost in him.

Now samiya says team A lost 1 point, Ashish leaves her hand and says baby kaha kho gayi tum everything is fair in love and war...LOL

From team B sid goes,

sid entres team and he only tries to catch priyu, his eyes are fixed on her, but she is ecaping,finially sid somehow catches priyu and he was abt to go to his team but priyu shouts sid zara yaha aana, mujhe ek baat kehani hai,

sid thinks something and goes near her and asks wat u want to say, priyu bends to his ear and says u have lost, with that samiya says team B lost 1 point now,s id says ye kya hai, priyu says aapki friend ne to kaha tha ki everything is fair in love and war.(ETIFILAW)...LOL

From team A prava goes,

prava entres team and prava's eyes were only looking at kSG and she tries catch him, but he escapes, prava is trying hard to catch one of them, but she can't finially KSG thinks and winks at her. Prava was awed by KSG's reaction as she was least expecting it. Though her lips were saying love and KSG cought her at her belly tightly. she tries to free herself without stopping the love but she could not anymore and gives up.

Finially samiya says team B won,and KSG says tumhari friend nehi to kaha tha na ETIFILAW,she looks angryly at him and goes from their...

From team B Gurmeet goes,

He entres team and and tries to catch , he was about to touch priyu but suddenly she moves and Gurmeet catchs Anki, he was about to go, but anki says ruko na kaha ja rahe ho, he says kya?

She starts questioning him and he forget the game and starts answering.

Now samiya says team A won, now Anki says abhi aap ja sakte ho, he gives angry look and goes from their...

From team A rey goes,

He entres team, he was trying to concentrate only on the game, but he can't his eyes are only on neeli. Her beautiful eyes attracting him, but he was thinking how to catch her, he acts like he was holding someother person, but actually he was actually trying to hold neeli.

And he succeeded in it, and he truns back to go, but now neeli hold his hand and says abhi tak to meri haat pakad ne ke liye try kar rahe te, ab kya ho gaya, kuyn ja rahe ho. Rey lost his breath as he was so close to Neeli, he could hardly breath anymore.

Samiya announces team B won, Neeli leaves his hand and says ab ja sakte ho tum...LOL

From team B Sree goes,

She entres team and she tries catch Pritvi, but no she can't now sree catches tani and she is trying to go to her team back. She had only taken one step, Pritvi pulls her to him, She tries to free her but can't. With his hand held Sree's waist tightly, Pritvi says abhi to tum mujhe pakadne ki koshish kar rahi ti, jab mai tumhe pakda hoo to tum ja rahi ho. She is lost in him, and now samiya announces team A won, Sree says ye kya hai Pritvi, this is not fair, Pritvi says everything is fair in love and war dear.LOL

From team A ASR goes,

ASR entres team. Everybody looked at Sanchu and asked her to be alert. As they saw his eyes were already fixed on Sanchu.

Sanchu too pehale hi ASR mai kho gayi hai, ASR catches sanchu.

He was about to leave, Sanchu holds him back and falls over him not letting him to touch the border. ASR was busy tossing on mud with Sanchu. Now Sanchi was below and ASR was on top of her.

 He says Sanchu I can loose this match for you. Sanchu starts blushing now, ASR says kya huva itna Sharma kuyn rahi ho? ASR gives up

By now samiya says team B won, ASR says deka maine ye sirf tumhare liye kiya.
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scorll down ,in next post next part is theirSmile


Edited by shrutisweety - 19 January 2013 at 9:38pm

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From team B Shru goes, 

Shru entres team and she is fully avoding Shaleen, and trying to catch others. Seeing this he purpesly goes in front of her but she ignores him.

He finally gets irritated and pulls her and asks her shru ye kya hai tum mujhe pakad kuyn nahi rahi?

Shru says mai kuyn pakadu tumhe, tum mujhe pasand karte ho na, sab aapne parters ko pakad rahe hai, aur tum ho ki mujhe pakad nahi rahe hoo.LOL

now samiya says  team A won, shaleen leaves her says dekha tum jitane keliye mujhe ingonr kar rahi ti,mai janta ta isliye to mai tumhe pakad ke raka ta, ta ki tum game ke baare mai bul javo...

Samiya announces that both teams are winner they have same points...



After playing all tired so firstly they go to freshen up and than have their lunch. And all of them sit in hall and

Finally neeli asks shruti ab to sach sach bata do ki ye log yaha kaise aaye hai.

 

shruti says mai aap logo ko phone karne ke baad bohut socha ki aap logke liye kay karu par samaj nahi aaraha,tab mujhe ye idea aaya.

kuyn na mai inn sab ko bula kar aap sab ko surpise doo, isliye next day mai shaleen se milne gayi ti, usse maine sab kuch kaha.

Pehale vo mana kar diya tha, par baad mai maan liya, and some how he managed  to bring them all.

