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New FF *A different Love Story* Pt11 Pg 23 (Page 10)

Vinnie79 IF-Rockerz

Joined: 13 June 2012
Posts: 5395

Posted: 27 January 2013 at 7:13am | IP Logged
AArthi  a beautiful continuation from you!!  Please continue...IA love  that you kept the original essance of Sugni and Vickram intact!  Great Job keep it up!

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rozie IF-Dazzler

Joined: 11 April 2012
Posts: 4739

Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Well Aarathi, i am surprised that you want us to tell you if ur story is boring, because dear, thats not how i see it, ur story is like one of those romance novel, that once you start reading u just don't want to stop cuz its just too good.
I absolutely admire ur superb writing skills, and the way u r blooming the love story between Vini is so fantastic.
I honestly don't have words to tell you how much i enjoy reading ur FF, i just love it Heart
And can't wait for u to update Smile
And Thanks for the PM

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payal7 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 14 August 2012
Posts: 3669

Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Hi Arti
Another great part of the story. I personally think the story is developing well and its nice to have other things like the factory starting and other characters.
Thank you

Edited by payal7 - 27 January 2013 at 10:11am

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widdy Groupbie

Joined: 06 April 2011
Posts: 67

Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Well,you 3 girls are in the same league!Clap(Ash,Mansi and Vinnie)
Very good creative writing-keep going.Congratulations to all.Thumbs Up
I do hope the cv's of this show open their eyes wide to see how a story should be wriiten-3 different ways and all are interesting!Smile
Not the rubbish we have been subjected to for the last 5-6 months!Angry

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octopie Senior Member

Joined: 07 October 2012
Posts: 317

Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Hi Arti ! Not at all boring to me, I think it's absolutely a great idea that you're putting some other things into the story and not just Sugvi. While their story's seed has already been planted and is growing, there are other situations/events happening and such things will also help understand and see the story better. By doing so, you're also giving their blooming relationship a context.
So, I'm happy, as a reader, to know about other parts of their lives... the factory especially since that's what brought Vickram here and is quite important to him. Through these other happenings, we see qualities of Vickram like just see here, how the manager admired and praised Vickram. seeing that Vickram cares about the villagers as they are facing poverty, that he could help them (and have faith in them) this way at least instead of getting workers from elsewhere and at the same time, he finds his father's dream important to fulfill although he does not have to do so, is it?
so keep it up, Arti ! it's fantastic Embarrassed I loved reading about their inner thoughts too !

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komal07 IF-Dazzler

Joined: 23 April 2007
Posts: 4974

Posted: 27 January 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Aarathi it's not boring at all. I loved each and every detail you gave about characters.You 're doing great jobThumbs Up

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Sandy66 Goldie

Joined: 12 June 2012
Posts: 1647

Posted: 27 January 2013 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
Smile Aarathi, absolutely fantastic, Clap. Love it. Not a boring moment. Anyone can fall
in love with Vickram, he"s charismatic, loving, caring and charming Wink. Please continue,
we're looking forward for Part 5. Awesome job Thumbs Up

Edited by Sandy66 - 27 January 2013 at 3:47pm

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ronshaan IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 04 May 2006
Posts: 25063

Posted: 28 January 2013 at 10:38am | IP Logged
Aarti very Nice..

Good story continue it ...

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