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New FF *A different Love Story* Pt11 Pg 23 (Page 10)

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 6:05am | IP Logged
 aari !  this is beautiful Heart 
so both side kuch-kuch hota hai Wink
aur ye btao aaloo pratha aur bhindhi curry kanhi tumhari  favorite  to nahi hai ? tell me Tongue 

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 7:13am | IP Logged
AArthi  a beautiful continuation from you!!  Please continue...IA love  that you kept the original essance of Sugni and Vickram intact!  Great Job keep it up!

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:00am | IP Logged
Well Aarathi, i am surprised that you want us to tell you if ur story is boring, because dear, thats not how i see it, ur story is like one of those romance novel, that once you start reading u just don't want to stop cuz its just too good.
 
I absolutely admire ur superb writing skills, and the way u r blooming the love story between Vini is so fantastic.
I honestly don't have words to tell you how much i enjoy reading ur FF, i just love it Heart
And can't wait for u to update Smile
 
And Thanks for the PM

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:15am | IP Logged
Hi Arti
 
Another great part of the story. I personally think the story is developing well and its nice to have other things like the factory starting and other characters.
 
Thank you


Edited by payal7 - 27 January 2013 at 10:11am

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:33am | IP Logged
Well,you 3 girls are in the same league!Clap(Ash,Mansi and Vinnie)
Very good creative writing-keep going.Congratulations to all.Thumbs Up
I do hope the cv's of this show open their eyes wide to see how a story should be wriiten-3 different ways and all are interesting!Smile
Not the rubbish we have been subjected to for the last 5-6 months!Angry

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 9:47am | IP Logged
Hi Arti ! Not at all boring to me, I think it's absolutely a great idea that you're putting some other things into the story and not just Sugvi. While their story's seed has already been planted and is growing, there are other situations/events happening and such things will also help understand and see the story better. By doing so, you're also giving their blooming relationship a context.
So, I'm happy, as a reader, to know about other parts of their lives... the factory especially since that's what brought Vickram here and is quite important to him. Through these other happenings, we see qualities of Vickram like just see here, how the manager admired and praised Vickram. seeing that Vickram cares about the villagers as they are facing poverty, that he could help them (and have faith in them) this way at least instead of getting workers from elsewhere and at the same time, he finds his father's dream important to fulfill although he does not have to do so, is it?
so keep it up, Arti ! it's fantastic Embarrassed I loved reading about their inner thoughts too !

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 10:56am | IP Logged
Aarathi it's not boring at all. I loved each and every detail you gave about characters.You 're doing great jobThumbs Up

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Posted: 27 January 2013 at 3:51pm | IP Logged
Smile Aarathi, absolutely fantastic, Clap. Love it. Not a boring moment. Anyone can fall
in love with Vickram, he"s charismatic, loving, caring and charming Wink. Please continue,
we're looking forward for Part 5. Awesome job Thumbs Up

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