But sirf ASR mana kar raha tha aane ke liye, tabi shaleen mujhe call kiya tha, yaad hai na neeli, tum ne pocha tha ki mai kaha ja rahi hoo? Mai ASR ko manane ja rahi ti, mai kitni baar boli ASR ko par nahi mana ussne, pata nahi kya huva ASR ko achanak se phone kiya aur kaha mai aavunga, mai pehale hi shaleen ko sab details de ki aap sab kaise aa rahe ho, kya pasand hai, kaise lene jana hai...

Shaleen says kuyn na hum aaj raat dinner ke liye bhaar jaye vo bi apni apni partners ke saat, ladkiya kaha jana chaha vahan.

Kuyn dosto kya kehate ho aap log, all agree with shaleen, acha to aap sab list do, girls says to their partners and shaleen says aaj raat 8 baje sab ready rehane, ek min samiya aur shruti kya karenge, shruti says aap log jayiye hum log kuch shopping ke liye jate hai,all agress and go to get ready.

 

At night, 

Pritvi and SreeEmbarrassed


Pritvi takes sree to open house boating because sree like that so much, Pritvi arranges all so romantically, and he arranges candle light dinner. Cake for sree to tell her and he brings her to boat, firstly he takes her near to cake and he gives her knief, but she tells u too hold na we both will cut together, and they cut the cake and feed each other.

He takes her to dinner table and there all her favorite food was kept. she asks him aap ko kaise pata ki ye khana mujhe pasand hai, he comes closer to her and says kuyn sirf tumhe pata chalega kya meri pasand ke khana mujhe bi pata chale ga na sree, he pulls chair out and make her sit and he also goes and sits in his chair,they have their dinner romantically and with that they chit chat also.Embarrassed


ASR and Sanchu, Embarrassed


ASR takes her farm house, because Sanchu likes farm house. ASR arranges everything according to SAchu's likes. Sanchu likes white and pink colour so ASR arranges whole farm house with pink and white mixed, he also arranges white roses and pink roses for her, and ASR gives cute little puppies to sanchu.

He knows that sanchu loves singing, so ASR  starts singing for her so he sits on knee and starts to sing song,
   
Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jane
Kyun Hona Hi Hai

Tum Se Hi Din Hota Hai
Surmaiye Shaam Aati
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi

Har Ghadi Saans Aati Hai
Zindagi Kehlati Hai
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi

Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jane
Kyun Hona Hi Hai

Aankhon Mein Ankhne Teri
Bahoon Mein Baahein Teri
Mera Na Mujhe Mein Kuch Raha Hua Kya
Baaton Mein Baatein Teri
Raatein Saugatein Teri
Kyun Tera Sab Yeh Ho Gaya
Hua Kya
Mein Kahin Bhi Jata Hoon
Tumse Hi Mil Jata Hoon
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi.


He gets up and says bass ab mujhe itna hi aata hai, Sanchu acha laga tumhe,
Sanchu says aap ye sab kuch mare liye kiye? ASR says yes Sanchu dear, sirf tumhare liye, he take her to dinner table and makes her sit and he also sit and they both starts enjoying their dinner with their chit chat also.Embarrassed

Siddharth and priyuEmbarrassed,


Sid takes her to resort , he had booked the whole resot for their privacy.

Priyu loves rain so he arranges artificial rain for her and that too in middle of garden,(middle of garden their is open house,where they can't be wet),he also arranges ice cream for her, he knows that she likes to eat ice cream in rain.

He open umberlla, and both of them go to middle of garden(open house room),firstly he welcomes her and gives her ice cream and says khavo tumhe pasand hai rain mai ice cream khane ki, she starts eating, suddenly she stops and asks tum nahi khavo gi kya, nahi tum khalo, he sees a bottle in her hand, priyu ye kya hai, priyu says oh hai ye tumhe orange juice pasand hai na, isliye mai layi hoo, she pour in glass and gives him, he takes to dinner table and makes her sit and he also sits and enjoy their dinner and they also chit chat.Embarrassed


KSG and Prava,Embarrassed

KSG takes Prava to forest farm house, Prava likes to have dinner in open environment wher there are lot of plants. So he arranges all in forest farm house.

Prava loves blue and white ballons, so he arranges full farm house with ballons. and he feeds her favorite gulab jamun.

Then suddenly she hears roar of lion. she feels scared and hold his hand and says ye kya tha.

KSG says ye lion ho sakta hai. Prava closes KSG and holds him tightly.

Par yaha khase aagaya, Now KSG starts laughing and tells yaha lion nahi aaya hai, par lion ki roar to sun sakte hai na, He opens his phone and shows her sound of roar.prava is keeps sad face,ksg watch this and takes again takes gulab jamun and feed her,to make har happy,

By that she also starts laughing, he takes her to dinner table and, makes her sit and he sit and they start dinner to eat and they have chitchat also.Embarrassed


TO BE CONTINUEDWink



hey friends by tonight others members dinner date and party dresses i am posting,Smile
and kisko gussa aaya to sorrySmile


CHAPTER-4 (continued in page 28)

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Edited by shrutisweety - 20 January 2013 at 5:16am

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