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What an update? I read this twice to believe I was actually reading this. I have to hand it to you; the whole thing was handled well. In view of a delicate issue as men eve teasing, you did not delve on it too much to make us uncomfortable but delicately hinted at it. I like that sensitivity in you as a writer.
Shyam, I like in your stories alone and that is huge for me and you better pat yourself on the back for that achievement. I admire the chivalry in the man and the cultured way he handled an obviously difficult situation. He could have taunted Arnav and used the situation to his advantage but did not, that only a gentleman can do.
Anjali is shrewd beyond belief, is in a relationship with Shyam but did not reveal it to her brother; I am so impressed cannot tell you. Her concern for Khushi's wellbeing is not misplaced and that is encouraging to read, sure she has an ulterior motive but she is still sensitive to Khushi and her delicate state.
And their first kiss *sigh* and *sigh* what am I to say, when I can say nothing and that in itself is a rarity. The conversation preceding the kiss was so genuine and heart felt. One accepting the short comings and the other accepting the short comings for what it is and agreeing to a life promised with a lot; love, tears, joy, happiness, fights and everything in between. I so adore the couple now, if I liked Khushi before, now I absolutely love her for her level headedness. She rocks, man'.
Arnav was so sensible and sensitive after the fight, I have to hand it to him, and he did handle the situation the best to his ability. Even the kiss, he made sure it was about Khushi and not just him, more brownie points for that. Yes Khushi, please kiss him good night like that each and every night.
Again, kickass update...have to ask, when is the next one coming up?
PS ' this girl Arya is a darling and sure needs all the love that should come her way. Complan is the best and it gives the adults energy to do a lot more than grow up
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